Maaneet scenes-update on Pg 142 (28/11) - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini_s

Opti.. get the confession soon..

Will get to it in my next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome......it was very touching and beautiful...............pls continueeeeeeee

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Opti

Thanks Sonia. I guess all my scenes here are short because I run out of ideas and need to replenish them on a day-today basis. Will try to update today but am suffering from headache, cold and fever.



I doubt you run out of ideas!! šŸ˜• Maybe you just don't find the ideal way to continue. I write like that as well or rather I did. Do take rest!! Your health is much more important than this. Hope you feel better soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia



I doubt you run out of ideas!! šŸ˜• Maybe you just don't find the ideal way to continue. I write like that as well or rather I did. Do take rest!! Your health is much more important than this. Hope you feel better soon.

Thanks for your concern Sonia.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I just read all the Parts
They are just Amazing
pls continue sooooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
His magnetic eyes held hers firmly as she held her breath in awe of the man who meant the world to her. Time seemed to stand still as the two lovers locked eyes, and although not a word was spoken, their eyes did all the talking. Suddenly she snapped back to the present and realising where she was and who stood in front of her, she took to her heels and hastened out of the church with Maan close behind. He called out to her but she quickened her steps, desperate to get away from him.

Just as she was nearing the gates of the church, there was a loud clap of thunder and a sudden downpour as though even the heavens knew what was in store for them and wept in advance. Being in no mood to enjoy the rains, Geet turned to go back into the church for shelter but instead encountered the barrier of his rock hard solid chest. Before she could get away, he held her by her waist and pulled her closer to him as the raindrops pelted on them with greater force. He wrapped his arms over her head to protect her from the ferocity of the rains and pressed her head against his chest where she heard the steady thumping of his heart. She closed her eyes and lost herself in the moment. The rains soon stopped as suddenly as they started. Her eyes flew open and regaining her composure, she tried to get away again. Maan's arms were too strong though and he refused to let her go.

"Stop struggling, Geet. Who are you trying to escape from?"
"I'm trying to get away from the 'dus sir wala Raavan,'" she hissed as viciously as she could, trying to shrug free from his iron grip but her voice cracked belying her words.
Still holding her tightly around her waist, he smiled mischievously at her and said without batting an eye-lid. "Wish I really was the ten-headed Ravaan. My ten heads would have ten pairs of lips, wouldn't they? I would then be able to use all of them to tirelessly cover you with kisses from head to toe."
Geet looked back at him in shock and blushed a deep red.
"Chalo! With my one pair of lips, let me at least capture those rose pink petals you have for lips."
Before she could react, he swooped down and lifting her chin towards him, he enveloped her lips in a deep kiss which left her in no doubt how deep his desires ran. She went limp in his arms, being too stunned to react at first but soon she regained her bearings and wrenched her lips from his.
"Please let me go!" she pleaded, "Go back to your 'Pari'." She tried to turn away from him so that he does not see her tears.
"You are my Pari, Geet. I thought you would have figured it by now," he said in a voice laden with emotion, and his hands moved to her shoulders as he held her firmly and forced her to turn back towards him. "Geet, don't you know what you mean to me? Don't you know how much I...I..." After a brief hesitation he huskily said the words he had longed to say for so long but couldn't. "how much I love you?"

Geet jerked her head up and her eyes widened when they saw the depth of love reflected in his eyes. While she already knew he was physically attracted to her, she did not realise that he was so deeply and emotionally involved with her as well. She could not meet his gaze and she quickly looked away guiltily.

"Why are you doing this? Why are you running away from your own feelings? Don't you love me?" he asked in a thick voice.
"No!" she yelled, hoping he would not notice the slight tremor in her voice.
"I don't believe you," he declared and holding her face in both his hands, he titled it up to him. "Look at me, Geet," he commanded.

Her eyes were forced to look into his.

"Tell me you don't love me."

"I....I .... don't..." she fumbled as she couldn't go through with the lie as long as his gaze held hers in captivity.

"Your eyes cannot lie, Geet. So don't even try to lie with your lips because I won't believe you."
Her eyes started filling up fast and she blinked back the tears furiously.

"I....I...can't love you," she said sorrowfully.

Maan looked at her in surprise. 'What did she mean by that?' he thought and he raised his eyebrows quizzically.
Steeling herself, she said as impassively as possible. "In your own words, you are a man who seeks perfection even in a file. Then how can I let your life be anything less than perfect? You deserve a much better woman in your life than me, for I am not perfect."

"I know you are not perfect but then neither am I. So that makes two of us. I'm sure that together we will make a perfect couple. Two negatives make a positive, remember?" He tried to lighten the mood.

"You don't understand me," she said pleadingly. "I don't want my past to stain your future."

Maan's thoughts flew to her travails in Hoshiarpur. 'So she seems to have still not gotten over her bitter past, whatever that may be,' he thought.

He did not want her to dwell on her past as he knew that it only brought her pain.

"I don't care about your past, Geet. I want to share your present and your future," he said fervently.

"But my present and my future are linked to my past," she said enigmatically.

He looked at her in confusion.

"Geet, I only want you."

"But that is exactly what I am trying to say. I am not alone," she said in a voice that threatened to crack with emotion.

"I don't understand," he murmured, not able to comprehend her riddled statements.
"I have a life within me." After hesitating a brief moment, she expelled her breath and finally whispered, "I am pregnant!"
Although her words were barely audible, they resonated in his ears again and again, the sound getting louder with every successive round.
He looked at her in shock as he felt his heart shatter into a million pieces, causing him to ache immensely.

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Edited by Opti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Opti...I read all the six parts in one shot...You have outdone yourself this time..

I liked the build up, which seems to be your forte in writing - the moments which lead to final confession is always exceptionally written and so is the case here too...

I hope he does not take the whole thing wrong way without hearing out an explanation from her..

Waiting for next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Wow Opti...I read all the six parts in one shot...You have outdone yourself this time..

I liked the build up, which seems to be your forte in writing - the moments which lead to final confession is always exceptionally written and so is the case here too...

I hope he does not take the whole thing wrong way without hearing out an explanation from her..

Waiting for next part!
S

Thanks Sookie. Glad you like my dramatisation. Was not too sure how this scene will turn out because I have not been keeping well since yesterday (cold, cough and fever).
Although I am not much of a sucker for dramatics, I do resort to them in climaxes, just to keep the interest. Lets see what happens to Maan and Geet next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nooo!!! Why must Maan heart break? why can't he be strong and ask questions to find out what exactly happened?

I hope he doesn't walk away from her and finds out the truth.

Looking forward to the next update.

Polki
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Poli.Geek

Nooo!!! Why must Maan heart break? why can't he be strong and ask questions to find out what exactly happened?

I hope he doesn't walk away from her and finds out the truth.

Looking forward to the next update.

Polki

Maan was in a state of shock. He had just confessed his love to the woman of his dreams and has been told that she is pregnant. I think that is enough to shatter even the strongest man.

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