my 1st ff Love?ar.r as shilpa pt.20pg30

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Posted: 17 years ago

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i m really sorry for the short part. thank u very much for comment.

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Posted: 17 years ago

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really an awsome update please continue it soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

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gr88888888888888888888888 prt........................... luvd armaan's entry........... superb!!!!!! update..... thnxxx 4 d pm......plzzzzzzzzzz update soon 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey wow really loved ur part
its really awesome loved armans entry a lot
and who is another girl 😕
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thanks for pm
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Posted: 17 years ago

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promo: spana's entry.. anjali's best freind coming....

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Part 4
Ar: oh I m sorry.
Girl turn and said it's okay.
Ar: tum?
R: ha me to kya?
Ar: lagta hai ki mera aaj ka din bahot bura hai.
R: mera bhi.
Ar: kya kaha tumne?
R: kuch nahi waise bhi samaj ne waale samaj gaye.
Ar: whatever.
He leaves from there and go to dr.kirti's office.
Dr.k: good morning interns. Aaj se aap sab mije report karege.
Interns: yes man.
Ar: doc. Haamari duty kitne hours ki hai roj?
Dr.k: (angrily)kyu?
Ar: me to sirf pata karana chahata tha.
dr.k: 10 hours.
At: kya?.
Dr.k: 11 hours..
Ar: abbe chup ho jao…..to atul
Dr k: 12 hours.
Anjali, ridhima, sapna and kunal look at atul and armaan…
At & ar: we r sorry.
Dr.k: it's ok…….
They all get their duty…..one girl came behind ridhima and ridhima got scared.
Girl: kyu dar gayi na..
R: tum bhi na..muje to dara hi diya.
Girl: bahot bholi ho tum ridhz..
At: wait aab ye kaun hai?
Ridhima intruduce her friend.
R: I m sorry meet my best friend sapna.
S: hi atul nice ti meet u.
At: same here ridhima kitni lucky hai.
R: kyu?
At: tuhari to puri family hi yaha hai muje to lag raha hai ki me sanjivani me nahi Gupta nivas me aa gaya hu.
R: khana kha ke jana.
At: kyu?
R: tumne hi to kuch der pehle kaha tha ki tum mere khar me ho aisa tumhe laga.
S: ridhima tum bhi na.
Sapna met everyone.
Ar: hi I m armaan.
S: sapna.
Ar: I can't believe it.
S: what?
Ar: ki tum vo ridhima ki best friend ho. Haw cow can u spend your time with her.
S: excuse me u r talking about my best friend.
Ar: i m sorry friends?
S: friends.
Spana called everyone there.
R: kya hai?
S: ham sab aaj se nayi suruat karane ja rahe hain. To kyu na hum dosti se suruat kare.
At: ye to bahot acchi baat hai.
Every one shack hand.
Ridhima look at armaan agrily.
armaan smile.
Every one go on their duty.
Ridhima finish her duty and was waiting for sapna.
Armaan came there.
Ar: hi my dear friend.
R: hi
Ar: kya hua?
R: kuch nahi kyu?
Ar: kyu ki tum gussa nahi hui.
R(angrily): armaan….
Ar: ha ridhima.
R: ye me kiske saath argue kar rahi hu?
Ar: insaan se.
R: accha hua ki tumne muje bata diya. Thanks
Ar: u welcome.
Sapna came there with kunal and atul.
S: hi armaan and ridhima.
Ar & r: hi.
S: ridhima tumhe pata hai na ki kal tumhe mere ghar party me aana hai.
R: ha.
S (to ar,at,an & kunal): tum sab ko bhi meri birthday party me aana hoga.
Everyone: ok
Gupta house.
R: mom
Padma: ha beta aaj tumhara kaisa di gaya.
R: bahot accha.
Padma: aur tumhara anjali.
An: achha mom.
Anali and ridhima aaj tumhare liye ek surprice hai.
An & r: kya hai mom?
P: agar me tumhe bata du to surpeice kaise rahe ga.
An: mom tum hint to de sakti ho na.
P: thik hai aaj wo aa raha hai jiske saath anjali bahot
Khel ti thi.
R: mom me change karke aati hu.
P: ha lekin jaldi aana.
Ridhima go from there.
The doorbell reng and anjali go there to open it. She open the door and shocked.
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Edited by cutelove1111 - 17 years ago

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@cutelove1111

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: star_fan
wow...nice...do cont it... 😊

thank u but i think some people did not like it.😭

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

nice one really an awwsome update please continue it soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

#49

wow really superb update loved it i didnot expect that it is ridz really awesme update 👏
omg again u left me on cliff hanger
who is that person y did angie got shocked 😕
hmm loved AR scenes
thanks for pm
pls pls update it supersoon