~' Together By Chance '~ ( Part XXVII ) page 23

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Friends,
I am here with my new story titled "Together By Chance". I wont call it short story as I havnt finished writing to know how many parts it will require😆 But Ya it will have parts and not episodes.🙂
As I was writing Zindagi ek Safar, i got the idea for this story and was really eager to write this one.
This story is very different from my early stories but ofcourse it has the Bhoomi touch.... 😉but but.. it doesnt have poetic lines. Yes i have restrained from using it... just for a change u see. Its not based onany serial. I havnt taken any actors from telly to fit in the lead role but woudl love ot hear from u all as the story unfolds of who can suit the roles😉.
The title as u see is " Together By Chance " Its a total imaginative story line yet tried to make it look beliveable. Before u think its an out and out romantic story, sorry to disappoint u its not totally romantic but ya it has romance and love but in a balanced form.
Thanks to my lovely friends out here for encouragin my work always... Bini, Sara, San, Himani, Nida, Golu, Jyothi, Vandu, Rabia, Monika, aksksara, Khubu, priyanka, Juvz, Sarika, Nihita, Ravishing_gal , Paru, Kriti, kookie_crinks91, aRohAAnGeL(Sameera), sujalangadrocks, rajeevskitu...
All my lovely silent readers as well... 😀 hope u enjoy this story as well!
Here is the look of the Banner😉, do tell me how it looks🥰... and keep guessing what the story is all about until I post the first part, which i will post tomorrow!😀
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Posted: 17 years ago
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beautiful banner Bhoomi .... u seem to have written a very intrsting story ...atleast the bnnr says a lot already ... waiting for the parts .....
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Originally posted by: nisisanjh

beautiful banner Bhoomi .... u seem to have written a very intrsting story ...atleast the bnnr says a lot already ... waiting for the parts .....

Hi Sara,
So u r the first to reply and havea look at the banner as well... i am so glad u liked it.. i tried and this is just my first attempt... luv u for encouraging my work so much always....
story is interstign or not... i will get to know by the reponse i get from u all wheni start posting the first part... hope u like the first part...😀
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great u r starting another fic was eagerly waiting for it. . Post the first part ASAP.
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Originally posted by: golu_1677

Great u r starting another fic was eagerly waiting for it. . Post the first part ASAP.

Hi Golu,
yup am right back to buug u all with my story..😆.. u were eagerly waiting aww... will post the first part..hope u lik ethe baase of the story line which will be known in the first part itself..😉

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow interesting cont soon

Hi Jyothi , u found by the intro its iteresting...😀 hope u enjoy reading the first part..! will post soon..

Originally posted by: imdudehead

seems interesting

adn beautiful banner

Hi, glad u liked Banner....😀

Originally posted by: monikaseth

wowo bhoomi i am waiting dear.

Hi MOnika... dear i am postign the first part ..hope u enjoy reading... an i dont disappoint u ...😀
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Together By Chance

Part I

?Mujhe maaf kardena, mujhse galti ho gayi??

(Thunderstorms and lightening in background) looking upset as if he had typed a long mail, suddenly the electricity had gone and he hadn?t saved the details written. His face takes a 360-degree turn and he continued

? Ria meri hi beti hai, Main kya karta .. tumhari khushi bacchey mey thi.. isliye main Roma ke kareeb gaya aur ek raat woh hua jo hona tha? sirf tumhari khushi hi dil mey thi? kuch hi samay mey Ria Roma ke peth mey thi.?

The women standing in front is Seema, she screams with eyes wide open like she just had a camel ride and would fall with another jerk

?Nahiiiii, Nahiiiii?..Nahiiiiii? Meri sautan laye.. Sasuma key taney seh liya maine; lekin Sautan ke sitam nahiii sehsaktiiii?.

The Man continued,

? Main nahi jaanta tha, tum Maa bansakti thi? (giving an expression with sad baby face making her feel he is so innocent) Maa ne kaha to maine tumhari khushi ke liye..?

Seema cried and her tears flowed as if someone is washing his house balcony after 20 years and water been pushed out? she said,

?Oh Sasuma ney yeh sab karwaya? meri zindagi mey saut le agayi?Ek aurat hotey hue dusri aurat pe atyachaar??

