FF-Hate 2 Luv U finale pg27 28/7/08 updat - Page 14

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PART 25

Aditya, Kanya and Ranbir R in France as a stop to go to America. Kanya's Morning sickess had made the trip a little longer than it would have so they decided that after that day they would take the next flight to America which was the next day which gave them plenty of time to check places out. They wento for dinner and Aditya bhaiya got chatted up by some French ladies Just above the Strip on the 11th floor of the Paris Las Vegas' Eiffel Tower replica, Chef J. Joho's Eiffel Tower Restaurant . It had breathtaking views of the Las Vegas strip and is regarded was the crown jewel in Paris Las Vegas. Kanya loved the place it had a romantic feel. At least the little one took some mercy on her but she knew it wouldn't last. Ranbir sat Kanya down next to her and Aditya sat round the same table with a French lady named Monique. Unfortunately he didn't understand a word she said but that didn't stop Monique from feeling Aditya. He liked the fact she'd kept him from thinking about booze At the same it made him pay more attention to his date

Ranbir ordered for his appetizer Grand Seafood Platter, Service for Two / Lobster, Shrimp, Crab, Oysters, Clams which everyone shared Kanya wasn't into eating much. Neither was Monique they were saving themselves for desert. Kanya tried Baked Herbed Crepe,Artichoke and Walnuts, Slow Roasted Tomato Coulis, Basil Pistou and Ranbir Loin of Ahi Tuna Served Rare, Crispy Rice Galette, Baby Spinach, Citrus Soy Coulis.Monique and Aditya have the same. Kanya and Aditya drink Orange juice while Ranbir has Champaign as well as Monique celebrating new beginnings. Ranbir laughs at something Monique says and just doesn't mention anything. Monique goes to the ladies room except she'd left Aditya hanging while Adi hasn't the faintest what Monique said. He too goes later into the Mens room and stays there a while. This gave Kanya and Ranbir sometime to talk to each other holding each other.

K-U R very quiet! Say something.

R-Aditya bhaiya's date was there i had to stay quiet otherwise i'd have been dead laughing.

K-Why?

R-Monique asked bro that would she go to bed with him and Aditya bhaiya told her he was gay.

K-I never heard him say anything.

R-He saide it in French. He's like your Mom can't speak English properly Adi bhaiya is the same with French. He would have been better off not saying anything.

K-U R so mean. U could have told him that.

R-I didn't want to bring it up. It bad enough his confidence is down.

K-I wonder what else u haven't been telling me. Ranbir this place is beautiful.

R-Not as beautiful as U. This place is nothing compared to the beauty U bring out of it.

K-U only just say that because i'm your wife. Wait until I'm huge then i will see how much U love me.

R-J'taime Kanya Nanda. No matter how much your stomach swells up its our love that U R carrying. I can never dream of loving another woman but U. Get that in your head.

K-Te ammo Ranbir Nanda. See i spoke Italian

R-Where did that come from?

K-I saw it on this soap on cable on tv with the subtitiles.

R-Here i though U were a sophisticated woman. Tum chalo ge.

K-Ranbir i hope this never ends. The two of us like this. I want everyone to be as happy as we R.

R-Kanya i will try to never see a tear in your eyes. How's the little one doing? Is he behaving?

K-He! Woh She be ho sakhti hain?

R-I know but pehla ladka hoga. Tumko kayal karne ke liye. I don't mind if its a girl as either way i will have a carbon copy of U. Dikhne me tumpe jaye.

K-Ranbir woh bilkul tumare tara hoga. Wenever U make me milk i put Kesar in it so that when U feed it me he will be just like U with a picture of U under my bed.

R-Itna pyar karoge to kisi ki nazar lag saktha hain.

K-Ranbir America main kaise safar karungi. This morning sickness doesn't seem to get ant better.

R-We can always go next week.

K-No U R needed by Archie. We have to get there.

R-Tell me yeah i will mmake sure U R fine. Today araam kar lena.

K-Ranbir araam kaise karungi. I'm not thinking about rest.

R-Toh kya soch rahi ho?

K-U ! me! Alone.

R-kanya U have a dirty mind. (Kanya gives him a flirty kiss and can taste the champaign)

K-Aditya bhaiya's been gone for a bit.

R-Where is he?

K-U don't think he's back on the wagon?

R-Hang on he's coming.

A-Ranbir Monique chali gayi thank goodness. She was fun but woh bohut forward kisam ki ladki hain.

K-So affair karne ki iraada nahin?

A-Never. Astha ever found she'd hire a hitman or she'd take the supaari herself.

R-Well desert is on its way 4 Chocolate Eiffel Tower plates. Looks like 1 extra.

