my 1st ff Love?ar.r as shilpa pt.20pg30

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swetha10

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

Wow lovely update..... 👏 Whoz on the door????????i guess it would b Armaan 😉 Hey plzz continue soon 😊

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lakshmi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

an amzng prt..... wow!!!!!!!!! jus amzng..... can't wait 2 read d nxt prt........ ridz armaan argument jus added more flavour........n gupta niwas was hilarious............. waitng 4 d suprise.............. plzzz update sooon. thnxxxx 4 d pm...... 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

awwww very nice ff
plz continue soon..........

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Mona

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

hey nice update.....really good job...keep up......
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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

Part:5

an: tum?
Padma: tum isko janti ho?
An: ha mom ham aaj hospital me mile the.
P: beta tum andar aao na.
Ar: me sahi pate pe to aaya hu na. kya yahi gupta mantion hain?
An: ha?
P: andar aao na beta.
Ar: ha aata hu.
P: anjali tumhe kya hua?
An: mom aaj hi me armaan se hospital me meeli thi.
P: tumne armaan ko nahi pehchana?
An: nahi….?
P: tumne apne ammy ko nahi pehchana!!!!
An: ye armaan ammy hain.
P: ha.
Anjali smiles and hug armaan. Armaan's totlly confuced.
An: hey ammy tumne muje nahi pehchana? Me woh…hu.
Ar: aare ha tum to woh ho….woh kaun?
An: tumha ri majak karne ki aadat nahi gayi.
Ar: sach me tumne muje aamy kyu bulaya?
An: ammy me anji hu..
Anjali became sad.
An: mom ye to muje bhul gaya hain.
Ar: anji me aur tumhe bhul jau. Dard ko aur anji ko kaun bhul sakta hai.
An: ammy.
Ar: I m sorry.
An: it's ok. Lwkin tum yaha achanak kya kar rahe ho?
Before armaan answer anjali's question padma came there.
P: anjali ammy thak gaya hoga use fresh to ho jane do. Aur ha me to bhul hi gayi thi ki armaan hamare saath kuch din ke liye rahega.
When anjali hears that she become happy.
An: such.
P: aur ha tum ammy ko apne room ke baju wala room ka rasta dikhao.
Ar: thank u chachi.
Armaan and anjali go from there.
P: ye ridhima kaha reh gayi?
Padma goes upstairs.
Ridhima was in her room and writing a diary.
P: meri angel kya kar rahi hai?
R: mom aap ko to pata hain na ki me is dairy ko apna best friend manti hu.
P: ha muje pata hai. Tum to apne pehle pyar ke bare me us dairy ko hi batao gi na.
R: mom aisa kuch nahi hain. Me aapko promise karati hu ki me mere pyar ke baare me aap ko sab kuch batau gi.
P: ha to batao.
R: kya?
P: apne pyar ke bare me.
R: mom aap bhi na.
P: achha majak bahot ho gaya tum sau jao bahot der ho gayi hain.
R: ha mom lekin wo geust aane wale the wo aaye ke nahi?
P: ha woh aa gaye he tum unse kal milna.
R: thik he.mom.
P: good night beta.
R: good night mom.
In armaan's room.
An: armaan hum kal baat karege bahot der ho gayi.
Ar: ok….anji lekin woh tumhari choti bahen kaha he.
An: ridhz?
Ar: ha…jise ham dono bahot paresan karate the.
An: woh soua gayi hogi. Tum uase kal mil lena. Waise bhi kal ham sab saath hospital jayen ge.
Ar: thik hai. Good night.
An: good night.
Anjali go from there.
Armaan to himself: sanjivani taiya rehna dr. armaan malik aa raha hain.

Edited by cutelove1111 - 17 years ago

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swetha10

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

Wow amazing part... 👏 Nice to knw tht Armaan is Anjie n Ridzi's childhood frnd...n they all goin to stay together.... 😉 Very excited to c their meeting....plzz continue soon 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: swetha10
Wow amazing part... 👏 Nice to knw tht Armaan is Anjie n Ridzi's childhood frnd...n they all goin to stay together.... 😉 Very excited to c their meeting....plzz continue soon 😊

thanks.......

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Mona

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Posted: 17 years ago

#58

hey nice update...loved it...well cant wait to read more..please continue soon..
❤️MONA

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Nidha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#59

thanks for the update please continue it soon

Arz kiya hai, Kabhi to lee hogi Suraj ne Chand ki kiss, tabhi to chand me daag hai; Mumkin hai Chand ne dobara nahi dee hogi, tabhi to Suraj mein itni aag hai.

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago