my 1st ff Love?ar.r as shilpa pt.20pg30 - Page 20

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: swansea

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww amazinggggggggg confession di

loved it sooooooooooooooo much
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooon
swanzzy

thanks 4 your lovely comments.....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: yachna

hey wowwwwwwwwwww yaar yeyyyyyyyyyyy ridz said i lv u yeyyyyyyyyyyyy lts prty common everybody lts prty wow yaar aww armaan bechara hamesha kuch na kuch karkehi ridz confess karti hai hehehe bt lvd it sooooo mch yaar cnt wait fr d nxt prt
plzz this time cont sooooooooooooon gayab hi ho gayi thi.......
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

thanks 4 comments.......
i m so sorry for late updates.....
mid term r started and school......
i will try to update soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh👍🏼 its really an awesome one⭐️ so she confessed😛 at last😛😃 so happy for armaan😍 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"Like a dessert needs the water,
Like a flower needs the rain,
My soul is thristy for KASH,
My heart screams out KASH name.

Like a ship needs a sailor,
Like the stars need the sky,
KASH brighten up my world,
Like the moon lights up the night.

Like a movie star loves fame,
Like a poor man needs money,
I need and long for KASH love,
For KASH as sweet as honey.

When the twlight is fading,
And the sky is dark with blue,
Just remember this one thing,
KASH, I really do need you.

I'm so proud I have seen u on TV,
Would love to see u every time,
And I just want you to know,
KASH really light up my life."




thanks 4 your comment.....
i liked your poem..
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Posted: 16 years ago
plz plz update karo na 😭
luv ur ff 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
plz continue it soon plz




Edited by kvn1983 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi.

I m ending this ff because of finals and school and I can't update it on time. please comment.

Last Part

R: I love u.

Armaan was shocked. He had tears in his eyes.

Ar: I love u 2.

R: I know.

Ar: tumne bahot der kar di.

R: abhi bhi der nahi hue.

Ar: I can't believe it.

He hugs ridhima.

Ar: I will never leave u.

Armaan got a call.

Ar: I have to go.

R: tumne to abhi bhi kaha tha ki u won't leave me.

Ar: emergency.

R: oh..work comes first.

armaan go from there.

she was so happy.

Armaan was walking in hallway and smiling.

Nurse: aaj dr. armaan ko kya ho gaya hai?

Ar: love.

Nurse: kya?

Ar: nothing.

At gupta house.

Sh: ridhima. Jaldi karo.

R: ha papa.

Sh: aaj maine om uncle ki family ko ghar pe khane ke liye bulaya hai.

Bell rings.

Ridhima go upstairs to get dressed.

Padma opened the door.

P: kaise hai aap?

Santi: thik hai.

P: andar ayiyena..

Ar: namste aunty.

P: aaj namste no hi..

Armaan was looking around.

Ar: aunty ridhima aur anjali kaha hai?

P: anjali hospital me hai and ridhima uske room main hai.

Ar: thanks.

Armaan go to ridhima's room.

Ridhima was standing in front of mirror.

R: I m so confused. Kya pehnu aaj.

She was talking to her self.

R: yellow. No. pink. No.

She was trying all dresses.

She finally wears red.

Armaan walked to her.

He stands behind her.

Ar: lovely.

Ridhima turns to him.

R: armaan tum yaha?

Ar: to kaha jau.

R: mera matlab tum kab aaye?

Ar: jab tum apne aap se baat kar rahi thi.

R: armaan' (Armaan interrupt)

Ar: shhhh''

He puts his finger on ridhima's lips.

Ar: maira bhi aisa hi haal hota hai. Tum muje sone nahi deti. I just think about u. and u know why I love u so much.

R: why?

Ar: muje tumhari aankhe bahot hi pasand hai.

Ridhima close her eyes.

Ar: muje tumhara sarmaana bahot achha lagta hai. I can do anything for u.

R: armaan koi aa jayega.

Ar: I love your smile.

R: armaan please.

Armaan was going closer to her.

Ar: aane do..

Someome called ridhima.

R: haan aayi..

R: armaan let me go.

Ar: nahi..

R: mom?

Armaan leave her hand.