K-Its all mine.

R-Tum do plate ka sakhte ho kya? Nahin na?

K-No i've been saving myself for this with cream.

R-Tumhari sweet tooth ki kya karoo?

A-Kahna chahti hain to kahne dena. Its upto her.

R-Well if U feel sick don't come to me.

K-Ranbir shut up warna tumhara portion nahin bachega.

So they all eat up and leave. Aditya had a wicked but quiet time. He was looking forward to seeing Arhita the youngest sister of the Nanda family. He'd overheard she was in trouble. Maybe both sibling can help each other get through this rough patch. They drove to the Ritz hotel in Paris to get some ZZZZZ before their next flight which was made for the afternoon to help Kanya with morning sickness. Aditya fell asleep as soon as his head hit the pillow.

Kanya was in a different mood. Ranbir picked Kanya up and placed her on the bed. He took his clothes off and switched off the lights and tried to go to sleep but Kanya wasn't having any of it. She started touching Ranbir seductively. Nibbling his ears. Ranbir kept on trying to move her off but she kept coming back with new tactics. She started to trace her lips on Ranbirs shoulder blades. She then moved over to face Ranbir and started to tickle him. Ranbir couldn't take it no longer.

R-Kanya tum mujhe pagal bana dogi. We have a long day. Sow jao.

K-Tum itne kareeb ho. how do U expect me to rest.

R-This journey is taking a toll. Reserve your energy.

K-Nahin karti. Kya kar loge? (Starts nibbling at Ranbirs lips)

R-Kanya this is not helping. U know that. How do i resist U? Yeh karoge to mujhe cold shower lena parega.

K-Fine we'll take one together.

R-Bimar par jaogi.

K-To saath main recover karenge.

R-Aur baby?

K-Baath main sach hain. But if i'm not happy then baby won't be happy.

R-Kanya.

K-Ranbir. How much longer do I have to ask. Fine next time don't come for nay. I'm going out. I told U i'm not sleepy.

R-Zid mat karo.

K-Then give me what i want. I know Ranbir U R fighting very hard but that Chocolate is making me feel hyper with the coffee crme.

R-I can see U R bouncing about too much. I told U not to eat the crme. U even ended up eating my share.

K-Stop sulking. U were talking about the chocolate not the crme.

R-U R enough to make a sane man mad. I must be insane trying to say no to U but i always give in.

K-Cool. I guess i still wear the pants here.

R-Don't go telling anyone this. Nasha mujhpe utharne ke bajay tumhe kaisa lag gaya? Come here U temptress. Ab main tumhe nahin chodunga.

K-Well i'm not going to waste time being chased.

Kanya launches herself at Ranbir. They spend the rest in each others arms.
Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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dear dat was excellent !
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Part 26

Aditya bhaiya, Kanya and Ranbir finally get to America. Kanya had a rough two days with her morning sickness still bad but was greatful that they weren't in the air. Ranbir was relieved for Kanya. She didn't say anything and was quiet which wasn't normal for Kanya at all. Aditya bhaiya was loving the view. It wasn't much but at least it wasn't India. He loved the fact that his wife wasn't with him. He'd have a few months away from her. Actuall a year or lifetime away from her would have been ideal.

Ranbir's driver took them to Silverlake, New York.Kanya was fascinated with the place. It was the first time for her out of India and thanks to Ranbir she'd experienced being in Paris France and now America. She was looking forward to her life in New York with Ranbir. Ranbir himself seemed like he no longer had to be a different guy he was in India for respect to his mother. Now he could be as wild as he wanted but with Kanya.

Aditya bhaiya was already familiar to New York as he visited Ranbir the year before but everything looked slightly different with the road works but that was all that changed. Aditya remembered Ranbirs bachelor Pad. It was huge. Ranbir had better have the whole place tidied up or Kanya was in for a surprise of her life. She didn't know how wild Ranbir was. He just hoped all was well.

The driver drove through huge gates parked the car in the driveway. Kanya came out and couldn't believe what her eyes saw. Everything was so green and miles bigger than the Mansion Ranbir had in India. Ranbir couldn't take his eyes off of Kanya. Her face jer reaction just blew him away. She had that starry look. He never saw that in any woman before. Most of them were already used to the high life. Ranbir grabbed hold of Kanya and picked her up and Aditya bhaiya opened the door. They entered the Mansion and Kanya was floored when she entered. Everything looked beautiful. It looked like only men lived in the place with no traces of decor done by a woman. It was sleek but simple. Very Ranbir.

R-How Do U like the place?

K-Like the place. I love it but theres just one thing wrong. It doesn't look like anybody's been living here.

