He creates history and hands me a miracle (OS) - Page 6

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Johanne, this episode solely belongs to Geet. I cannot take that away from her. It did not even occur to me to write in Maan's point of view because the entire setup was leading towards the realization that she was going to have.

Maan, for the first time took a tiny step back and allowed the subtle Geet to grow and go through the things he has already faced. It was marvelous how it was handled.

This is my first ever Geet's POV writing, apart from the ones that I write for fun (The interview and the analysis)

But, since you asked, if there is an episode which you liked the most where you wish to see Maan's POV done in similar fashion, please do let me know. I will try. But for this episode, I truly apologize.

Thanks..
Sookie

Originally posted by: spln

so i postponed reading of this piece to until i'd have watched the episode ... it was quit the fit - i want to now turn back a little into time read this before watching and see the difference but alas! that can't be undone ...

there are parts of it which just flow like a verse, disjoint in ode to their unsteady emotions ... there are parts just simply put forth - i like the latter a tad more, in this piece ...

my favorite line - in that split moment, he touches his forehead to mine.

It was endearing and it bought a tear to my eye.

It was one confession acknowledging another.

i did wish, well - that i'd read just the piece minus the pictures ... even though i'd already seen the episode, i like to conjure images of my own when i read - maybe that answers something of my dislike for graphic novels? i think, it may just be the reason!

well written nonetheless - its a marvel to me how a piece can be written from a thought thats not ones own - i always have trouble - being given a situation and asked to write - i like how easy u make it look, when i know better otherwise!

cheers,
nj

ps: @ur gmail chat status - waddup?! ur quite the flu catching birdie :| tc!

Originally posted by: Hiba282

WOW!!! 😃 its amazing and beautiful and WOW!!! 😍

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Sri,

Thank you so much for the comment...am glad you liked it...
Yeah, this is kind of slowing down, taking time in each step and penning down what she feels...
Continue to what Sri? Its one of its kind episode...its better to left it such, no?

Yes..this is one of kind..but I was thinking that u continue these kind of posts with pics..hoping for some lovely episode soon where u can write in this style again..it so beautifully expressed😃

VM? Not this week...will try for next week...I am writing Infinity :-)

Its ok..will be satisfied with Infinity as for now..😆but do try if u have time.. 😃

S

Omggg i really don't know what to say. Outstandingly written👍🏼, you're an awsome writer😉. I'm still in awe and amazement😍 You made this scene so different from it's original one. Love how you went into so much depth of this. Truely amazing👏👏 Really liked this bit ...i really hope you write more of these😃

Good work Sook.
You think this will work :D
Dream on Sister!

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues

Oye!!! Mujh jaise writers ka to satynash. lo, pad gaya pura. 😛 To be frank, I was melting in a puddle of jealousy. but topless maan ke liye maaf karti hoon. 😉