He creates history and hands me a miracle (OS)

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Sookie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: -honeydew-
"How do you always find the resonance that I have left behind? You scrape through the residue of my existence in a particular moment and you find my penultimate footsteps without a hitch. "

"Today, he gives up staying in his territory and walks into mine.

Today, he surrenders to everything he has always felt, for one moment. In that moment, I surrender too...
Today, he tells me exactly what his intentions are.
And today, I want to accept what he is to me."

It was HIM. All him.

And at that moment, my life started to make sense, for the first time.

I did not give him a reply. He did not ask for one nor did he expect one.

He set the perimeters of our relationship.

He laid down the basic fundamentals and the primary brickwork.

He created history and handed me a miracle.

Sookie, if i had the best possible visuals of two of the most intense lovers on tv at the moment, your description of it made me even more restless after reading it...
it was beautiful... the lines that i marked above, left me asking for more.. sorry, i dozed off ! but, i could see it all, feel feel from Geet's side... for days now, i have been toying with the idea of writing something called "in her shoes" ... where i talk of Geets inner most feelings for Maan... after reading this, however, i feel, i have found what i was looking for, cos, when i write, i rediscover feelings deep inside myself about something... your description took it to another well...

brilliantly awesome!

love,
niha

Mucho thanks for your comment Niha. I have not done Geet's POV till now and last night's episode somehow belonged solely to her. I think the design itself was that way...So I wrote it from her POV.
Thanks for liking it Niha :-)

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Hey sookie*
After seeing yesterday's episode..i so wanted to read it from ur side and here i get with wonderful pics and lovely penned..
U have expressed each emotion each part so beautifully that whole song seems to be in blur mode for me and u r each word ringing as i see this scene again..
Its sweet,romantic..beautiful..lovely..et all..Do continue!!
Please make a VM of this scene(n the gurudwara one)if possibe..would love to see u r take..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

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tanu

@Armu4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

*FAINTS*......omg omg omggggggggggggg ...sookie 🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪 super freaking haawwttttttttttttttttttttttt ...OS..just too good...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Rocking stuff girl..............keep rockingggg ❤️

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: jasw
OMG! This is awesome! 👏

Thank you very much.!!

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Do not Tell

@bDgT

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

- Sookie- Thank you! I couldn't have voiced it with this simplicity nor this sanguine. I am gonna differ from everyone's view. You should NOT continue this. It is best as it is!

It is unique, it stands out, it is perfect. Even one additional word could take away the pristine quality of these words.

Hate me, berate me, but it is like eagles learning to suddenly squawk like ducks if you doll it up with more words.

- Luv
Bridge

(That was for the original piece in Page 1) (Not aware if you already added to it in some other page - this morning is not my serene place - so I shall see where else you have written and what else is there in the other pages after a while)

Edited by bDgT - 14 years ago

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sri_4
Hey sookie*
After seeing yesterday's episode..i so wanted to read it from ur side and here i get with wonderful pics and lovely penned..
U have expressed each emotion each part so beautifully that whole song seems to be in blur mode for me and u r each word ringing as i see this scene again..
Its sweet,romantic..beautiful..lovely..et all..Do continue!!
Please make a VM of this scene(n the gurudwara one)if possibe..would love to see u r take..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

Sri,

Thank you so much for the comment...am glad you liked it...
Yeah, this is kind of slowing down, taking time in each step and penning down what she feels...
Continue to what Sri? Its one of its kind episode...its better to left it such, no?

VM? Not this week...will try for next week...I am writing Infinity :-)

S

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sonia khan

@sonia_koolkhan

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

: I Hven't any word 2 tell u dat how much ur topic touch my heart n soul. Each n every word of ur topic iz spell bound . Itz absolutely a master piece. I read it again n again n still want 2 read again. I cannot describe in word dat how much I love it. Thank u so much 4rm bottom of my heart 4 ur brilliant writing piece . Plz keep giving us an opportunity 2 appreciate ur work again an again.

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@spln

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

so i postponed reading of this piece to until i'd have watched the episode ... it was quit the fit - i want to now turn back a little into time read this before watching and see the difference but alas! that can't be undone ...

there are parts of it which just flow like a verse, disjoint in ode to their unsteady emotions ... there are parts just simply put forth - i like the latter a tad more, in this piece ...

my favorite line - in that split moment, he touches his forehead to mine.

It was endearing and it bought a tear to my eye.

It was one confession acknowledging another.

i did wish, well - that i'd read just the piece minus the pictures ... even though i'd already seen the episode, i like to conjure images of my own when i read - maybe that answers something of my dislike for graphic novels? i think, it may just be the reason!

well written nonetheless - its a marvel to me how a piece can be written from a thought thats not ones own - i always have trouble - being given a situation and asked to write - i like how easy u make it look, when i know better otherwise!

cheers,
nj

ps: @ur gmail chat status - waddup?! ur quite the flu catching birdie :| tc!

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
*FAINTS*......omg omg omggggggggggggg ...sookie 🤪 super freaking haawwttttttttttttttttttttttt ...OS..just too good...👏

Rocking stuff girl..............keep rockingggg ❤️

Thank you soo much!! :-)

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: bDgT
- Sookie- Thank you! I couldn't have voiced it with this simplicity nor this sanguine. I am gonna differ from everyone's view. You should NOT continue this. It is best as it is!

It is unique, it stands out, it is perfect. Even one additional word could take away the pristine quality of these words.

Hate me, berate me, but it is like eagles learning to suddenly squawk like ducks if you doll it up with more words.

- Luv
Bridge

(That was for the original piece in Page 1) (Not aware if you already added to it in some other page - this morning is not my serene place - so I shall see where else you have written and what else is there in the other pages after a while)

Thank you so much for the comment Bridgette...This is a OS and will not be continued. The earlier mention was there because the first post was not finished. I had left it halfway and asked if I should leave it at that point or to utilize the entire sequence of him putting her earring stuff.

And I know what you mean.

A story will have to go on as far as it has to go. Not a word more not a word less.

Thanks!
S

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