~' Together By Chance '~ ( Part XXVII ) page 23 - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: spln

aawwww....how cute n that was so quick......hehe this was a cute part....not that intense but a much needed break the ice properly part.....oki...so food, n clothes....watelse!!!

ps:kust realized i was the first to comment!!!😆

Hi ... U liked this part.. it was cute.. hmm hope the next part keeps ur interst intact...😃 intensity i hope it looks close to reality and less fictional in nature...😆.. U r the first to comment on this part.. so now i am relived that the part was not that bad... 😳.. u will get a lot from the next part...hope u enjoy reading it...😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice part;) well gals r same everywhere but boys hve this kind of mentality...ab hum gals kya kar sakti hain....woh kehte hain na meinu ki pharak painda hai;)Yaar tumhari lassi aur pranthe toh pakke hain par baat yeh hai ki tumhe mere hath ka prantha pasand aayega bhi ya nahi..hehe..lassi toh bana dongi woh bhi rapchik style ki..;) arey tumse khari kamayi kyun longi...u r my frnd na:-) khari kamayi elders se li jaati hai..woh bhi achche se makhan laga ke:p
Waise both asit n kinnari hve gud sense of humour...waise bhi hum gals kisi se kam nahi..hum time aane pe humour use karte hain aur boys jayadataar gals ko patane mein humour ki help lete hain;) Overall its a v swt part.. i hope next part is more swter than this one...cheti post karna bhoomi dear warna lassi aur prantha..ahem ahem;)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwww fantastic yaar tum intni achi likthi kaise ho yaar but i miss those poetic lines cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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mindbloaiwng , awesome bhoomi sooo sweet
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mad_lovee

hey nice part;) well gals r same everywhere but boys hve this kind of mentality...ab hum gals kya kar sakti hain....woh kehte hain na meinu ki pharak painda hai;)Yaar tumhari lassi aur pranthe toh pakke hain par baat yeh hai ki tumhe mere hath ka prantha pasand aayega bhi ya nahi..hehe..lassi toh bana dongi woh bhi rapchik style ki..;) arey tumse khari kamayi kyun longi...u r my frnd na:-) khari kamayi elders se li jaati hai..woh bhi achche se makhan laga ke:p

Waise both asit n kinnari hve gud sense of humour...waise bhi hum gals kisi se kam nahi..hum time aane pe humour use karte hain aur boys jayadataar gals ko patane mein humour ki help lete hain;) Overall its a v swt part.. i hope next part is more swter than this one...cheti post karna bhoomi dear warna lassi aur prantha..ahem ahem;)

Hi Himani dear.... yes girls are the same usually it depends on ones uprbignign and lifestyle...but boys do percive differntly and families as well... oh I have observed people in delhi saying..Bombay wali ladki r very fast.. even hyderbad people percieve that way.. dont know why ..i guess they feel like bollywood wmumbai girls r in mini's and mentalities ekdam modern... 😆
About the sense of humour bit ..himani tussi to ekdam sahi kaha hai.. u have said the correct to the point thing .. its absolutely 100% right..👏.. aur meri lassi & paratha .. free mey..aww hope i have the lassi atleast soon...😳
next part will post soon hope u like it as well... and ya it will be sweet ..hope u feel the same way... luv u dear... tc
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

awwwwwwwwwwwww fantastic yaar tum intni achi likthi kaise ho yaar but i miss those poetic lines cont soon

Hi Jyothi... yipee feels so nice to know u enjoyed reading the part...and achii laggi tumhe part makes me feel abslutely good..and encoruages me somuch... u r missign the poetic lines..awwww.. feels soemthign special to hear that..... tell u asecret. i was getting restless once wantign to write few lines in between in a scene of this story btu kaha ..No No..Bhoomi the story will be beena poems chalo.. mood change karo...😆😆😆.. willcontinue sosn...

Originally posted by: monikaseth

mindbloaiwng , awesome bhoomi sooo sweet

Hi Monika.... awww so sweet of u.. ur words just make me realise how much u had fun reading.. hope u feel the same reading hte next parts... tc
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part XI

Early morning both were getting ready, usually Asit would get up and be ready to go to his gym and from there to the set today he was in the drawing room searching something.

