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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Poli.Geek
Should you continue? YES YES YES

This was so beautiful. Loved how you added the pics also.

Loved your other work to from Geet's perspective. Huge fan here.

Thank you so much...I updated the original post...so its now complete... :-)

Do drop by!

Thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: rushtrip
spell bound, transfixed in your words...
that cut deep in me like swords...

i try to shake myself out of the stupor
if i can breathe again that would be super...

Gosh! Your response is darn creative...thank you soo much!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
of course continue!!! What kind of question is that?? lol

Done! Updated! Finito!

:-) Thanks for the comment :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

OHMIGOD!!!!! loved it!! and keep writing its sooooooooooo gud!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Mallika113
Wow, Sookie , so beautiful ! Love it.

Thank you very much Mallika,,

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Fatima82
hi

only 4 post i hav done

but your writting has forceed me to say AMazing that was absolutely one of brilliant piece i have come across.

please do continue

loveed each and every word of it...

Thank you Fatima.

I have updated the post, so please do check...

Thanks again for your comments..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: *angel94*
Beutifully written, would love to read more!

Thanks! But this is just an OS...and its finished... :-) More writing next week :-)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Maneetforever
OHMIGOD!!!!! loved it!! and keep writing its sooooooooooo gud!!

Thank you so much!!! :-)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

just when the breath had returned, a temporary bliss
whoosh it went again in a hiss..

Had to come again near the fire
thinking i had assuaged my desire

it burned, it singed, it scorched
though it lit a fire in me like a torch...

brilliant...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

OMG !U MADE ME CRY.THE WAY U DESCRIBED IT,PHENOMENAL.I M IN LOVE WITH THIS EMOTION OF LOVE.U COMPLETELY JUSTIFIED IT THE WAY IT WAS BEAUTIFULLY SHOWN.

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