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Posted: 14 years ago
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As she rushed out of the hotel, her tears brimming over and blurring her vision, she wiped them away roughly and looked around her. She caught sight of an old and beautiful church right across the road. Her feet automatically took her to the entrance of the church. As she stood uncertainly at the front door she recollected that whenever she was emotionally disturbed or confused about something, she always found her peace/answers in a place of worship, be it at the Golden temple in Amritsar where she was given the divine guidance to keep her baby or the dargah in Nizamuddin where she realized the depth of her feelings of the man who was her knight in shining armour. In the hope of finding the peace and solace and more importantly the strength to follow through with her decision to leave him, she entered in and looked around the empty church.
Larger than life statues of various saints were mounted in the corners of the church. The walls of the church were filled with beautiful murals of the life and time of Jesus Christ. The windows were fitted with beautiful stained glasses which shone in the lights streaming from the large chandeliers hanging from the high dome shaped ceiling of the church. Her eyes caught sight of the breathtakingly beautiful statue which stood near the altar. It was a large statue of Mother Mary with baby Jesus in her arms. Something in the eyes of the woman in the statue compelled her to move towards it of her own accord. It seemed like Mother Mary was looking at her with tranquility and understanding. Geet's eyes quickly filled up with tears and as her eyes ran from the mother to the baby in her arms, her hand involuntarily went to her stomach as if to caress the unborn baby she herself was carrying. She flung her arms around the feet of Mother Mary and closing her eyes tight, she whimpered loudly as all her emotions just took over her.

Her heart silently cried out, 'Ma, you know how much I love him but I cannot admit it to anyone, not even to myself, because I have lost the right to love a man. Yet, I feel pain when I see him with another woman. Give me the strength to let go of this intense feeling of love and possessiveness I feel for him and redirect all my energy to bringing my baby into this world and giving it all the attention and love it deserves.'

She was so absorbed in her own turmoil that she did not see the man she loved walk up behind her and tentatively put out his hand to touch her shoulder. He withdrew his hand in the last minute and looked at her first in confusion which soon turned into compassion and love.

When Maan saw Geet rush out of the hotel he ran behind her. Before he could reach her, though, she had vanished from his sight. He looked up and down the road outside the hotel, wondering which direction she would have taken. His eye then caught sight of the large church across the road and on an intuition he crossed over and entered the church. He heaved a sigh of relief when he finally located her as she knelt near the altar, clinging to the feet of the statue of Mother Mary. Approaching her closer, he saw that her cheeks were stained with long streaks of tears. He was alarmed to see her in so much of pain. Something was apparently troubling her and it appeared to be much more than her envy of seeing Parineeta in his arms. He couldn't put his finger to it but he felt it had to do with her painful past in Hoshiarpur. He decided to let her release all her pain. Maybe this could give her some relief, he thought. He walked up to the pew and kneeling down, closed his eyes and fervently prayed that all her pain and sorrow be washed and she gets all the happiness in the world.

She did not know how long she knelt crying in front of the statue. When she finally opened her eyes and turned around to leave, she froze in shock seeing the man she loved stare at her unwaveringly, with an unreadable expression in his eyes.

Continued here

Edited by Opti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia

Yep, morning sounds about right!! 😆 Whats your name btw or do you just go by Opti??

You can call me Opti. More used to it here.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tatavarthi

Hello Opti, i used to read all your ff in the michi forum when kayamath was on.I used to love ur daily updates.Now Iam hooked maneet.I really like your scenario ,hope the serial goes the same way

Thanks Tatavarthi. Were you one of my silent readers? Well, those were the days when my Michi madness was running high when I used to sometimes update more than once a day. Now I'm quite out of touch and attempting to test my writing skills again.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaaranya

OMG u stopped at such a crucial part!!
upd8 soon

Posted the next update. Sorry if it again at a crucial part that I've stopped.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...completely loved it!!! please continue

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: revav

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee dear....

fabulous sequence penned down by you..............u r a natural writer...........
reva

Thanks Reva. Good to know you still think I can write!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: MaanEET_FAN

simply awesome!!!!! 👏 👏

Thanks MaaEET FAN. Have posted the next update on pg 14.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Superb.. Will you please send all of them to CV's, because it's so good!

WOW OPTI. Thatr;s all I can!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very beautiful part.. luved it... do continue soon
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church scene is so beautiful!!! Thnaks for updating..just love it!!!!!!!

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