my 1st ff Love?ar.r as shilpa pt.20pg30 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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uppppppppppppdateeeeeeee soooooooonnnnnnnnnnn 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
nice yar....plz cont it soon...with long part....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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please continue it

har subha teri muskurati rahe har shaam
har shaam teri gungunati rahe,
tu jise bhi mile is tarhe se mile,
k har kisiko teri yaad aati rahe
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i m sorry but i will not able too update my ff daily as my final exams r comming. i have too stay after school for my project as it is a last week for school. i hope u can understand it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice ff..initersting...continue soon please....can u pm when u update..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutelove1111

i m sorry but i will not able too update my ff daily as my final exams r comming. i have too stay after school for my project as it is a last week for school. i hope u can understand it.

its ok when u get time please update it

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3
K: ouch me bhi inshan hu.
An: oh.muje to pata hi nahi tha anyways thanks for telling me.
R: di aap bhina.
At: aab muje pata chala.
K: kya.
At: ki ridhz muje 2 interns ke bare me kyu puch rahi thi.
K: kyu?
At: kyu ke who tumhe aur uski di (he stops) by the way (to anjali) aap ka naam kya hai?
An: Anjli shasank gupta.
At: nice name.
An: I know.
Anjali go from there.
At: kitni tikhi hai.
K: tum to abhi se hi dar gaye. Ab to tum use achhi tarah jante hi nahi ho.
At: to jaan luga.
R: atul woh meri di hai.
K: chalo ye sab chodo lekin bakike intern kaha hai.
At: ha woh kaise hoge.
R: guys woh jo bhi hoga lekin hame dr.kirti ko report karna hai yaad hai na tumko.
K: hamare paas abhi bahot waqt hai. Chalo ham caf me jate hai.
At: ha chalo.
R: ha lekin papa ne kaha tha ki dr.irti bahot strict hai. Hame jaldi aana padega.
K: ha haam aa jaye ge.chalo.
At: ha lekin tumhare papa kaise dr.kirti ko jante hai?
one doctor enter in the locker room.
Dr: good morning doctors.
Everyone: good morning.
Dr: aap ne hospital dekh li dr ridhima gupta.
R: yes dr.shasank.
Doctor ask atul and kunal. And leave.
At: ye to bahot achhe doctor lagate hai.
K: atul ye sanjeevani ke dean hai.
At: to ye dr.gupta hai. Chodo ye sab ko ridhima tumne muje mere sawal ka javab nahi diya.
R: kaun sa sawal?
At: ki tumhare papa dr.kirti ko kaise jante hai?
Kunal and ridhima laugh.
At: tum haas kyu rahe ho?
K: tum baat hi aisi baat karate ho.
At: mene kya kaha?
R: kuch nahi lekin tum mere papa ko mil choke ho.
At: kya? Kab? Kaha?
K: aaj. Yaha.
At: tum mera beja fray mat karo. Muje baatao.
R: ha ha thik hai baba.tum dr.shasank ko milena.
At: ha to.
R: dr.shasank. papa
At: aab tum muje bewakuf maat banao dr.shasank aur tumhare papa. Please forgive me.
R: if u don't want to believe than u don't have too.
At: ok I believe u..happy.
Someone enters the door. He bump into ridhima. Ridhima gets mad.
R: excuse u.
Guy turn around and we see handsome…guy.
Guy: what?
R: aap ko nahi lagata aap ko sorry bolana chahoye.
Guy: it's ok. Waise bhi ladkio ko to mujase takrane me bhahot maja aata hain.
R: sakal bhi dekhi hai aapne apni.
Guy: tum armaan malik se baat kar rahi ho.
R: kya farak padta hai.
Ar:: vaise bhi me bahenji se baate nahi karata. So please.
R: baate to aise karata hai ki jaise is hospital ke maalik ho armaan malik.
K: leave it ridhz. Chalo yaaha se.
Armaan goes by amjali.
Ar: hi beautiful.
An: hi.
Suddenly one nurse came there.
Nurse: aap ko dr.kirti ne unki office me report karane ko kaha hai.
Ar: chalo dekte he ki ye dr.kirti kaun hai.
Armaan was walking in the hallway and bump a girl.

i m sorry for short parts. please comment.
Edited by cutelove1111 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lovely part.. 👏 I liked Armaan's entry..it was cool..... 😎 Really enjoying ur FF....Plzz continue 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetha10

Lovely part.. 👏 I liked Armaan's entry..it was cool..... 😎 Really enjoying ur FF....Plzz continue 😊

thank u...i m happy that u guys like my ff.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey that was a nice part...continue soon...thankc 4 the pm..do pm next time.....thankx....
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