Zee's Oneshot- I'm Here, Here, Here... - Page 4

Originally posted by: revav

omggggggggggggggg..i was crying with geeet...

ur FF made me cry dear😭😭😭😭😭.......such an emotional sequence penned down so beautifully by u..............

it was heartwrenching to see geet this way........

never imagined i wud be crying jus by reading a emotional sequence...................

tum toh kamaal ka likhti ho........

thnxxxxxxxx for the friendship day gift. yaar..............

reva😲

Originally posted by: Nanthini9

that was sooo sad....cud u write a happy one now? plzzz....i hope maan does not leave geet lyke this.

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

omg that was super good

Originally posted by: JULIEL

OMG !!! That was awesome!!!

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

Yayyy you wrote another OS 😃
I'll be back with my comments soon
reserved

Edited:
OMG ZeeZee you outdo yourself each time! 😃 Amazing! ⭐️
That was so beautifully written! 👏 And so sad
I can actually imagine something like that happening in the show
Geet thinking of Maan and imagining him everywhere was very well described! 👍🏼
And the song went so well with the scene!
Well Done Zee you little bundle of talent! Loved reading every bit of it!
Couldn't ask for a better friendship day gift....eventhough i've never heard of it either 😆

Originally posted by: Sofna

BEAUTIFUL!!!!🤗

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

omgggg zee that was amazing i loved how u portrayed the emotions it was sad and i loved how u used the song within ur OS

loved it!!!!

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

bunnie culd'nt u do this"emotional sar ghooming in maan direction attyachaar" on maan. Geet ko bkash do no uske baby ko ...........lol

well written the song selction n imagination is so apt!!!

jus reminds me of hw we maneetians suffer:P

keep writing moree u r goona write ff so better pm me!!!

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u 1000 times!!!!!

Really sweet of u to give us this treat!!!!! I loved it......yea it was sad....but it was cute to see Geet pining for maan.....like how he was in his office last week lol

but i loved it....the descriptions....the whole thing was just amazing!!!! thank u for the pm yaar!!!

-shivani