Kinnari washed her face and came outside saw him searching and asked him, isn't he getting late, he replied her that something very precious has just slipped from his pocket and he is searching it. Kinnari went to have a bath but she couldn't get her kurta off as her hair had entangled in the hook on her Kurta back neckline… She tried it but her hair became too messy and getting more entangled. While trying to get the hook off from her hair she informed Asit, he is almost half an hour late for his shoot. Asit said, even if he has to skip the shoot he will but needs to get his ring. While Asit was saying he looked at her and understood her hook and hair have got entangled. He went near her and asked , Can he help her. Kinnari first felt bit awkward later she said, 'U wont take any khari kamaee for this right?' Asit smiled and said.. That makes him to ask something.. it would be wonderful if she helps him too, by searching the ring for him which just slipped from his shirt pocket and came rolling in the drawing room but he can't get it now… Kinnari agreed and Asit made her hair to come in front and touching the her hair softly he slowly tried to remove each hair from the hook and Kinnari had her head down and finally Asit removed the hair and tied the hook properly..

Kinnari told Asit even such scene are shown to be so romantic in the serials… but did he feel anything.. kuch kuch inside.. Asit said , 'NO!' shrugging of his face… while Kinnari was asked the same by Asit, she too said, 'NO Not at all… no kuch kuch happening'. They both wondered why the writers write like that… both smiled and in their heart kept asking.. "Really Kuch Kuch ho raha hai.. " The mere fact that they were physically so close made them feel something.. Some want… but both were unaware what it is….

Kinnari later started searching the ring and after few minutes she found the ring, she looked at it and was amused. She gave the ring to Asit. Asit was very happy and Kinnari asked him,

Kinnari: Its ur ring?… Is this the same ring u told me about which u keep in ur pocket every time close to ur heart. That's how the seashore pic with ur hand on ur heart standing beside me was taken… Is this the same ring?

Asit : Why get so shocked, ya it is the same ring…

Kinnari: R U going to give such a ring to the girl u love the most…

Asit: Of course… not 'such a ring' but 'this ring' ….

Kinnari: I know Asit u have a collection of more than 40-50 belts with u... but its weird to make a ring shaped in a belt and give to ur lady love.. I mean just think of it… everyone gives a flower shape, heart shaped, diamond shaped something like that to his or her love. Belt…shaped.. sounds soo..aa. I mean.. Not to hurt u… ok.. but …

Asit: U know Kinnari when I was in college I had a crush on a girl and u can say I was in love with her... whatever it was at that age.. I wanted to propose to her.. so everyone told me.. give her something.. I decided I would give her a ring… At that age I could be like other boys buy a ring and give her… but I was so excited about the whole thing that I thought about what ring to give her… I never asked for money from my parents when it came to buying gifts for my friends. So I worked distributing pamplets and in a day earned some 100- 150... I could buy only silver ring with that money, I had a fascination towards collecting belts from that time itself and my sister came in my room , she told me why I buy these belts… no use having so many… and in just casual discussion…I told her.. 'Di dont u know.. it's the belt which gives the stroke of perfection, it supports the whole look of the clothes and with it actually gives confidence, to face the people and ties us closely so that we never fall with any embarrassment.' My sister smiled with stunned eyes at the words, said I speak philosophy well, and went away… After that it strike me.. that I want to tell my girlfriend that I want to be with her all time and it will be my love which will hold her tightly, not let her fall…give her support all my life and as they say the ring fingers nerves directly connect to the heart.. I want to tell her my love with tightly protect her heart and the ring shaped like belt can see its closed and u can never let it loose the grip, same way my love will always surround her heart with tight grip and be there with her. Those innocent thoughts at that time were genuine and I feel the one whom I love should have this ring in her finger as my promise to her.

Kinnari: what happen when u gave her the ring…

Asit: the girl I had crush, ahhaha She rejected my proposal even before having a look at the ring… She said very politely 'U need to concentrate on getting ur ATKT cleared first'. She is now married with two kids they look exactly like her…

Kinnari smiled listening to his thoughts…

Asit: U want to laugh at me and my stupid thought.. U r welcome.. I am getting late.. I will go…

Kinnari: Asit… (he turned back) Every ring can be termed as beautiful, lovely, cute…. having feelings. They have the beauty delicate in nature as a woman will wear in her ring finger. First when I saw I assumed how a girl would like this to be in her ring finger.. but after knowing the concept u attached … I can say The girl whom u would wish to wear this ring in her finger has to be extremely lucky… its something she can wear her whole life and fall in love with u again and again by looking at it… as it tells a story about what Love can innocently say. Firstly, it is made up of ur first hard earned money, Secondly it is not about what people perceive; it is about what ur heart speaks to her. The mere knowledge that u keep this silver ring close to ur heart.. I am sure u will keep her in ur heart forever.. We hardly can find such committed people and I am so proud.. even if it is a contractual marriage at least I get the privileged of been called ur Wife…

Asit smiled with her words and for some reason he was so moved that he couldn't say anything more. Feeling too flattered and feeling something to tell her. He just looked into her eyes and she looked in his eyes… the glow on their faces made them to stand and feel the magic, the vibes around which just wanted to push them to hug each other… but something held them back. Asit was disturbed by a sms from his EP and he rushed outside. He did remembered that when he had shown this ring to Tanishka she had said the first thing.. . 'Silver? Don't u have enough money?'and had a disappointed expression…later she had quickly told.. 'give this to urself. Get me a diamond… don't u know diamond r girls best friend….'

