'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 56

ur upd8s jz keep getin beta n beta. jz like i wait 4 da actual drama i wait 4 ur upd8 2 n jz like the drama u reeli giv above our expectation. was a reli gud part. thankz

Awesome 👏 Aue yeh Maan kitna evil ho gaya hain iska do baar bolna parta hain ki I'm drowning aur phir woh jata hai. kya yaar usse toh Geet ki piche piche jump karna chahiyetha rescue karne ki liye. but i still loved it. update soon.

OH. My. GOD. That was amazing, PLEASE update soon! Maaneet moment!

OMG!!!!!
Its Awesome Awesome!!! 👏 👏 👏
Her rehearsal for sayng that she is in love with him was mind blowing LoL!!!!😆 😆 😆

Loved it!!!

Keep writing

Another attempt:

Fave dialogues:

"'My name is Maan and I am a terrorist!!!'"

"Tum aise react kar rahe ho jaise I declared I love Osama Bin Laden. I just said that I am in love..." she tossed her hair back.

"Save that for Maan" Dadi laughed and ended the call.

"Nahi yaar Geet....Woh toh Air Force se aaya hain...Is style mein bologi toh saala tujhe goli se uda dega...zaara khadoos ho ke bol...ekdum uske style mein..." she told her self.

"Haila!" --> I don't know if you used to/ still watch Miley Jab Hum Tum but it reminded me of Benji

"Bechaara....tum usse bhi dhakka dene waali ho?" Maan pestered Geet.

Even in the heaviest of downpours he could identify her tears....

Comments:

I really liked the convo between Dadi and Geet. It shows how much Dadi really loves Geet even though Geet isn't her own granddaughter. Also, the way Dadi explained to Geet needs to stop treating love like it's a bad thing was really neat. It was in Geet's language.

The scene of this entire part was when Geet was practicing her confession in front of the mirror. That was totally wicked. I loved how Geet knew what Maan would say or do after he heard that confession. The confession scene itself was such a heartbreak. It took me a while to understand why you put the last two sentences at the end, but I realized the meaning after re-reading it. I really wanna know Maan's reaction to Geet's confession. I have a feeling that Geet will try to escape from there while Maan won't let her and they would end up bickering or having a major fight. Update soon!!

P.S. - Sorry it's not as long as the other ones. Also, there really wasn't any scene that I didn't like. I liked everything about this part. Is Maan an only child, by any chance? Just curious.

Pallo,


I loved ur hatke thing about love.....Geet telling Maan...n calling him khota at the same time!! Loved it!!

ooooooooo she in the stream...haila n Maan enjoying it....these two are evil....but loads of fun evil.

maan ka bhi dil dhadka finally!!! Update soon!!

Superb update:)loved the convo between dadi n Geet.plz update soon.hoping for some romantic rain sequence;-)

Wow!!!! Super-fabulous! I loved it......seriously! The whole thing.......I loved how differently you etched out Maan and Geet's characters......instead of being like some stereotypical love-sick puppy......you showed Geet to be confident and very much in her character. Now, that's how I like it and want it! Dadi is a genius.....lolz......love her! Finally, Geet let her heart out.....Maan is so impish......lolz.....he could not bear to see her with someone else so was letting out his frustration on her......I loved the kiss! 😉😆.....Even Geet's imagination was titillating....😍......I just love the way you describe things.....the words you use.......hope my comment is not sounding repetitive and monotonous....😛😆😆.....that was a wonderful update......do continue soon.

Originally posted by: rituka7

superb
damn cool
update soon

Thanks! Am glad u liked the part😃

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow geet confessed and maan actually hurt her though unintentionally by his words
dadi and geet duo is rocking and maan irritation was so cute
do continue
bye sumi

Thanks sumi...loved ur comments!😃

Originally posted by: cool_anjali2010

hey thanks yaar for dis lovely part....👍🏼 loved it plzzz continue sooon

can't wait 4 d next part...

Thanks for commenting...Stay tuned...will definitely continue soon!

Originally posted by: gauri92

gahhh!! u need to update...as soon as possible!!! ur last words make me think that maan will accept geet....i hope he does at least..

Do you think??? Hmmm...well I am not sure myself....😉
Neways....glad that u liked the part!
Love ya...Thanks for the comments

Originally posted by: TANYA 18

ur upd8s jz keep getin beta n beta. jz like i wait 4 da actual drama i wait 4 ur upd8 2 n jz like the drama u reeli giv above our expectation. was a reli gud part. thankz

xx

Thaks yaar....You have relieved me off the feeling that maybe I was giving substandard updates😭...thanks again!

Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever

Awesome 👏 Aue yeh Maan kitna evil ho gaya hain iska do baar bolna parta hain ki I'm drowning aur phir woh jata hai. kya yaar usse toh Geet ki piche piche jump karna chahiyetha rescue karne ki liye. but i still loved it. update soon.

Bechaara Maan...Geet ne usse pehli baar dhakka mara tha...ab uski baari thi hasne ki😆...waise Thanks for commenting. Glad you liked it!😆

Originally posted by: scorpiangyal

OH. My. GOD. That was amazing, PLEASE update soon! Maaneet moment!

Yep Maaneet moments (make that plural) coming up soon!
Thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by: prerna27

OMG!!!!!
Its Awesome Awesome!!! 👏 👏 👏
Her rehearsal for sayng that she is in love with him was mind blowing LoL!!!!😆 😆 😆

Loved it!!!

Keep writing

Glad you liked it prerna....thanks for commenting!
Stay tuned...😃

Originally posted by: Nirali92

Another attempt:

Fave dialogues:

"'My name is Maan and I am a terrorist!!!'"

"Tum aise react kar rahe ho jaise I declared I love Osama Bin Laden. I just said that I am in love..." she tossed her hair back.

"Save that for Maan" Dadi laughed and ended the call.

"Nahi yaar Geet....Woh toh Air Force se aaya hain...Is style mein bologi toh saala tujhe goli se uda dega...zaara khadoos ho ke bol...ekdum uske style mein..." she told her self.

"Haila!" --> I don't know if you used to/ still watch Miley Jab Hum Tum but it reminded me of Benji

"Bechaara....tum usse bhi dhakka dene waali ho?" Maan pestered Geet.

Even in the heaviest of downpours he could identify her tears....

Comments:

I really liked the convo between Dadi and Geet. It shows how much Dadi really loves Geet even though Geet isn't her own granddaughter. Also, the way Dadi explained to Geet needs to stop treating love like it's a bad thing was really neat. It was in Geet's language.

The scene of this entire part was when Geet was practicing her confession in front of the mirror. That was totally wicked. I loved how Geet knew what Maan would say or do after he heard that confession. The confession scene itself was such a heartbreak. It took me a while to understand why you put the last two sentences at the end, but I realized the meaning after re-reading it. I really wanna know Maan's reaction to Geet's confession. I have a feeling that Geet will try to escape from there while Maan won't let her and they would end up bickering or having a major fight. Update soon!!

P.S. - Sorry it's not as long as the other ones. Also, there really wasn't any scene that I didn't like. I liked everything about this part. Is Maan an only child, by any chance? Just curious.

Yep Maan is the only child....I made Dev the driver...so had no sibling for Maan🤣....
Now that is ur normal healthy comment...I seriously look forward to your comments a lot...
Thanks yaar...for taking the time time to comment again😃
Love ya!