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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

bunnie culd'nt u do this"emotional sar ghooming in maan direction attyachaar" on maan. Geet ko bkash do no uske baby ko ...........lol

well written the song selction n imagination is so apt!!!

jus reminds me of hw we maneetians suffer:P

keep writing moree u r goona write ff so better pm me!!!

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mysterygurl1427

@mysterygurl1427

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u 1000 times!!!!!

Really sweet of u to give us this treat!!!!! I loved it......yea it was sad....but it was cute to see Geet pining for maan.....like how he was in his office last week lol

but i loved it....the descriptions....the whole thing was just amazing!!!! thank u for the pm yaar!!!

-shivani

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Manal Ali

@.YixingsManal.

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

OMFG tht was So Sad 😔 n guess wah wen i was readin this i could actuallly imagiine the scene n how its happenin this shows what an amazin Writter u r 👍🏼 Loved it

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Luved it Zee.... imagine if we started getting so much dose of Maan....Geet imagining him in the kitchen, in the bedroom....and kissing...OMG humara kya haal hoga..........................Adored this oneshot of urs dear

And Happy Friendships Day

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

That was extremely beautiful....and the song you chose was just perfect..

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Naina

@-naina-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

really beautiful....everything was soo serene....so amazing....loved it.....

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ash08

@ash08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

That was so beautiful and sad at the same time Zee.....

The song selection was perfect and your writing style fabulous. It was a perfect treat.

Thanks dear and a Happy Friendship Day to you too.....