Asit went drove his car..and felt.. 'Something something happening.. I am loving this feeling so much?' Kinnari went into the bathroom to have shower and as she looked at herself in the mirror…. She blushed and said, 'Aaj mera Dil Kyun itna khush hota hai…Kyun kuch kuch hota hai?'

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Posted: 17 years ago
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that's soooooooooooo sweet ...... something something heppning never sounded so cute the way it is doing now ... i wanted to write abt part 10 ke what i ovsrvd that whn we start living with anyone..we get to knw more abt that prson ...naturaly we oftn devlop a bonding .. n here whn they started they were nt awre of each othrs gud qualities... there was irritation, negetivities n so many othr things ...

whn we start loving or liking someone, in that initial stage we only ovrwelmed by that prsons gud points , we can only sence that how attracting the othr person is..its all abt the surface...but here , the case is oposit ....pehele to sari buariyan janli, n experienced all bad stuffs n dheere dheere acchayain pehchan ne lage hai.... very nice yaar..

I m loving this little little moments, its so natural ..no fakeness..nothing filmy or ovr d top... ultil now the best was, something held dem back n they didnt hug ... awwwwwwww.... suprb ....

One fine day Asit will realise na ke..Kinnari actually is a very beautiful girl ..her beauty is very diffrnt..n he will wondr ke he didnt ever noticed that.. the way today Kinnari flltrd him ... I hope Asit does that too someday ....uff Bhooooooooooomi.... arrnge the money yaar , mujhe yeh film Dekhnahi hai ...do smthinggggggggggggggggg
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Jyothi... looks like u did like the parts.. glad to know😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nisisanjh




that's soooooooooooo sweet ...... something something heppning never sounded so cute the way it is doing now ... i wanted to write abt part 10 ke what i ovsrvd that whn we start living with anyone..we get to knw more abt that prson ...naturaly we oftn devlop a bonding .. n here whn they started they were nt awre of each othrs gud qualities... there was irritation, negetivities n so many othr things ...

whn we start loving or liking someone, in that initial stage we only ovrwelmed by that prsons gud points , we can only sence that how attracting the othr person is..its all abt the surface...but here , the case is oposit ....pehele to sari buariyan janli, n experienced all bad stuffs n dheere dheere acchayain pehchan ne lage hai.... very nice yaar..

I m loving this little little moments, its so natural ..no fakeness..nothing filmy or ovr d top... ultil now the best was, something held dem back n they didnt hug ... awwwwwwww.... suprb ....

One fine day Asit will realise na ke..Kinnari actually is a very beautiful girl ..her beauty is very diffrnt..n he will wondr ke he didnt ever noticed that.. the way today Kinnari flltrd him ... I hope Asit does that too someday ....uff Bhooooooooooomi.... arrnge the money yaar , mujhe yeh film Dekhnahi hai ...do smthinggggggggggggggggg

Hi Sara,

Firstly it feels really iteresting to read the points which u try and understnad which rnt in the story but form a part with the base of the story.. and when u wrote abt they knowign the negative before hand..nwo slowly understnading the postive it is so true.. I guess when u dislike a person u have so many things to say he is not good... and when u start likign a person.. even his negative points may sound not that bad... thast what happen in a relationship we tend to see the points we love an dignore what we dont.. thats why none r perfect but the qualities we have admired loved..makes the person look perfect even with his flaws..
About beauty Kinnari isnt beautiful I havnt mentioned like that..she is just not that fair and is not perfectly dressed like the modles around Asit... she is cute ..Asit is gaingin a lot of points throguh her heart... but does Kinnari get we need to see... and abotu arranging money... kya yaar.... u bhi na.. tumhe screen pe dekhna hai.. just sending hte concept to soemone will do.. so manywriters copy adn give it the ir name ..but they also change the end soemtimes and even put their own scenes./.where it can be a misbalance in the base...:(
lets seee.. lu vu dear...adn ur coments make me really happy.. to read.. tc

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