'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#281

LOL....Geet pushed him over the bridge coz he was arousing feelings within her....I think I love this gal more n more n that uptight though loveable sadu deserves it!!!!

Great update pallo!!

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

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Posted: 15 years ago

#282

hey awesome part

lol soo geet is feeling something for maan, just hope he does too

do continue soon

Maheen xx

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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Posted: 15 years ago

#283

Pallo...I liked the update a lot...it was cute...not pakao or boring. So there relationship is growong form her perspective...but to date you have not aired Maan's perspective on how Geet affects him....or is it truly that He is only irritated by her....and not attracted to her?? WHat are his private thought of geet....we want to get inside of Maan's head and body tooo....😉

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TANYA

@TANYA 18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#284

hahahaha tht was sucha good part

y do u feel it wr horrid?????

loved how geet is the first one faling 4 maan. now plz make maan realise 2 n tht wud b a real treat.

it wr so gud the way she pushed him over becz she cudn resist him n wen she screamed 2 tel his last wish lmaooooo.

carry on the great work 👏

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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#285

i love it yaar
great fan fiction
love you
thanks a heap

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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#286

there are lots of things that i love bout your fanfic stories
1. your story is great
2. your language is great
thanks for ur hardwork

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neha2005

@neha2005

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#287

cant believe i missed this ff!! great work!

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kooliio

@kooliio

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Posted: 15 years ago

#288

hey...

lovely part...

geet is too good lol...

plz cont.soon...

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Nirali

@Piano1422

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#289

I felt that you did pretty well in this part. Though I missed their nok-jhok, I thought that it still had the ManEet essence in it. They were still in character, which I totally liked. This is totally my opinion so if you disagree then it's totally cool with me. I felt that Geet having a crush on him was a little to early. I think that she just needs to start seeing him in a new light. The spark thing was a little too early. I liked how she turned around when she was him taking his shirt off and how his eyes almost popped out when she started unbuttoning her shirt. Also, I totally loved the role reversal. Geet is the one that offers him a shirt, and takes him out on a drive. You don't see that in other stories. It's unique. Overall, I enjoyed this part, especially the ending. Hope you don't get offended by my comment and sorry this post is really long.