Maaneet scenes-update on Pg 142 (28/11) - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

I am angry with u! Twin bolti hai aur PM bhi nahi kiya 😡😡😡...

I read all the scenes in one shot--- u ve captured sooo many emotions beautifully and Maan being mischevious- oh I am soo loving it.. Raavan so he could have 10 lips for her ha ha ha ..That had me rolling in laughter.. Dadima too--->she knows whats in his mind but still wants Pari to come in--devious mind 😆😆😆...
Geet- I could just feel her pain 😭😭... She was like 2 sets of horses pulling her in different directions.. She was torn with the feelings that asundered her very being!! (God soooo dramatic **rolling eyes**)
And Maan's reaction to that revelation perfect- How would someone react to that word ! She gave no explaination just said it !! What should he think? He was at the peak of his emotions and how soon his dreams gathered dust at his feet...
Overall an emotionally charged scene- I loved the way u build it up to a cresendo and then wham and I see u incorporated the church too 😉😉

Sorry, I thought you caught sight of this thread but then I looked again and there was no imprint of you ever having visited it. So PMed you.
Glad you liked my scenes. I normally dont write such piece meal stuff (have written only full fledged FFs) but as I said, due to time constraint, I decided to atleast pen my thoughts of what I would like to see for Maaneet. Having taken this direction, I'm now trying to take it to its logical conclusion.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

omg that was awesome plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue

thanks sweet cherry.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely.ravs

omg.........this is really good plzzz continue.......

Thanks lovely ravs.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sssiham

Amazing Opti. Waiting for u to continue..

Thanks. Since I'm not feeling well now, I'll try to post the next update tomorrow if I get better. As the next update is crucial for the story, dont want to hurry up on it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
No sorry Opti... Just like the rain I too was lost in the Maaneet moments- Where is the place for anger or for being upset 😆😆😆...
Eiwe hi parishaan kar rahi thi and u fell for it 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
oops... let them get together soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

No sorry Opti... Just like the rain I too was lost in the Maaneet moments- Where is the place for anger or for being upset 😆😆😆...

Eiwe hi parishaan kar rahi thi and u fell for it 😉

I was pulling your leg too! It takes two to tango!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini_s

oops... let them get together soon..

All I will say now is I'm not much of a sadist. Lets see what happens.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Opti

I was pulling your leg too! It takes two to tango!

My god - chupa rustam 😆😆... Tangy flavors in Maaneet Love and we doing tango ----> lame jokes 😆😆😆..Loved today's epi 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

My god - chupa rustam 😆😆... Tangy flavors in Maaneet Love and we doing tango ----> lame jokes 😆😆😆..Loved today's epi 😍

Yeah, Maan was so hot and cool at the same time. Love his new soft husky tone. His eyes are also more mesmerising and smoldering at the same time. Poor Geet, can well imagine how difficult it must be to keep her senses.
Aside: Malaria seems to have made Guru hotter.

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