'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#311

Proposal Queen? Interesting nickname. Oola! Did I see a teensy weensy flash of jealousy cross Maan for the breifest instant?

Uh-oh! I thought Manthan was a part of a love triangle. Never mind, I trust you to get something better coming soon...

But poor Geet hasn't ever had a true proposal in her life, ever?

That shud have cooled Maan's ego a bit... 209 is quite a count. Wonder if Maan would ever propose her and if she'd realise its authenticity.

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Vinitha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#312

OMG Pallo! That was great! Why did you even think it was horrid..? 😕

I loved it! Every bit..and i love how Geet was feeling differently towards Maan..Seems like Geet's feelings are developing but Maan hmm not too sure abt him....I love how Geet brought Maan out..to talk to him..and how sweet, he actually opened up..and told her that he misses the Airforce...Loved that scene.

The Taxi theme was very unique..something different..plus what a game! I really wonder how you come up with such games! 😆 Sounds fun!

Loved how you described those fine details..and this part was wonderful! The last line of Maan's was hilarious..how he said she should have a placard paste on her..😆.

Really i enjoyed reading it..and keep them coming in! 😛

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#313

Wowie!

So Geet is already dreaming abt Maan and his whirlpool eyes.

The cute, adorable Vivaan cost Geet her job! Hmm, now let's see what Maan does to get Geet back. Does he even bother or not...

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#314

Oh.My.God!

Geet driving a bus to vent out her frustration on Maan? Hilarious! Btw, looks like Maan's car is in need of Horlicks. 🤣 I can very well imagine Maan's expression on seeing Geet driving the bus. 😆 Dadi is a terrific person, get Geet or sleep in the garage! 🤣

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Pallo,

You're driving me crazy!

All through, I was just wondering how cool it would be if we could have that Bus driving-Gaaali competition- and then the falling off scene in the show! Absolutely terrific. I was thinking Maan would lose that Gali competition but boy, it's MSK after all!

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Simran Kaur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#316

hey can u add me to ur pm list love ur ff thanks by xx

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#317

Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnn!!!!! [;(]

Oh damn! I was so engrossed in the story I didn't realise it was over! Pallo, when are you updating again??????????? When-oh-when????????

Pallo, babe, you've lost it if you say this part was horrid! It was fantabulous!

Geet has some real humor: "Maan sir, aakhri iccha to batate jao..." 🤣

The taxiwala theme was innovative. Loved each and every update.

Now put up part 11 soon before I lose it completely.

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Aleena

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Posted: 15 years ago

#318

greattttt update 👏👏👏👏
superb . its not boring
i like it
She stopped outside her house...."Sir...aapko tea ya coffe chahiye?"

Maan shook his head in negative.

"Accha hain...kyun mere ghar pe toh sirf Horlicks hain..." she muttered.😆

and Geet realized that he had caught a cold. His wet clothes and the chilly night wind aggravated his condition. Geet felt guilty.

"Sir...Ek minute...." she said.

He looked up at her and to his horror he saw her unbuttoning her shirt.

"Geet kya kar rahi ho?" his voice was on the edge.

"Aapke kapde geele hogaye hain....Aapko yeh shirt de rahi hoon..." she replied and continued unbuttoning her shirt. 😉😆😳
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