Maaneet scenes-update on Pg 142 (28/11)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

Still holding her tightly around her waist, he smiled mischievously at her and said without batting an eye-lid. "Wish I really was the ten-headed Ravaan. My ten heads would have ten pair of lips, wouldn't they? I would then be able to use all of them to tirelessly cover you with kisses from head to toe."

LOL... what a reply... 👏

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Opti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: yasu09
Still holding her tightly around her waist, he smiled mischievously at her and said without batting an eye-lid. "Wish I really was the ten-headed Ravaan. My ten heads would have ten pair of lips, wouldn't they? I would then be able to use all of them to tirelessly cover you with kisses from head to toe."

LOL... what a reply... 👏

Thanks Yasu.

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Julie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#113

awesome!!!! can't wait for the next update!!!

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Anum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#114

awsum!!!!

dat kiss was hoT!!!!!

i want maan to support geet!!!!

update sooN!!!

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Downhill

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Posted: 15 years ago

#115

In writing, we don't have the option of great physical gestures or facial expressions.

Everything we do relies on words. Therefore, the words must be powerful enough to stand on their own.

They must be strong enough to place the reader in the story; to make them feel as if they are in the very shoes of the one who wrote or experienced it............. and u surely master that art................ 👏👏👏👏

fabuloussssss...........

waiting for more updates

thnxxxxxx dear

reva

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Zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

Awesome piece of writing sweety...
Would love to read more...
Continue soon and please add me in to your PM list!!!

Take Care
Zoya

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Sonia Bhalla

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Posted: 15 years ago

#117

Nice part!! I really enjoyed his confession and her angst. The lines of My future is linked with my past and I am not alone, I can easily see in the show. I am sure this is what it will play out life with the initial shock but hopefully an eventual understanding and compassion.

"Wish I really was the ten-headed Ravaan. My ten heads would have ten pair of lips, wouldn't they? I would then be able to use all of them to tirelessly cover you with kisses from head to toe." 😆