Zee's Oneshot- I'm Here, Here, Here... - Page 6

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Loved it...very vividly written...I felt as if I were a fly on the wall...watching Geet. Loved how you penned her despair...my heart bleeds for her!!!

Originally posted by: pickachu

I'm happy as well as sad while reading it.
Veryyyyy beautifullyyyyy written.
It was sad as well as romantic.
Plzzz write more maneet os.
Next time happy one.



Fatima

Originally posted by: -Sonia-xx

I was on this forum at 3am at night almost falling asleep!

Then i got to this topic and damn! My sleep was lost somewhere in the air and got lost imagining every word written here!

It was really really great!

Thanks for sharing and do continue to write moreee! 😛

Originally posted by: aree

omg zee u hv taken me to another world wid ur wordz 😍
geet imagining maan doing such passionte things loved the part where she thinks maan embracing her frm behind 😳
u r a true gem i appreciate ur creative skills 👏
love!
bye 😊

aww shucks! I just write what my brain thinks! 😆

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

hey

that was a really good os, but very sad 😔
felt sorry for geet
lol you should write a happy one now 😃

Maheen xx

Originally posted by: -afsha-

That was too senti

Geet was jus dreaming abt Maan

Wanted to cry at here state

Nicely written jana

Loved it

Originally posted by: cooldude10

loevly OS 😊 and yes, spaammming 😡

blergh....spamming needs to be get rid of in my opinion!

Originally posted by: scorpiangyal

That was super duper sad . . . SIGH i get the feeling something like this is possible in the coming track! It was great!