Maaneet scenes-update on Pg 142 (28/11)

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This is a scene in continuation from my earlier scene posted here:
Maan opened the employees' file and looked at the smiling passport photograph of Geet pasted in her employee record. Tracing her lips on the photograph with his fingers, he smiled ruefully. When Geet had come to him with the photographs of the girls he had not bothered to even look at them but instead riled her by letting her think that he does not like girls fitting her description. Dadima, being as smart as she is, immediately saw through his veiled comments and challenged him to meet a girl of her choice. While he was not too keen to do so, he played along to keep Dadima in good spirits.

Geet, Dadima's new assistant in 'Mission Maan Marriage', had brought the new girl along and introduced her as Parineeta. The girl interjected and added that her friends called her 'Pari'. Maan made a mental note to call her only Parineeta, for he neither wanted to be her friend nor her spouse. Geet gave him a meaningful look as if to say that she did manage to get him a 'pari' as she had promised. Although Maan understood her unspoken thoughts, he merely rolled his eyes and sighed.

Parineeta turned out to be a young, pretty, smart, modern, vivacious and engaging girl, full of life and bubbling with happiness. Dadima insisted that Maan take her along to all the business dinners he attented. While he could not go against his Dadima's wishes, Maan always made sure that Geet, in her capacity as his secretary, was also part of the entourage. This way he not only could keep Geet close to him but also watch her reaction to his proximity to Parineeta. When Geet was around, he always made sure he was extra sweet to Parineeta, flattering her looks and praising her manners, but the minute she stepped out of sight, he was back to his grumpy self, totally ignoring the poor girl. This was because he did not want to lead Parineeta on and give her false hopes but at the same time he wanted to make Geet feel jealous and make her admit that she cared for him much more than she would admit. Parineeta, being the smart girl she is, quickly caught on to what was in Maan's mind. As she had taken a genuine liking to Geet, she decided to play along in the hope of getting the two together.

Geet found it difficult to cope with this new situation. While her mind kept reasoning with herself that the new girl was just the right life partner for Maan, her heart could not help but feel pangs of jealousy seeing them together. She felt increasing lonely in a crowd.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow..that was cool...please write more...
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hey plzzzz continue i guess this is goona happen
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yes...very well written👏...dis shud happen...it's lovely.😉
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that would be a treat to watch =)
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Originally posted by: srkads

yes...very well written👏...dis shud happen...it's lovely.😉

Thanks. I did not write much of a scene, maybe half a scene I think. But gald you liked it.
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Originally posted by: premeena

that would be a treat to watch =)

thanks. Lets see what they give us.
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Thank you
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plz keep talking................at least during the weekends. Your scenes are soothing our souls. We are the only people who love monday whereas the whole world is crazy about saturday!!! Thanks for being here.

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Originally posted by: taqdir

plz keep talking................at least during the weekends. Your scenes are soothing our souls. We are the only people who love monday whereas the whole world is crazy about saturday!!! Thanks for being here.



Thanks. I understand the feeling - of waiting for the weekend to get by. Thought I'll stay away from this illness after my Michi madness but I guess have fallen prey yet again. This time, to Maaneet madness.

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