my 1st ff Love?ar.r as shilpa pt.20pg30 - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
wow.........gr8 part....so,ammy knws ridz......OMG,its gettin interstin......plz continue soon........pm me surely
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww very nice part
armaan/riddhima already bachpan mein mill chuke hai aur armaan/anji dono mill kar riddhima ko satathe the lol bechaari riddhima uska abh kya haal honga
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
hey toooooooooo gud............. do cont soon....... waiting 4 whts nxt

thnx 4 da pm/........... & do pm me when u will cont
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys i m really sorry........i will continue my ff after some month b/c i m going on vacation....i feel so bad.......i m so sorry.........i will try to update my ff if i have time.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey!
nice FF just started readin it can u plzz PM me wen u update the next part n do continue soon........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part and please continue soon and please do PM me
soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part:6

Next morning at gupta house….

Ridhima was doing aarti.

Om jai jadish hare…..

Ar: ye kuan he suba suba?

Armaan get up from the bad and get ready n go downstair.

Ar: good morning chachi.

P: good morning.

Anjali came downstairs.

An: good morning ammy and mom.

Ar & p: good morning.

P: anjali ye ridhima kaha reh gayi?

An: mom tumhe to pata he na ki who har mangal war ko mandir jati he.

P: ha lekin aaj bahot der ho gayi. Shasank bhi ghar aa gaye he…

An: relax mom. Who aa jayegi….

Ar: anjali ham hospital saath jaye ge me tumhari bahar wait karta hu. Ok?

An: ha waise bhi ridhima to apni car me ayegi. Tum ruko me abhi change karke aati hu.

Ar: thik he.

P: armaan. To batao tumhare mom aur dad kaise he?

Ar: thik he. Aap ko bahot yaad karate he.

P: aur nani?

Ar: ha or ridhima ko to bahot yaad karti he..anty me bahar jaata hu…..aap anjali se keh dena.

P: ha bete.

Armaan go outside and take out his car.

Ridhima enter the house.

R: mom?

P: ha ridhima…..aaj der kyu ho gayi?

R: mom aaj meri car panchar ho gayi. Di kaha he?

P: anjali to upper change karane gayi he…..aur ha tum to ammy se mile hi nahi…..woh bahar he.

R:ha mom me abhi ja ke milti hu aap di se keh dena ki me bahar wait kar rahi hu….

R:(( to her self when she was walking outside) I hope ke ye di ka bachapan ka dost nahi ho.

She walk by the armaan's car. She stand behind armaan. She tried to see his face but she can't.

R: hi..i m ridhima.

Ar: hi? And turn…….

R: tum?

Armaan see around.

Ar: ha me lekin tum yaha?

R: pehle tum batao tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Ar: pehle tum batao?

R: mene tumse pehle puchha tha.

Ar: shh……..calm down ye mere uncle ka ghar he Aur tum?

R: no ways……..

Ar: what did u just said?

R: English shamaj nahi aati kya?

Ar: ha nahi aati kya aap sikha degi? please..

Ridhima's face was all red.

Ar: to me kab se class join karu?

R: agale janam me……

Ar: chalo ye janam to achha jayega.

R(to herself): bhagava mene aap ka kya bura kiya tha..jo aab muje iske saath rehna padega.

Ar: kuch kaha aapne?

R: nothing..waise bhi tumhe samaj me nahi aayegi….

An: I m so sorry ammy.

Ar: it's okay.

An: tum bored to nahi ho gaye na?

Ar: nahi…..

An: oh..ammy u already know ridhima…….my sister.

Ar: ha woh miss.bahenji right……

R: di aap usse keh dena varna…armaan inttrupt

Ar: varna kya…..aapne boy friend ko bulao gi na. waise woh he kaha?

An: london padhai karane…

Ar: to iss behenji ko bhi saath lejate to achha hota….india ki aabadi to kam hoti…..

R: armaan its enough I m not a kid…..and tum mujase aaj ke baad baat mat karana please….

Ar: who wants to talk with u?

An: ridhima and ammy just leave it….

R: di aaj me aap ke saath hospital aau gi kyu ki meri car ka tire punchal ho gaya he…….

Aramaan starts laughing…….

An: kya hua?

Ar: muje to miss.behenji ki caar pe haasi aa rahi he……bichari……..kitna weight uthati hogi rooj……

Ridhima ingnor him.

An: ha chalo waise bhi aaj me ammy ke saath ja rahi hu.

R:: di it's ok me taxi me aa jaugi…..

Ar: as u wish

Ridhima didn't find any taxi.

R: please god meri help karo na.

One car stops by ridhima.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
very nice part...full of fun...enjoyable...very nice....
plz next part soon..will be waiting....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice prt.. so ridz as a bf.. n was he d one who stops.. loads of suspense.. thnxx, 4 d pm.. update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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do ridz have a boy frnd?is it so?...hmmm...continue soon
waitin fr the next update...

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