~' Together By Chance '~ ( Part XXVII ) page 23

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Kritika

@rajeevskitu

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#51

Bhoomi!!!!!!!! Khari Kamaee🤣...............hehehe....that was too good....... 😆.....10 Rs for cold water...... i guess it's better to live in 5 start hotel.......😉.......

that tanishka is so shameless🤢........... she came back to asit bcoz her film stalled?? idiot........ she deserves much more worse treatment than this😡.... asit was really acting like a gentlemen....... but atleast this made him happy.......

so finally!! friendship started........ i guess they still have to face many ups and downs together.....that is how their relation grows strong.........

that was very sweet ...........asit has a count of letters her sister wrote and treasured them like a precious ornament😊...........

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

abotu Kinnari's dad did i say he has a past.. ? i did say abt pain..

oh.........oops!!!😆 i read pain as past.....my fault😳......hehe......... ok will be waiting to see wot "pain" he really has😉............

overall it was a veryyyyyy sweet part.......👏

will be waiting for the next part........

bye......

take care.....

P.S: i saw ur ff tumse milkey just yesterday.........dunno how i missed it😕😔......... i'm half done thru it.....will complete it by today and leave my comments....... till now it was veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice......... ashu is such a sweetheart😍❤️....... ofcourse not more than jeet😃⭐️...........hehe....... anyways.....bye......

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Himani

@mad_lovee

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Hey bhoomi... both the parts r awesome ....da comparison thing was gr8...i never saw anyone comparing himself dat much with other flim n telly stars....it was total mast type...i can never forget da convo they had while he compared himself with other stars...and in today 's part u hve shown the true face of today's human...one is so emotional n one is so mean .....these days it has really bcum difficult to identify a person...when some one talks to u with so much love n care...u can nevr know whts goin on in their mind at dat time...r they really our wellwishers or they hve some other motive behind dat lovely talks.Neways thanks for entertaining all of us n yeah thanks for makin him delhi wala:p sab stories mumbai mein nahi ban sakti na;) ab aadhe se jayada tv actors delhi ke hain;) woh smoking wali line bhi achchi thi ki delhi ki air mein hi poison hai ......:p waise dekha jaye mumbai bhi pichche nahi pollution ke maamle mein:p Hey dat khari kamai thing had happened with me as well...when i made a chapati first time...my dadi gave me 50 bucks for it n when i made tea for the first time..my dad gave me 20 bucks.....par ab meri koi khari kamai nahi hai:p bas first time ki hi mili thi...hehe chalo cheti next part post karo i m dyin to know wht will gonna happen next:((

take care

love u,

Himani

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#53

finally i read the entire story and its amazing

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#54

wonderfull verry nice both parts i love its too good too read you show what people thing real .

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sanjh

@nisisanjh

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#55

i m so egarly waiting to see all these moment on screen with each passing day .... today's part too was a mstr pcs... one thing i just realised that both Kinnari n Asir r not my favs ...i mean everytime aisa hota hai ke..i m partial to any of dem eithr ur hero or heroine... this time for me both r ok n normal ... dono mein se ek bhi too gud or ovr da top nahi hai... if i like her atitude den i love the way Asit replies her everytime ....

The best part was khari kamai bit ... lol ... bring just half glass of watr den it will b 5rs... ahhhh... i enjoyed so much reading it ....

Edited by nisisanjh - 17 years ago

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#56

loving the story so far! Sorry, no time for a long review right now...Will post more next time.

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: rajeevskitu

Bhoomi!!!!!!!! Khari Kamaee🤣...............hehehe....that was too good....... 😆.....10 Rs for cold water...... i guess it's better to live in 5 start hotel.......😉.......

that tanishka is so shameless🤢........... she came back to asit bcoz her film stalled?? idiot........ she deserves much more worse treatment than this😡.... asit was really acting like a gentlemen....... but atleast this made him happy.......

so finally!! friendship started........ i guess they still have to face many ups and downs together.....that is how their relation grows strong.........

that was very sweet ...........asit has a count of letters her sister wrote and treasured them like a precious ornament😊...........

oh.........oops!!!😆 i read pain as past.....my fault😳......hehe......... ok will be waiting to see wot "pain" he really has😉............

overall it was a veryyyyyy sweet part.......👏

will be waiting for the next part........

bye......

take care.....

P.S: i saw ur ff tumse milkey just yesterday.........dunno how i missed it😕😔......... i'm half done thru it.....will complete it by today and leave my comments....... till now it was veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice......... ashu is such a sweetheart😍❤️....... ofcourse not more than jeet😃⭐️...........hehe....... anyways.....bye......

Hi Kitu... so khari kamee made u laugh...😆.. five star hotel... ya u r actual right Asit ko idea dena chahiye... and Ya Tanihska is just a gone case..btu u know in reality such females are thee in the industry .. and hey dont have any shame ..even if they r shown the door they come and talk so lovingly.. Asit didnt want to disrespect the fact that she is women.. hope she just stayas away from his life...😕

Ya ups, and down... though i am experiemntign in thsi stor few of other small bits.. i hope u like reading them. i have written so many small thigs of ups n down in my otehr stories that want otmake this apart fromt hem.. so keep waiting ...

