'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 34

Originally posted by: honeey_16

dear awesomee blosom part..
totally in love with ur FF..
u write so well and now geet also sneezing...lolz...
cont soon plz..
thanks 4 the pm

yep poor her...ice-cream did it!!! I wish I had made Maan offer her a tissue....🤣

Originally posted by: gauri92

awww.....this was awesome!!! i loved it!!! keep it up....im laughing so hard tht i just dont know wht else 2 write...

Great...I am on MISSION LAUGHTER KE PHATKE!!!😆😆
Seriously I am glad I made you smile....😊

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Aww Pallo yaar..you wrote it thrice..?.It must have really sucked!

I went through the same thing before, terrible experience..From then onwards..i saved my work ASAP..😆

Coming to your FF, oh i just love it! First of all thank you so much for bringing back Vivan for this scene..He is so adorable! Love this cute boy!

The way he mixed up the sentences..😆.....

LOL at that chaddi in and chaddi out thing...Geet is so random..and unpredictable! I esp loved how she was reassuring herself that it is just attaction and nothing else...Me hope it's more than that..😉...and wow i didn't expect Maan to come forward and hug Geet..that took me by surprise as well! 😆..But i love it, love how he is opening up to Geet..and being so comfortable with her...plus what a cool ice cream promise! 😆...Esp that last line of the swear...bechara Maan....was too sick to fight back with her..that he agreed to that line...

I can only imagine him arguing with her if he wasn't sick..Love how you ended it with Geet sneezing instead....and will say it again..I loved Vivan! Hoping for more scenes of him in the future.....😛.He seems to be bringing Maan and Geet closer..😳

So here's some huggies for your hardwork & for also giving us such a wonderful update!..🤗🤗

Vini you deserve a special Bhootni ice-cream for commenting this long and that too on time!!!!🤣

Yep I love Vivaan too...he is my CUPID!!!! Rest assured...Vivaan will be there in more scenes in future....

Originally posted by: Starry_night

That was amazingly superb! I loved how their friendship began.......so cute and sarcastically funny......lolz.........Vivaan is such a cute devil.......and Dadi is cool.......I loved how Geet gave him those gifts......the ice-cream pact.....making him salute her.....lolz.....and that hug......it was all great! Do continue soon.

I am really glad you liked the part...Vivaan is an angel!!!! I think the salute was needed...and that hug too!!!😆😆😆

Originally posted by: sweet_charmed

lmao.. .. i was literally rofl 😆 😆 😆 ...haha its just too good .. and the great and cute vivian is back!!! I loved it totally soo soo good!! haha i absolutely love the friendship hug.. lolz .. u know wat for writing such a great great ff ..u deserve a friendship hug form our very own maan 😉

Laughter is the language of the soul...Great that I communicating in that language to you. I am really happy that you smiled and enjoyed the update....I makes up for the frustration of writing it thrice!!!!😆

And please...save that hug from Maan for later...coz I will definitely go off to heaven if he hugs me...and then you won't get anymore updates🤣

Originally posted by: Giginaik

This was absolutely awesome, I was laughing so loud that my husband kept in looking at me weird. Now you tell me how can I explain to a German (who understands no Hindi) that I was laughing at a very funny FF on a show I am totally addicted to. Oh well, will try another day to explain it to him. At the moment I am in heaven. After Thursday and Friday's episodes of Geet I was in the dumps. So a big thank you for getting me out. Loved the "Chaddi in" "Chaddi out" bit the most. Never really thought of Spiderman and Superman in those terms before. Thank you.

Ahhhh poor husband yaar....Bechaara!!! Go give him horlicks....he will get better sleep! I am really glad you liked my FF...I am enjoying writing it...great that you enjoyed reading it....and yah I think of Spiderman and Superman in those terms😆😆😆 Helps me channel my X-rated thoughts in a constructive way!!!

Originally posted by: saba18

aww😳 such a cute update i loved each and every bit of it.🤗

awwww glad that you liked it 🤗 for reading and ❤️ for liking!

Originally posted by: taskutbimuff

Really funny yaar.i was reading this at night and laughing out loud:)i was laughing so much that my son woke up..lol.he was looking at me as if I was crazy:)keep it up dear:)

He is gonna curse you and me indirectly...😆😆😆!!! Glad you liked it! I am just so happy at receiving so many comments after having to re-write this part thrice...I guess it paid off!

AMAZING YAAR 👏 👏 .... i loved ur update❤️... it ws awesomely wrtten... inspite u wrote it thrice...bt it ws just wow... 👍🏼

keep writing.. nd update soon...😊

awwww such a wonderful update. haaaaaaaaaaay 😍. i really love the character u r portrayng Geet. your writing( this FF) is indeed unpredictably witty and satirical as well as eloquen. awsome job. luv it to the core n impatiently wait for the next updates, i wish soon the creatives would come up to decision of making a new maneet soap and hire u as director 😆 keep up the good job. one request, plz plz plz add more of geet's drollness. not much of the shy girly side. last it is ur chpice .......... wink wink

Originally posted by: MaanEET_FAN

AMAZING YAAR 👏 👏 .... i loved ur update❤️... it ws awesomely wrtten... inspite u wrote it thrice...bt it ws just wow... 👍🏼

keep writing.. nd update soon...😊

Thanks yaar for loving the update...I am getting touched by your comments...seriously yaar!!!
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Originally posted by: Morning Star

awwww such a wonderful update. haaaaaaaaaaay 😍. i really love the character u r portrayng Geet. your writing( this FF) is indeed unpredictably witty and satirical as well as eloquen. awsome job. luv it to the core n impatiently wait for the next updates, i wish soon the creatives would come up to decision of making a new maneet soap and hire u as director 😆 keep up the good job. one request, plz plz plz add more of geet's drollness. not much of the shy girly side. last it is ur chpice .......... wink wink

K I will make Geet remain as she is but...it is necessary to show that she too is affected by human things like attraction and love...😆😆😆
Glad that you liked the update....
And yah do suggest to the creatives to take me on...Neways I don't wanna study...I could start working now only😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

@Pallo: Ice cream..??Me want!! 😛 😆..Glad you're nt offering me horlicks instead...🤣

But honestly my comments for most FFs are like that..I just can't stop when it comes to commenting on FFs/OSs or anything else...😆....aur haan...oyeeee waiting for the ice cream still.😆.....warna no brijjy for you!...😆

Ye le...enjoy kar...but leave a lick for Brij!!!





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just caught up with all the parts...u r really good...loved all the parts...gud work!!👏

omg that was so sweet and funny

Great update Pallo .... Superman-Spiderman was too good !!! 😆