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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

i like how u have studied their psych.👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by 1kaarzoo - 14 years ago

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Garima

@ScatteredCastle

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

God, Sookie... you're really a superstar. That was freaking awesome. I really really love it. The words moved in sync; scene by scene, this grew intresting. I'm not a Maan-Geet fan, oops phan, but this could not have been better. Really.

I'm glad you wrote this from Geet's perspective. Ususally, I get to read the strories by Maan's point of view... but this had to be from Geet's.

The words you put in, were simple, but elegantly used... That's what I really like about you. You create magic with words... seriously. Big Phan here. ... :)

Chalo, Finally you're updating Infinity, No, I haven't completed reading it yet, but still you're back at AR... so, Lady Bug's really very happy. :D

Love you really much :D

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: rushtrip
just when the breath had returned, a temporary bliss
whoosh it went again in a hiss..

Had to come again near the fire
thinking i had assuaged my desire

it burned, it singed, it scorched
though it lit a fire in me like a torch...

brilliant...

And my gosh....your comment is again awesome...
Thank you so much!

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: zoya-shah
OMG !U MADE ME CRY.THE WAY U DESCRIBED IT,PHENOMENAL.I M IN LOVE WITH THIS EMOTION OF LOVE.U COMPLETELY JUSTIFIED IT THE WAY IT WAS BEAUTIFULLY SHOWN.

Thank you very much for the comment Zoya. I am glad you liked it...

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

You wrote about Geet being rendered breathless...you did the same with your post dear..I was breathless,speechless,mesmerized ....oh well clearly running out of words to explain emotions...Thanks a lot Sookie..good going👏👏👏

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-honeydew-

@-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

"How do you always find the resonance that I have left behind? You scrape through the residue of my existence in a particular moment and you find my penultimate footsteps without a hitch. "

"Today, he gives up staying in his territory and walks into mine.

Today, he surrenders to everything he has always felt, for one moment. In that moment, I surrender too...
Today, he tells me exactly what his intentions are.
And today, I want to accept what he is to me."

It was HIM. All him.

And at that moment, my life started to make sense, for the first time.

I did not give him a reply. He did not ask for one nor did he expect one.

He set the perimeters of our relationship.

He laid down the basic fundamentals and the primary brickwork.

He created history and handed me a miracle.

Sookie, if i had the best possible visuals of two of the most intense lovers on tv at the moment, your description of it made me even more restless after reading it...
it was beautiful... the lines that i marked above, left me asking for more.. sorry, i dozed off ! but, i could see it all, feel feel from Geet's side... for days now, i have been toying with the idea of writing something called "in her shoes" ... where i talk of Geets inner most feelings for Maan... after reading this, however, i feel, i have found what i was looking for, cos, when i write, i rediscover feelings deep inside myself about something... your description took it to another well...

brilliantly awesome!

love,
niha

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo
i like how u have studied their psych.👏

Thank you very much!

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jasw

@jasw

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

OMG! This is awesome! 👏

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Angel-Pebby
God, Sookie... you're really a superstar. That was freaking awesome. I really really love it. The words moved in sync; scene by scene, this grew intresting. I'm not a Maan-Geet fan, oops phan, but this could not have been better. Really.

I'm glad you wrote this from Geet's perspective. Ususally, I get to read the strories by Maan's point of view... but this had to be from Geet's.

The words you put in, were simple, but elegantly used... That's what I really like about you. You create magic with words... seriously. Big Phan here. ... :)

Chalo, Finally you're updating Infinity, No, I haven't completed reading it yet, but still you're back at AR... so, Lady Bug's really very happy. :D

Love you really much :D

I am glad I made Lady Bug happy :-) Glad you liked it...
You my Phan? oohhh---aaahhh....then read Infinity!!! Because till that is updated, am not writing anything else :D

Yeah, actually by my standards, Infinity is getting a quick update...since the longest due was I think more than 6 months :D

Do read it!!!

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: tanya_vi
You wrote about Geet being rendered breathless...you did the same with your post dear..I was breathless,speechless,mesmerized ....oh well clearly running out of words to explain emotions...Thanks a lot Sookie..good going👏👏👏

Thanks Tanya... Good to see your comment...

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