Oh , u r reading.. my story Tumsey Milkey.. heheeh Rajeev and Amna .... am really glad u like reading my work and that u read half of that long story mans u dint felt liek sleepgin reading..hehehe ya Ashu was the fun element in it..hope u like the story as a whoel..and after u finsih reading that.. do read Pyaar hai! its a one page story but its taken form where Tumsey milkey left as it was my friends farmaish...😳

tc kitu... have a nice time and enjoy...

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: mad_lovee
Hey bhoomi... both the parts r awesome ....da comparison thing was gr8...i never saw anyone comparing himself dat much with other flim n telly stars....it was total mast type...i can never forget da convo they had while he compared himself with other stars...and in today 's part u hve shown the true face of today's human...one is so emotional n one is so mean .....these days it has really bcum difficult to identify a person...when some one talks to u with so much love n care...u can nevr know whts goin on in their mind at dat time...r they really our wellwishers or they hve some other motive behind dat lovely talks.Neways thanks for entertaining all of us n yeah thanks for makin him delhi wala:p sab stories mumbai mein nahi ban sakti na;) ab aadhe se jayada tv actors delhi ke hain;) woh smoking wali line bhi achchi thi ki delhi ki air mein hi poison hai ......:p waise dekha jaye mumbai bhi pichche nahi pollution ke maamle mein:p Hey dat khari kamai thing had happened with me as well...when i made a chapati first time...my dadi gave me 50 bucks for it n when i made tea for the first time..my dad gave me 20 bucks.....par ab meri koi khari kamai nahi hai:p bas first time ki hi mili thi...hehe chalo cheti next part post karo i m dyin to know wht will gonna happen next:((
take care

love u,

Himani

Hi Himani dear.... SO u read the parts and kitn ahasssi bataooo😆u enjoyed the comparison part... ab kya karun. delhi ke log hi itne pyaare hain when i write abt themm they satrt talkgin so nice.. that u like reading it..😳..

ya himani 2nd part does reflect how peole when behave very goody u feel that kuhc to kadbad hai ....and kya yeh tthanks kyun bola.. oh kitne baar i told u na dear.. no sayign thanks.. i am able to write with the support of u all .. no thanks warna next part mey tumhara naam shamil kardungi..phir bolna nahi😉...

Delhi mumbai pollution is everywhere but u know what Delhi ka level bohat badgaya tha with less rains and more cars on road and use of diesel instead of petrol whcih gives so much smoke....Ya u r right most of the actors Delhi ke hain... and they pursue to coem tomumbai , thats hwy i choose that way.. reality se clsoe rakhna tha...

Oh wow! to know u got khari kamaee as well.. now thats really interesting...50, 20... i wont give u khari kamee i am sayign pehle se hi..for the parathas and lassi u will give me...😆😃.. will post the next part soon... hope u like it...and enjoy reading...it...

luv u ..tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
finally i read the entire story and its amazing

Hi jyothi dear.. so good to see ur comments... so finaly u read enjoyed.... hope u like reading the remaing parts as well..

Originally posted by: monikaseth
wonderfull verry nice both parts i love its too good too read you show what people thing real .

Hi Monika... i am glad u r enjoyign reading..and feel its showing some real and u enjoyign ur time.. hope the reaminign past make u feel the same way.....

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

loving the story so far! Sorry, no time for a long review right now...Will post more next time.

Hi Rabia... ooo hoo no need to say sorry i really can udnerstnad the time constraints.. so nice to know u loved the story so far..hope u like the remainign parts we well...just enjoy .. tc.. have fun dear..

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

i m so egarly waiting to see all these moment on screen with each passing day .... today's part too was a mstr pcs... one thing i just realised that both Kinnari n Asir r not my favs ...i mean everytime aisa hota hai ke..i m partial to any of dem eithr ur hero or heroine... this time for me both r ok n normal ... dono mein se ek bhi too gud or ovr da top nahi hai... if i like her atitude den i love the way Asit replies her everytime ....

The best part was khari kamai bit ... lol ... bring just half glass of watr den it will b 5rs... ahhhh... i enjoyed so much reading it ....

Hi Sara,

Aye chorri.... u r egaerly waiing yeh screen pe ayee? sapne matt dekho yaar.. eheh mere pass itna money nahi to produce such a film😆😆😆....u enjoyed this part as well na...😃

U have a very valid point in this.. abotu Kinnari and Asit they both r just normal.. and u dont feel anyoen has made u feel liek ur heart wantign such a person...thats how the two must be feelign abt each other.. hpe u love the tiny bits in teh story and have a great time reading... u enjoyed the khari kamaee hope u have fun in the next part reading as well...

luv u dear.. and ur comments r usually spot on ..

Bhoomi

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