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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 28

Recap-Ranbir and Kanya makeup. Ranbir tells Aditya about the misunderstanding he and Kanya had with Aditya telling him off.

Ranbir and Kanya go to a private clinic for a scan of their baby. Kanya takes off her jewellery and gives them to Ranbir and lies down on the bed with Ranbir by her side. The sonographer comes in and puts some clear gel on Kanya's stomach. Kanya feels a little cold and laughs. The sonographer was called Emma who put the transducer firmly against Kanya's stomach and sweeps it back and forth. Ranbir and Kanya could see a clear image on screen and actually see their baby. They could hear the heartbeat. Kanya was very emotional. She couldn't believe she was seeing her baby and started crying. Ranbir was in awe of the vision in front of him.

E-Would U like to know the sex of the baby. U R over 3 months pregnant now. I can tell U if U want?

R-Its up 2 Kanya!

K-I want it to be a surprise.

E-Theres double beatings. If i'm not mistaken there might be another baby. I think U R having twins Mrs Nanda. Can U see there.

K-Ranbir i can't see it.

R-Where?

E-Here!

R-Oh yeah.

K-I still can't see.

R-Kanya if U would stop crying for a second i think you will be able to see.

E-There Mrs Nanda.

R-Can U see it now?

K-My babies. I can see them. Ranbir this is the best day of my life.

R-I can't believe we R actually seeing them.

K-I know.

R-I can't wait to see them.

E-R U sure U don't want to know the sex of the baby?

R-R they both the same sex?

K-Yes i want to know otherwise if they R i don't want to know.

E-Yes.

R-Thats all i want to know.

Emma does some tests on Kanya. She takes a few samples of blood. She then tells them that the results will arrive home to them and gives them a cd with the ultrasound and a photo. Ranbir and Kanya head out of the clinic and thank Emma so much. Kanya and Ranbir beam with the biggest smile on their faces.

Back at home Aidtya bhaiya is home with laddoo's and some chocolate. He also knew that Kanya hadn't eaten due to going in the clinic h bought her supplies of sour Mangoes and a house full of chocolate and ice creams of different variety. He knew she'd need it. Looking at the smiles on their faces Aditya knew it was good news. He was so eager to learn of the news and in a way was sad that he wasn't there. Kanya gave Aditya bhaiya a hug. Ranbir grinned.

A-Kya baat hain dono itna kush.

R-Double good news jo hain.

A-Tum hara kehna kya hain?

K-Judwaa. We R having twins.

R-I wanted to say it.

K-Jaan i couldn't help myself.

R-Next time i'm telling.

K-U can say it on the phone baby to Mummyji and my parents.

A-I didn't think wins ran in our family.

K-They run in my mums side of the family. I used to have one but she died.

R-U never told me that.

K-It was when we were babies.

A-I'm sorry.

K-Don't be we have a new set to look forward to.

A-We can tell Archie the news she will be over the moon and give her something to look forward to.

K-Yes Ranbir mujhe milwao na. Your infamous sister. I want to see how she looks like.

R-We will soon now go eat something first. Then we will go.

K-Make me something.

A-If Ranbir makes U something he will give U food poisoning. In this state its not right.

K-I want burnt toast with Chocolate spread.

R-Have U gone Mad?

K-Its one of my unusual craving but these 2 love variety as U know.

R-U go sit or take a lie down and i will make it for U.

Ranbir starts to make toast a la Ranbir style and adds loads of Chocolate spread and some orange spread and gives her strawberry ice-cream with strawberry syrup loads of it piled on. He takes it to Kanya and she eats it all up and the ice cream. She gulps down the orange juice. Ranbir can't believe she didn't leave him any.

He goes down stairs and gets himself something to eat a sandwich and makes a mess of the kitchen. Aditya bhaiya comes in and cleans up the mess. They both drink coffee while looking at the cd. Aditya bhaiya starts crying. Ranbir is too moved and starts crying.

A-In my day we never had that.

R-Technology na its wonderful.

A-I know. U R so lucky teri biwi tujhe kitna pyar karthi hain Jab main baap bane wala tha Astha ne mujhe gharse nikaal diya tha aur kitna ghaliya.

R-Kanya bhi kam nahin ghali nahin deti mujhe aur bahar nikalna tho kya uff thak nahin karthi. Akele rihti hain. That more painful to watch.

A-Mera bhai atleast U know she loves U. She has really changed your life.

R-I know. Oh god time dekho.We need to go see Archie.

A-Pehle dekh Kanya soh rahi hain ya nahin.

Ranbir goes upstairs and sees Kanya up and ready looking radiant. She was wearing Pink kurtha with jeans and some pink matching jewellary. He shut the door behind and started to pounce on her. Kanya moved away quickly.

K-Ranbir hume dher ho rahi hain. I want to see your sister now move it.

R-Kanya i so want to ravish U now.

K-Leave that for the night. U can do what U wish but not now.

R-Kanya just once.

K-Ranbir U know with us its never once.

R-But.

K-But nothing. If we don't get moving U will be missing one heck of a night.

R-Oh But i want some serious making up time.

K-U will get it and more now come on.

Ranbir lets go of the door. He sulks and then grabs hold of Kanya and gives her one big kiss that lasted for ages. They go downstairs and Aditya bhaiya starts laughing at the 2. Ranbir wonders what it was. Kanya looks at Ranbir and blushes she gets a tissue from her handbag and wipes Ranbir's lips and the 3 get out to the car. Aditya drives in the front while Ranbir holds Kanya's hand in the back. They both continue to look at each other.

They arrive at the NY centre where Archie is getting her treatment for her drug addiction. They enter the main hall feeling a little nervous especially Kanya as she wanted Archie to like her. Who knew what might happen but she was Ranbir's sister so she would love her no matter what. Aditya took lead as he knew where she was they opened the door na see a frail looking person stood up gazing at them with eager eyes but with a curiosity of the unknown. Archie took one look at her brother Ranbir and ran to him and embraced him. She then started hitting him with her fist in a playful manner.

AN-It took U 3 months and 1 week 2 days to see me. Maine dekha bhai ko behen keliye koi pyar hi nahin.

R-Archie baby U know i love U but i was in india for 3 months and then got delayed for a week.

AN-What about the other 2 days?

R-Trust me it was some emergencies at home and work i had to tend to. But for U Archie i have all the time in the world.

AN-U R forgiven for noe but in the future there better not be any excuses.

R-Yes mam. Look who's here with me?

Archie looks at Kanya up and down. She didn't have the faintest idea who she was nor did she care. She assumed it was a friend of her brothers. Actually Aditya bhaiya did tell Archie about a new woman in Ranbir's life.

A-I didn't tell her U got married. I thought she better hear it from U.

R-Its your new bhabie.

A-Yeah right! I would have known.

R-Everything happened fast.

A-Well bhabie U R crazy taking on bro but hats off for taming Mr Romeo but watch your back!

R-She doesn't mean that!

AN-Joke.

K-I like your sense of humour very cute. I can't wait to meet U properly.

R-So hows my sister doing?

AN-Good

R-We R thinking of taking U home ok. After talking to the doctor and final assesments tomorrow.

AN-Cool.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
short update but it was gr8
continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
i am secend love it it was a great part
plz update soonn as possible
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Posted: 17 years ago
Really GREAT Update!!
It was really good!!!
And I hope you update ASAP!!!!!!
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was short and sweet (couldn't be anything else with all the syrup,ice-c and spreads).

thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Well this couple R in for some shaky times with Archie causing them problems. 😳