She stamps her feet and the background sound becomes too loud with mantra and sloks?as if the mother earth is shaking with her cries.

The director says, ?Cut! Fantastic job?.

The director is talking with the female lead actor who played Seema and tells her she was Superb and she will be the award winning Bahu of this year as well for sure. Their serial titled, ?Kamaal hai Saas Bahu ki Khichdi?, was the most popular and highest ranking show.

The lead actors sat, the female lead prepares for the next shot in the temple crying before the god, there was a interesting creative difference going on between the director and the writer over using Ganeshji murti or Durga Maa?s murti. The lead male actor of the serial has nothing more in the episode left. He was glad after a good one month he got at least some dialogues to say or else just romancing without dialogues and standing when the Saas Bahu fight starts he use to feel sleepy most of the time on the set.

The male lead of the serial his real name is ?Asit Bhasin?, a model who came from Delhi to make it big in the Indian film industry but got nothing, just few ads to his name. For his livelihood, he agreed to be a dumb character in a women centric serial on television. This was a better option for him than taking the bitter reality in the modeling world, which was bitchy, and male models could go any extent to get the chance to make it big. His strange experience at a nightclub where a transsexual person invited him to be a Jigalo (male prostitute) for some quick bucks made his head go for a toss. He felt a bit safer to struggle here in television land. A spineless character he played on television but the serial was popular and he got real good money. All the romantic scenes in the serial were the highest surfed & largest downloads took place on the net world.

Asit?s female lead in the serial her real name is ?Tanishka?, Asit and Tanishka were rumoured to be dating and the Telly world buzzed with what?s happening between them. All their fans wanted them to get married. Asit was always attracted towards her beauty. Asit was living all alone in this big city of Mumbai and most of the time he spent on the sets. He and Tanishka were actually having an affair but didn?t want to make it public till their dreams of making it big come across and he was sure to have marriage plans in future. He believed in commitment and wanted to wait for her as long as she wanted. Asit was in love with her, he would be ever ready to drop her, ever ready to be with her any time, do anything, accompany her to different locations and try and convince other co-actors , and the team as per her requirements. Tanishka bagged all the Television awards and Asit was there to clap around and hug her. He never even got a mention with his name personally been taken by Tanishka, she would thank him as she mentioned, ?Thanks to my co-actors? nothing more or less every time. The serial went on for a good 2 years and still was going strong.

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Edited by bhoomikauttam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow a lovely part and a very interesting concept gr8 job cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey bhoomi, u surely gave me shock when i read the beginning...untill i read..that bit...Cut !!.......Kamaal hai Saas Bahu ki Khichdi...lolz..as usual this FF too will be diff frm the others that u've posted....surely luks v. interesting....enjoyed reading the first part...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol nice part
I dunno why put the girl seems a lil self centered...
neways cute story, the beggining was funny
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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow a lovely part and a very interesting concept gr8 job cont soon

Hi Jyothi, am glad u liked the part and the concept hope ur interest continues ... will post next part soon dear...

Originally posted by: binidoshi

Hey bhoomi, u surely gave me shock when i read the beginning...untill i read..that bit...Cut !!.......Kamaal hai Saas Bahu ki Khichdi...lolz..as usual this FF too will be diff frm the others that u've posted....surely luks v. interesting....enjoyed reading the first part...

HI Bini dear... u got a shock...lol...areey yaar maine aisa kya kiya... ahhahha I know beginning se to anyone will feel na.. this sotry is mong the typical TRPs builder stories 😉..lekin u know yaar I am tooordinary to write astory that extra ordinary .. so my story to beginning now after the cut ..😆... hope its intersting and u like reading the parts.... enjoyed the first small part..... will be posting hte next soon..

Originally posted by: imdudehead

lol nice part

I dunno why put the girl seems a lil self centered...
neways cute story, the beggining was funny

Hi.. u liked the part that so nice to know.... Yup Seema's charcter is much mroe explained in the next part and I hope u like readin the next part as well.. . he u foudn the story cute... already hmm 🥰.. funny lets hope u like the next part as well...😀

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