Ridhima run from there and laugh.

Ar: I just love her.

Ridhima go downstairs. It was to dark. Armaan came there 2.

R: mom..

Ar: kaha hai sab?

R: armaan.

Ar: I m here ridhima.

Someone turn on the lights.

Everyone: surprise.

Ridhima and armaan was shocked.

R: papa..

Sh: tum dono ko kya laga ki tum sab humse chhupa sakte ho.

Ar: kya?

Om: tumhe nahi pata?

Ar: dad..please tell me what?

Santi: tum dodno ek dusre se pyar karte ho.

R: aisa kuch nahi hai.

Ar: ha mom aisa kuch nahi hai.

Om: hume laga tha ki tum dono ek dusre se pyar kaarte ho. Hum to aaj tum dono ki engagement karne wale the. I guess it was a misunderstanding.

Sh: I m sorry everyone. I guess we have to cancel the party.

Ar: ruko uncle.

Sh: kyu?

Ar: aap ne jo bhi kaha who such hai.

Om: hum ne aab kya kaha?

Ar: I love ridhima and she loves me 2.

Om: ridhima.

R: haan uncle armaan jo keh raha hai who such hai.

Shashank and om start laughing.

Ar: aap log haas kyu rahe he?

Sh: hum sab ko to pehle se hi sab pata tha.

R: kya?

Sh: let me tell u everything.

Armaan yaha aaya hi tumse saadi karne ke liye.

Ar: kya?

Om: maine tumhe yaha ridhima se hi milne ke liye bheja tha.

Sh: aur jab tum yaha aaye to maine anjali ko tum dono pe najar rakhne ke liye kaha tha.

Anjali came there.

An: aur maine tum dono ko saath hospital main aaj dekha tha.

R: di aap.

An: haan aur ye sab me muje atul ne madad ki hai.

Atul came there.

Ar: atul..

At: I m sorry yaar.

R: aur kaun kaun hai tumhare saath.

An: don't worry mere saath sab the kunal, sapna and your best friend RJ.

They all came there.

All: sorry guys.

Ar: atul, kunal aur rj ko to baad me dekh luga.

Om: chalo aab hum jiske liye mile hai wo kaan to karde.

Sh: aaj mere dono beti ki engagement hai.

R: kya?

Padma: haan. Tum aur armaan and atul aur anjali.

Ridhima and armaan was shocked.

Ar to atul: ye sab kab hua.

At: aaj..

Ar: kya?

At: maine aaj anjali ko propose kiya tha and she said yes.

Ar: bahot aage nikal gaye.

At: thanks.

All four get engaged.

Armaan hugs ridhima.

Ridhima had tears in her eyes.

R: I love u.

Ar: I love u 2.

The end
Edited by cutelove1111 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
waoh🤗 its really awesome⭐️ pretty one😊 superb😛😍 so everyone knows about AR cool😎 & even making their pairs and everything is planned plz continue it soon😛😉 but why u write end😕

"Dosti k vade ko uhi nibhate rhenge,
Hum har waqt apko uhi state rhenge,
Mar bhi gye to kya gum,
Hum ansu bankar aapki ankho me aate rhenge."


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Posted: 16 years ago
hey wht a cute ending bt hmm ufinal startd i cn understand thts why u ended up sooo fast i am miss r ff soo mch yaar jst lvd it nd happy new year it ws luvly ridz confessd nd tbh wre sooooooooo happppppppppy nd got engangd also wow superb yaar nd their family members also knows wow cute hmmmmmmmmmmmmm superb
tc
nd all the vry bst for ur exams...........
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: yachna

hey wht a cute ending bt hmm ufinal startd i cn understand thts why u ended up sooo fast i am miss r ff soo mch yaar jst lvd it nd happy new year it ws luvly ridz confessd nd tbh wre sooooooooo happppppppppy nd got engangd also wow superb yaar nd their family members also knows wow cute hmmmmmmmmmmmmm superb
tc
nd all the vry bst for ur exams...........
luv yachna

thanks....
i will pm u when i will start my new ff.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazin update as usual
sad tht u wont contd it further but itz k studies com 1st
all the best in life

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