As U will find out in the next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
oo its excellent i want more!
continue soon!
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That was cute and reli good plz continue soon!!!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
very cute update plz write more soon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 29
Recap-Ranbir and Kanya go for their scan and find they R expecting twins. They along with Aditya bhaiya visit Archie and promise to take her home with them.
Archie is at home and getting used to everything around her and her bhabhie Kanya who she only knew for 5 days. All she cared about was having the freedom to do what she wanted. She had gone cold turkey of drugs the past 6 months now but she still had the urge to go to her supplier for drugs. Ranbir made sure there were no forms of drugs even paracetamol was band from the house. As for money he never left any in the house apart from $100 with Kanya for emergencies and Archie was band from her mobile. Ranbir also made sure that the phone lines were disconnected. Kanya was strictly told in no condition was she to give Archie any money nor give her her mobile phone as Ranbir already knew from first hand experience the deception and lengths Archie would go through to get her next fix.
Lucky for Archie or unluckily for Archie she had her contacts still available to cater to her demands. Kanya was non the wiser. She just wanted to be liked by Archie. It was the day of the party. Both Archie and Kanya were getting ready with their make up as they already had their outfits on. Kanya wore loose fitting skirt suit that was on that hid her baby bump. Archie wore a sexy red skirt suit with a semi top. Looked really good. Smoking. The guys were going to Toms place where the party was being held.
Kanyas Skirt suit
Archies Skirt suit
Ranbir and Aditya came to get the girls to the party. Ranbir loved Kanyas outfit but didn't have the heart to tell her it was a little too revealing as he didn't want any guys ogling her. He knew thats exactly what they would do if they saw Kanya. She might be a little over 3 months pregnant but she wasn't fully showing yet. She hadn't put much weight on either despite how much she ate. Ranbir didn't like what Archie was wearing either but knew if he said no Archie would wear something even shorter to annoy him.
At the party everything was going at its pace. The guests were just arriving. All of Ranbirs colleagues were present and were waiting to see Kanya the woman that finally tamed the Playboy that no woman was able to tame. Kanya felt some eyes on her and a lot of whispers. There were a lot of women there. She didn't like the way they were looking at Ranbir. She had her arms round Ranbir as if to show the preying women that he was hers and nobody elses. Ranbir just looked at Kanya sensing her discomfort. He knew she wasn't comfortable around businesswomen/men and being in party functions. Even he found the scene boring but what could he do? His friends were adament to welcome Kanya and Archie with a big bang. It was an elegant affair with cool Rnb tracks playing. They saw Tom and started talking to the host.
T-U guys finally made it!
R-Obviously U can't have a party without the person it was meant for not turning up.
Akash-Archie u've come. At least now we know the parties just begun. The party girls here.
Arc-Obviousluy. Like i would miss coming to see all my favourite people in the world.
T-Theres never a memorable party without U. Is there Archie?
Arc-The party girl isn't going to let U guys down.
T-Good but please lay low on the drinks. We don't want U drunk.
Arc-Well it won't be much of a party without alcohol.
Akash-U look good.
Kat-Archie. Baby girl U look great. Where did U get the dress from?
Arc-It was on sale. Bhabie and I decided to get the same kind of outfits. Looks cute nah.
Kat-I see K is here. Hi Kanya! U R looking good. Make sure Ranbir stays close to U. I'm sure the women round here will have every opportunity to snag him. I doubt U will even et to see him as he's so popular here with the women. Keep an eye on him.
K-I'm sureif he knows whats good for him he will keep his distance. Ranbir i have full faith in him. He loves me only.
Kat-Yeah whatever. Thats what the last 15 women said before U. Keep him off the liquer. He tends to get carried away. If Ur not careful he might end up with someone else like he's done everytime.
Arc-Leave Kanya bhabie alone Kat. U really R so katty. Whats the matter with U?
Kat-I'm just giving a friendly warning.
K-Its ok Archie. Ranbir is his own man. Unlike some people i am not weak and feel threatened by others. U should keep a look out for a man of your own Kat and let others worry about themselves. As 4 Ranbir and other women thats in the past. He has me now and keep your comments to yourself in future. Got that.
Kat-Whatever. Keep a close eye is all i'm saying.
Ranbir goes to mingle with other people in the party where there is a big turn out. He's busy catching up and there were several women present but he only had eyes on his Kanya while Aditya bhaiya had his eye on Archie. She wasn't trust worthy at Parties as there were people from all walks of life present and they didn't know who her suppliers were. Ranbir was networking. So it all fell to him to keep an eye on things running smoothly.
There were several dances that everyone took part in Ranbir as always with Akash and Tom were swarmed with women wanting to dance. Ranbir declined as he only wanted to be with Kanya but Tom thought as they just wanted the one dance Ranbir should give in. Ranbir asked Kanya for permision as he didn't want to upset her. Kanya felt she had to prove she wasn't insecure and that she trusted Ranbir in front of Kat so she said it was ok. Ranbir wanted her to say it wasn't fine and that she wanted him to only dance with her but then again Kanyas mood swings were everywhere he didn't know what he was getting half the time. Akash, Tom and Ranbir like the old times were swaying to the music. They all danced with several women. Kanya sat down annoyed with Ranbir. How could he be dancing with them all and not even bother with her. He was awefully close to some of them. She tried to hide her discomfort from Kat who was sat next to her. Kanya looked how close Ranbir had the women around him. He was smiling at hem and laughing at their jokes. She knew Ranbir loved her but did he miss his partying days. She clenched her fists and tried looking away.
