~' Together By Chance '~ ( Part XXVII ) page 23 - Page 26

Originally posted by: charming.angel

hey bhoomi di,

awesome !! loved this one too di...
i mean ths was neither love nor arranged....it was mere destiny !! love that was beyond the realm of superficiality and mere attraction n glamor...wch was pure n altruistic...trustworthy n understnding in all forms...n care n concern too...kinnari cld hav easily left asit on his own whn he suffered but she didn't despite it being a contract marriage 😊

it evn gave d message of girl edu....its simply wow k u nt only write a story fr d sake of wrtng bt it gives a glimpse to reality...its serious yet fun n alwyz enjoyable to read ur stories....

i mean ths story was so clean and so beautifully described...the emotions n each n evrythng
i really really....i'm in awe of ur writing....u rite almost on evry subject imaginable and its wonderfully portrayed.....its nt a particular genre u follow...it hs evrythng ..!!...

abb toh itna kaha hai k...words r falling short...😊

love u
-fatima

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Fatima,

hey u read the whole story so soon.. it didnt look lonnng enough for u I guess.. So glad to know that u liked the story so much..

yup its neither love nor arrange but destiny..and u liked the way their is true love blossoming nad not attraction gamour but love developing with tiny bits of reality touch where u feel and u really dont ned huge twist to do that..

yes truly I tried to brign up girls education..and so nice to knwo u liked that fact in it..and yes for me story writing is simple easy adn fun but i dont want to send a message it happens as what i write i have to belivein it too..i get into the hcarcters as i portray their emotions.. i am glad u liked the way the meotions r written in this story.. u found it seriaous fun and every thing..enjoy awww makes me feel absolutely fantastic to know that..

U know what u feel that i dont write in a particular genre.. that the stories r different with different situation..made me feel very good..i really am still learnign still imporving and with so much affection, love support from u all..i hope to get better n better and never disappoint u all.. thanks soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for ur lovely comments. made me feel content at heart.. tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: charming.angel

hey bhoomi di

welcme ...i knw ur motivated by ur readers comments ....bt as alwyz im d last one to comment n last one to read most of d tym.... 😭 ....apart frm some wch ur wrting currently....

and yeah i read d story in one go..as my holidays r goin on n i've plenty of tym as of now... 😉
hey do read my story too if u get tym....maybe i'll get sm inputs where to improve n all....if u have tym seriously no complusion.....

and i love to read ur stories so i read n comment !! 😊

love u
-fatima

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

loved it di

Originally posted by: charming.angel

hey bhoomi di,

I wanted to comment on this story "Neighbours From Long Time" but the topic is closed....so im commenting here...hope tht's nt a problem 😊

Hi Fatima,

glad that u felt like reading the story Neighbours from long time.. oh ya topics many of them r closed..glad to get ur comments here though.. no problem.. much more glad dear..

well first off i loved this story....i cld actually connect very beautifully to ths one....esp Meet...
smtymes back i used to be jz like him...then someone like yogini came in my life as a frend n made me realize wat i was missing....ths story felt so close to me....apart frm d marriage thng😳

Aww i feel so happy that somewhere u could relate with story in ur life..and feel the hcracters as somoene in ur life present as wel.. so glad ot have Yogini in ur life..she is an optimistic..

I loved the way u chalked out both d characters...esp yogini....shez so optimistic n wonderful n beautiful too.....being beautiful need not alwyz mean attractive rite.....its much more...

glad u liked Yogini here and her charctereisation.. i truly enjoyed writing abt her.. felt getting positve myslef to be in her place and sayign those..happy u felt the same..

the concept too was different frm ur other stories as usual..!!...

the concept.. i am glad u felt it was different..though my stories r simple but u can feel some difference..

one thing tht i found very similar was...yogini's thot LOVE IS LIFE

"LIFE ROCKS? JUST get the fact clear... LOVE is LIFE?? In short U Have no option but to LOVE LIFE? U will automatically know LIFE much better and LOVE as well?"

i mean i too thnk on similar lines.....as a matter of fact....my blogs name too is LOVE IS LIFE
some of my frnds feel im obsessed with love.....only I knw im nt....its clear cut similar wht yogini said to meet....i was like awwe....so similar thot....i mean smwhr thy r ur thot's only....n i felt yaar koi tho aisa sochta hai.......this story was very near n dear to me.......

Wow...!! u feel the same.. glad na our thinking match..i mean its my thought also but with the way presented as it suits Yogini..hmmur blog has those words.. nice na.. ur friends wonder..hehehe.. areyyy whatveer how mcuh practical we become..somewhere emotions do get u , u cant resist withotu thse feelings.. and its true in every sense.. its just u get or not..u can feel it anyday..

but sadly i cldn't post the comment der .... 😭
never mind i did outta here..!!...

aa u could have requested i woudl have opned the ff... but anywyas right i got to hear it now...and happy that u liked it so much..
loved it ....simply awesome....evn d songs were superb !! 😊

take care,
fatima