Short Story-Take my breath away-Vik&Nags!Upd 7/26 - Page 21

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Wow....4 updates...love you Vrushali....I knew you were busy so I had not expected any till tomorrow...but you have given a GREAT 4th Gift...with 4 new chapters.....


So...I alomos stuck tru to my words.....lift nahi ki na uski......for a long time....but then the catch in his voice got me.....the fact that it was about his MOM and Dadi...that tugged zt my heart....and so I grabbed his arm....and in good time too....the Poor guy was so emotional...near tears.....and just as we were going away to discuss......BAM.......my jethani jee decides to show up and fibs about shopping for jewelry......hmmmmmm...Nice excuse Abs...very plausible!!!

So Abs....the new Miss Sherlock Holmes.....hounding out the problems between Me and Vicky.....Muje so to ugal walia ke kya hora hain...and them make me tell Maan about it too...that bit was very uncomfortable....you know Maan.....usually not a man of many words....but he is changing rather fast.....ABS ka kaafi asar hain Maan pe!!!

Loves the conspiracy....but felt a little bad too for Vicky...THREE against ONE is a little unfair.....oh well...You know what they say...Mohabbat aur Jang mein har cheez jayez hain!!!

I think so Oscars need to be handed out to the Soon to Be Mr. and Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana...for Best Actor role in the male and female category...KUDOS Maan and Abs....very nicely succeeded in fooling Vicky!!!

Now....the confession between Vicky and Me.................Hmmmmmmmmmmmm....I have learned for 3rd parties so far that Vick is totally LATOO on Me...its a good feeling. Feels good that I can turn a Man's life upside down, and that too a Man like Vicky...a TOTAL PLAYER!!! Muuuuaaaawwwhhhh..............Love him!!!

So.....I would love to see what he does next.....will he confess to me how I effect him....or will he the play the game......??? and I guess the 3 of us have some explaining to do too.......hhhhmmmmmmm.....Ready Maan and Abs?

Vrushali......Big Hug 🤗 and Kiss....MMMUUUUUUAAAAWWWWHHHHH!!! form me to you for these wonderful updates!!!

And Abs...thanks for being a TRUE freind!!!!...Love you!!!🤗

you are welcome darling..but the big thanks should go to Abs for inspiring me..the conspiracy..execution was all possible because of Abs...

i didnt know i cud have written so many updates..par kya karoon...i am a woman possessed...
the keys just fly...along with my thots..and it makes it easier..

Originally posted by: topsyturvy23

hey a big thanks for including me in ur pm list
was just waitng for it
that was a feast to read 3 updates in one go n looking forward to much more feasts like these
the update was fab
just cant wait to read mext
hopefully u will update soon

you are welcome...though i am a bit of a forgetful person for this pm thing..
i sometimes forget and dont send..will try and send each and every updates notice to you guys...
do bear with this...absent minded writer...

Originally posted by: JhankaaR000

Hi Vrushali.....
You are an awesome writer.
Loved your story and updates. It's really interesting.
I loved today's conspiracy yaar. Abs, not only gets Maan to his knees but also sees that Vicky also gets to his knees in front of Nargis.

Loved the characterisation of the story......GREAT STORY< GREAT WORK

thank you so much..i have read other stories on this forum and some of them are so well thought out and fun..mine seem like a child's impression...

but i am grateful for your kind words because this is my first attempt at writing stories and maan has taken over my imagination...
i have two great friends who have helped me along the way...Abs and Nargis...
this would not have been possible without them.

thank you everyone...

Chapter 21

Nargis had just started going deep into the room when he entered and screamed You! Sheepishly Nargis smiled at him with apology in her eyes.

Vicky slowly catching on to what had just happened, walked towards Nargis and said, So you heard everything! Nargis said well not everything, something's were not clear biting her lower lip so as to not smile. Vicky catching that movement, comes closer and puts his arm around her and says..Hmmm! not clear is it and kisses her thoroughly till both of them are breathless. Vicky lifting his head from hers even though not taking his arms away said, Is that better? Nargis cocks her head on one side and says Well! let me see'a bit better, may be when we are not having Maan and Abs listening on the other side, you can do much better'

Vicky laughs and says.. Those two have had it! Then holds Nargis' hand and goes to the other room, where Maan and Abs hastily move away from the door.

Vicky comes out, brings Nargis in front of them and says, Achcha..bhabhi to aapko pata nahi tha ki..hum dono ke beech ab kaisa hai'!

Maan Bhai saab aap bhi? Bhabhi ne aapko bhi shamil kar liya? He then laughs and says..hmm! to kabhi kabhi apni billi apne ko hi meow karti hai! Holding Nargis from behind around her waist. Nargis is embarrassed and Vicky as usual brazen. Chalo ab meine to bataa diya ki mein kaisa feel karta hoon. Memsaab, he whispers in Nargis' ears and says..ab aapki baari!

