'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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Tressa

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey pallo.... liked ur update.... different from the others... missed their nok-jhoks...

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#302

Pallo,

I jus came across this FF of yours and I'm going to provide you wid comments for all the parts. Here goes part 1:

Maan in air force, that's a first. The introductory dialogue was amazing. The statue of liberty.... Geet driving like a maniac is also a first. You had me laughing at the line about Dev being a driver! I was literally ROFL.

So Dev and NT both are good for nothing, good! But poor Geet having to bear her load...*sigh*

The hospital scene was all too fast but intense too. So now I'll go and read the next part for their reactions to the situation and come back with my comments. Meanwhile, you tell me when ur gonna post part 11.

P.S: You're an awesome writer.

Tia

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#303

Pallo,

Me back wid comments for part 2:

I must say, you're a magician wid words! I was totally mesmerised by your vocabulary!

Back to the story, a fabulous kick-out for NT. I'm sympathising wid Yug, Dev and all of NT's past lovers. Glad that Geet had enough sense to pack her bags and send her home. Brij was... endearing!

Geet is more like the elder sister NT shud've been! So let's see wat does MK want from Geet.

Shall be back soon.

Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#304

Comments Part 3

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OMG!

Pallo, that was terrific!

That song was perfectly apt for Maaneet in that scene! And your dialogues are absolutely hilarious!

....I'm not a dracula... Ghosh, that set my imagination working. How would Maan as a vampire look?

....Kaash Shahjahan ka bhoot tumhe le jaye...
....Trapped in this mansion wid ur only nakchada grandson...

Off to part 4.

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#305

Pallo,

You're a gem of a writer!

...Beauty wid brains, a lethal combination, a certifide route to suicide....

So Maan believes that GEET is that combination?

....Not afraid of terrorism because lived thru 2 yrs of marriage...

Ghosh! These guys are weird! 🤣

...Puppies grow up, chauvinistic men don't....

Simply fabulous!

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TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 15 years ago

#306

@ tes_v1.....I am loving your comments...keep them coming...giving me a boost to update faster....

And yah a question...Do you drink horlicks????🤣

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#307

Uh-oh, didn't know Airforce dude could get rough for revenge. That was crude on Maan's part but then the truely genuine apology did the trick and I'm back to gaga over Maan. Ed-Bells and IHLS bit did some funny trick and was cute again.

Manthan, I feel is here to make Maan jealous and speed-up his realisation abt his feelings for Geet.

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#308

Oh no, I don't drink Horlicks but why did you ask?

Hey, I'm glad u liked my comments bcoz I was wondering if my blabbering was causing a nuisance...

Well, since I write too, and I love Loooooong comments, I believe in giving them too since I believe that is what keeps a writer going!

Btw, You can call me Tia

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TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 15 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: tes_v1
Oh no, I don't drink Horlicks but why did you ask?

Hey, I'm glad u liked my comments bcoz I was wondering if my blabbering was causing a nuisance...

Well, since I write too, and I love Loooooong comments, I believe in giving them too since I believe that is what keeps a writer going!

Btw, You can call me Tia

yep LONG commnets act like a fuel to a writer...after u read the remaining parts u'll understand why I asked Horlicks....

Seriously Glad Tia that you are commenting......and this long that too!!!!
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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: livelygal

yep LONG commnets act like a fuel to a writer...after u read the remaining parts u'll understand why I asked Horlicks....

Seriously Glad Tia that you are commenting......and this long that too!!!!
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Oh alright, then! Does Maan say that Geet can blabber bcoz she drink horlicks? Smthing like that? Anyways, I'll read ahead and get back to you!