Zee's Oneshot- I'm Here, Here, Here... - Page 3

Very beautiful... very nicely penned down.. gr8 OS..

Loved it...very vividly written...I felt as if I were a fly on the wall...watching Geet. Loved how you penned her despair...my heart bleeds for her!!!

I'm happy as well as sad while reading it.
Veryyyyy beautifullyyyyy written.
It was sad as well as romantic.
Plzzz write more maneet os.
Next time happy one.



Fatima

I was on this forum at 3am at night almost falling asleep!

omg zee u hv taken me to another world wid ur wordz 😍
geet imagining maan doing such passionte things loved the part where she thinks maan embracing her frm behind 😳
u r a true gem i appreciate ur creative skills 👏
love!
bye 😊

hey

that was a really good os, but very sad 😔
felt sorry for geet
lol you should write a happy one now 😃

Maheen xx

That was too senti

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

resreved Edited 😃

Yay im firsttttt 😆 ( yet not the 1st one to reply but still 😃 )

Yaar That was Maha sad 😭😭

But So Beautifully written, love ur writing style a lot 👏

Love the way u depicted her sadness 👏👏👏

The song was very much appropriate.

Thanks for those lovely romantic scenes in between, which helped a lot to enlighten the serious atmosphere 😳😳

Jani due to the lovely scenes happening in Geet, all those lovey dovey scenes, i forgot what was going to happen.

You just throw a bombshell on my head and awakened me from my romantic cloud 😆

but i really wish that it happened teh way u describes, with some scenes like Geet imagining Maan everywhere 😳

In a nutshell, that was a " zor ka jhtaka dheere se" 😉👏👏

Keep it up jana,

Do write more OS 😃

Love,

Humera 🤗

Originally posted by: Chotii

OMG please someone help me from blushin/smiling/saying awww out of happiness and sadness..
zeee what have u done???? !!!!!!! damn, i simply adore ur writing style!! i swear this is SO well written i cant praise u enough!! i could picture everything so vivdly!!!! amayyyyyyyzing os! and omg my fav of urs now!!! 😃 😃
damn girl!! this was hot and beautiful all at once! and so it was This song that got u writing? wow. how apt it is for the situation u wrote, and for the feelings it provoked in geet... omg i would actually die if the cv's got maneet to perform this.. omg!! for the first time too in ANY ff/os i actually read the lyrics in between the scnes.. zee the lyrics fit the situation perfectly as well as enhancing the intensity and heeeeeat in the os! u created sum extrememly *wowwww* moments 😆 each time they shared a different romantic moment and that was just fantastic! i read that twice before commenting cos i just wanted to relive all the amazingness again! its got a brilliant idea to it too, love the way u opened it, explaining whats happened and everything for her to be in pinkys home again - and ohh pinky! my gosh zee, u made pinky the sweetest thing ever in this - love her for being a great friend and giving geet the support she needed for the pain shes going through. i love the way this song inspired u to giv us a maneet take on it, and omg.. the end with geet crying fiercely, as though in physical pain from helplessly thinking of maan.. zee.. 😭 i got that lump in my throat.. (same feeling i got when i watchd preity holding shabbo was it in the movie? lol) that is one incredibly powerful moment in the os and hats off to u woman! an amazingly written piece on maneet, threading different moments together so beautifully to create such an outstanding os! it makes so much sense for this to be part of the show - i want the cv's to read it too just for fun lol ufffff zeee its mindblowing!!! love u for it tons n tons!!!
(going for another read me says 😉) xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

**sorry here for another edit cos i forgot to say... the imaginary candle is placed for celebration.. (i forgot bout celebration after geet up there... but we still gotta party cos this is jus wow!) plz blow it so we can now finally eat the cake, i'm not even joking i havent even let anyone touch it - everyone at home thinks im being a right freak.. but chaddo i need u to blow the candle! quik zee saz wants this yummy yummy in my tummy! lol by the way, i reluctantly let maan go.. having read this ff u deserve abita maan time as well as cake 😉 xxx

Originally posted by: salma434

zaahhhraaaaaa i started reading this b4 i got ur pm hhehe. its fabbbb. loved how you used the in the entire OS. I can see you have worked really hard on this. it def worth the wait hun and me asking u about a trillion times😆 i did not want it do end lol yep i know i am so greedy😆 i can't wait til u start writing the FF. fab work gal keep it up!!!