Nargis turns beet root as she just saw her two champion change sides and say in unison, Haan Haan Nargis now tell us how you feel!

I uh! She hits Vicky on his leg behind her and continues as he says ouch! You know ! still hesitant and shy. Vicky then puts his head on her shoulder and says, are now you are feeling shy, Paris mein to nahi thi!

Vicky! Nargis gnarls softly completely embarrassed. Abs picking on this cue adds Yeah! Nargis, tum Vicky ke peeche Paris gayee thi! Wow! To aag lagi barabar..dono taraf.

Nargis tried to extricate herself from Vicky's arms but he holds on tight and says Not anymore darling, ab mein nahin chorunga! Laughing then lets her go and turns her to face him and says in front of his brother and his fiance, I love you Nargis! you have witness too! I will never ditch you! my days of playing are over, well they have been since I saw you. Bhai bhabhi, ab daadi se bhi baat karni padegi and I need your help.

They all sobered up a bit and Maan said haan, pehle ek aur baat karni thi. Now that we are all here lets work out how to bring Ma to the wedding.

Hmmmmmmmmmm....tau Vicky smaj gaya.....now he knows the taste of his own medicine......but Kaise muje embarrass kar diya..in front of Maan and Abs.....😳😳😳😳

"may be when we are not having Maan and Abs listening on the other side, you can do much better"....Aur...Vicky ke saath rehke mein bhi kaafi chaloo hoti jaa rahi hoon.....besharam!!!😆

And Abs and Maan...those SNOOPS...had their ears stuck to the door....lol....kya suna aap logo ne????😉

I loved these words.....they were like music to my ears....."I love you Nargis! you have witness too! I will never ditch you! my days of playing are over, well they have been since I saw you. Bhai bhabhi, ab daadi se bhi baat karni padegi and I need your help."

Love you too......meine sub ke saamne bola to nahi....you know...ladki...sharam...and all that....but usne meri aankho me tau dehk hi liya hoga......uff yeh ladka....muje paagal kar dega....😛 I sound like Maan in the serial now~!😆

Chalo ab dekhte hain ke Daadi ma kya karti hain...somehow, I have a feeling that more hurdles are to come our way!!!😕

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Hmmmmmmmmmm....tau Vicky smaj gaya.....now he knows the taste of his own medicine......but Kaise muje embarrass kar diya..in front of Maan and Abs.....😳😳😳😳

"may be when we are not having Maan and Abs listening on the other side, you can do much better"....Aur...Vicky ke saath rehke mein bhi kaafi chaloo hoti jaa rahi hoon.....besharam!!!😆

And Abs and Maan...those SNOOPS...had their ears stuck to the door....lol....kya suna aap logo ne????😉

I loved these words.....they were like music to my ears....."I love you Nargis! you have witness too! I will never ditch you! my days of playing are over, well they have been since I saw you. Bhai bhabhi, ab daadi se bhi baat karni padegi and I need your help."

Love you too......meine sub ke saamne bola to nahi....you know...ladki...sharam...and all that....but usne meri aankho me tau dehk hi liya hoga......uff yeh ladka....muje paagal kar dega....😛 I sound like Maan in the serial now~!😆

Chalo ab dekhte hain ke Daadi ma kya karti hain...somehow, I have a feeling that more hurdles are to come our way!!!😕

miss independent, can do it all like Maan...now...feels sharm...tab kahan..thi..jab...Paris..mein...vicky ki bahon mein kho..gayee thi?😉

yep...ye love story..will take your breath away as yet..darling..

Wow...there is more to come that will TAKE my BREATH away.......uff...I can't wait!!! Vicky already takes my BREATH away...he is so not what I had imagined in a life partner....but I would not give him up....never!!!

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Wow...there is more to come that will TAKE my BREATH away.......uff...I can't wait!!! Vicky already takes my BREATH away...he is so not what I had imagined in a life partner....but I would not give him up....never!!!

And besides...Paris mein to sirf Vicky the na.....Veerji aur Abs to nahi na.....!!

Samja karo!!!😆😉

hmmm...chalo..theek hai...vicky shaitan hai..isiliye woh to bhai bhabhi ka lihaaz nahi karta...tum kar rahi ho..that is good..

Originally posted by: rushtrip

hmmm...chalo..theek hai...vicky shaitan hai..isiliye woh to bhai bhabhi ka lihaaz nahi karta...tum kar rahi ho..that is good..

Hum dono mein se kisi ek ki IKHLAQ (manners) to ache hone chahiye na??😉😆
😆 Dono beharaam honge tau can you imagine kya kya ho sakta????