Kat-I told U keep an eye on Ranbir.
K-Shut up Kat and find a guy to dance with.
Kat-Like U R? Ranbir hasn't even been with U a single moment since he got here. What does that tell U about him?
K-He's just dancing with them. R U sure its not U with the problem.
Kat-I can dance the night away with anyone. But U? Only Ranbir will bother with a pauper like U.
K-Whats Ur problem Kat?
Kat-I don't have one. Its U that has one. Look at Ranbir. He walks on eggshell around U. Why? He's worried little miss insecure Kanya will throw a hissy fit. He's enjoying himself. Can't U at least look like U R having a good time too.
K-I am. The only person i want to dance with is over there and i will when i am good and ready.
Kat-Please. Theres a few people that want to meet U like our associates at least let them get to know the Kanya NAnda.
K-They look kind of drunk.
Kat-Its a party. One dance won't hurt. I bet U don't have the nerve to even dance with anyone else.
K-Why R U still here?
Kat-I want to wait for Ranbir like the rest of them.
Arc-Bhabie just mingle. Its good to get an insight on everyone bhaiya works with. Kat is just a little off. She still has a thing for bro and is licking her wounds.
Kat-Like U would know.
Arc-Both of us will hit the floor come on.
Kanya and Archie go together and get some attention. Kanya ends up drinking what Kat gives to Kanya. Punch with alcohol mixed in it. She only has a little but as she isn't used to it gets a little intoxicated enough that she isn't self aware of what she was doing but not drunk. Both sister in laws dance the night with male admirers. Ranbir by then is looking for Kanya. He noticed the hurt in her eyes so didn't spend as much time with the ladies as he normally would have. The ladies kept on touching his hair like Kanya would and knew she'd be mad. Kanya hated girls touching Ranbirs hair as it was her thing now. He was careful not to be kissed but there was only so much he could to fend them off him. Ranbir wanted a dance with his wife. He was searching for her.
Ad-Kisko dund raha hain?
R-Kanya ko!
Ad-She's with Archie. Over there.
R-Why is she dancing with them for?
Ad-Like U were dancing with all them all them girls. Its a party. Let her enjoy.
R-I don't like all them holding her like that.
Ad-Like she liked U being held by them women. She spent ages looking at U. Not once did U look her way.
R-But!
Ad-Kat was with her! Who knows what she said to her. U know she is very katty and Kanya has issues with her confidence. Let her enjoy herself.
R-Why do i put myself in these situations? I asked her if she ok by it.
Ad-Like she was going to say no. Ranbir haven't U learnt anything. Expect the unexpected with women. Archies with her she will be fine.
R-Well i'm not letting her out of my sight. I nevr looked at the women i danced with any other way but as friends.
Ad-Were they all friends?
R-I'm not sure they might have been. I can't remember half the women i've been with.
Ad-I knew the men in our family were thick but this thick.
R-Well i don't care about them but Kanya.
Ad-Let her know then.
Ranbir saw Kanya dance with some of his colleagues and some guys he didn't know as they were assossiates of associates and not all of them knew Ranbir's wife. Kanya danced quite close to one person and Ranbir was getting a little angry at how close he was to his Kanya. Kat came by and an angry Ranbir wanted to know what she's been saying to Kanya. Kat wanted a dance so he decided he'd give her one.
R-What did U say to Kanya?
Kat-Nothing that i wasn't meant to say. Only the truth. ranbir stop sweating over nothing and enjoy yourself.
R-Kat?
Kat-Well maybe that U missed the old way of life.
R-U will never learn.
Kat held onto Ranbir real close with Kanya looking at them. Kat just whispered into Ranbirs ears making Kanya suspect Ranbir a little. Kanya didn't know the guy dancing with her but she just looked at him and then at Ranbir. She tred to get away but he was drunk and held really tightly onto her. Ranbir looked at Kat and told her they were never going to be more than friends and that it was time she moved on. Kat tried to kiss Ranbir only to be brushed aside. He went upto see Kanya and saw the worried look on her face and rushed to her side. He could tell she wasn't enjoying herself.
R-Hey Matt can i dance with Kanya? U've been with her sometime.
M-Ran man she's really good at dancing i want more time with her.
R-Bro she's my wife now get your hands off before i break them.
M-Geez relax. So she's your wife huh? She must be a real fire cracker in bed.
R-Matt shut up and go get another drink.
K-Leave Ranbir. Go dance with your pretty women.
R-Kanya!
M-See she wants to dance with me.
R-Get your hands off my wife now.
K-You're hurting me.
R-Thats it.
Ranbir takes Matt to one side with the help of Aditya bhaiya who makes sure Matt is with Tom. Ranbir gets back to Kanya and tries to make her see that the only person he wants to spend the night with is her. He takes her to the dance area and just moves really slowly.
R-Kanya tumne kya kiya.
K-Maine punch piya.
R-How many glasses?
K-1 or 2?
R-Thats it.
Kanya nods her head and rest it on Ranbirs chest.
R-Kanya U should have said something. U do realize that Kats trying to cause trouble.
K-Well U always seem so flirty with women! Why?
R-Its my nature but Kanya the only person i have my eyes on is U.
K-I wanted to scrath their eyes out for touching U.
R-I wanted to break Matt for touching your bare back buti can't blame him. U R that damn hot.
K-I am aren't I?
R-U sure R!
K-Well U better show me.
Ranbir kisses Kanya and many heads turn. Some women dissappointed and others in surprise. But they knew for once rumours of Ranbir being married were true.
Archie was having fun of her own drinking and partying with Tom who made sure she wasnt being involved in other activities like drugs.
Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago

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