R-Well Now it will be occupied by both U and I. Along with Aditya bhaiya and if things go well Archita. Provided her meeting go well. I want this place to be redecorated by U Kanya but i will bring in specialists to help U.

K-I would love to. I'm going to have so much fun.

R-I can tell its made your day but know this U will use the help that gets given to U. No stubborness.

K-Fine.

A-U kids enjoy yourself I'm going out for a bit. Ranbir din't worry about my whereabouts. I'll be with Tom. The driver will drp me off and he'll stay with me until then.

Aditya bhaiya goes out and Ranbir and Kanya R left all by themselves. Ranbir has a very cheeky look on his face. Kanya is too busy looking around the 3 rooms. It even had a games room with a huge TV screen on the wall. Ranbir sure lived a life of luxury. Kanya looked up in the hallway. There were spiral stairways. She headed up and Ranbir followed her up. He immediately got her in his arms again and headed for his room.

Kanya just shrieked. He took her into the far room which was all pale blue. Kanya looked at Ranbir hungrily and just started to kiss his face off. Ranbir in response just dropped her on his bed. Kanya pushed Ranbir off of her slightly teasing him and turned hum round with her facing him on top. Ranbir just held Kanya tight taking strands of her hair behind her ears. Ranbir thought he was about to get lucky but Kanya moved away and was about to head out to see the other rooms. Ranbir got up and held her hand.

R-Wher do U think U R going?

K-To see the rest of the place.

R-Theres plenty of time for that. I want U Kanya. Now in my bed.

K-If U didn't notice U have already got a piece of me in the Paris Hotel and in India.

R-Well i want U right now.

K-Well too bad. I'm not in the mood.

R-Fine then i wont take U sight seeing.

K-Ranbir i told U after i've seen the rest of the house.

R-Kanya i want to christen ever room with U if i have to but i want it now.

K-U R so dirty.

R-I'm so dirty rmember what U did to me in Paris. Now i want the same dose here.

K-Oh so U R wanting some action here huh. I'm not in the mood

R-What if i say when U want me i'm not in the mood. Kya kar loge.

K-Then i will hound U so much.

R-Then this is what i will do with U.

K-Fine then have it your way but i want to see alot this week. I want your undevided attention.

R-That U have but i need some time with my sister.

K-Thats justifiable.

R-Then what R U waiting for then.

Kanya comes in and gets Ranbir onto the bed. She starts taking his clothes off and he does the same. The make out in their bedroom. They head to the next room and end up downstairs. Kanya goes for some ice cream which makes Ranbir want some and they end up together again. They remain like that for a few hours. Kanya gets tired so Ranbir takes her to their room and she takes a small nap. He spends the next half hour looking at Kanya. He just coudn't believe how the past 3 months changed his life. Kanya truely brought a happiness he never thought he could ever experience.

Ranbir gets up and starts to put his clothes on again but Kanya stirs up and pulls Ranbir round his neck and makes him come down to her level. He breathes heavily. Kanya starts biting Ranbirs lips slightly and he just lunges in for more time with Kanya. She gets really happy.

R-I thought U weren't in the mood.

K-I was lying. I'm always in the mood to make out with U.

R-So what was all that then?

K-I just wanted to see how much U want me.

R-I think i will always want U.

K-Ranbir i don't think i'll have a problem living here if we both get a lot of alone time like this.

R-I think i'd never get out of this house then we can stay in all day.

K-Ranbir U will take me out sight seeing and shopping.

R-I'M hungry for food. Why don't i take U out. I'll drive U all the way and tomorrow i have the day off anyway so we'll go see what the rest of the gang R upto.

Ranbir and Kanya go out to a Posh restrurant and have a meal and some more desert. Strawberry red devil. Kanya seemed to polish everything in sight. Ranbir got the bill when Sasha came in and saw Ranbir. She came round and winked at Ranbir and gave him a huge kiss on his lips. Ranbir just stood dumb faced. He pushed Sasha away and just took Sash to one side. Kanya obviously ticked with seeing her husband kissed by another woman. Kanya followed them and heard what they were saying

R-Sasha U can't go kissing guys like that. I'm a married guy now.

S-What pull the other one? Ranbir U play dirty. I thought U might want another night with me. But i guess thats off.

R-Sasha its true. I'm not like that. Kanya is the one and only. I'm not playing. Besides Did U want her to run off.

S-Actually i thought if i kissed U she'd walk away. I guess now she's going to want to tear my head off. Probably shoot U too.

R-U better go.

S-Do some damage control.

R-Bye.

S-Sorry girlfriend. If i'd known he was married i wouldn't have done that but he wasn't the marrying sort.

Sasha leaves and Kanya is livid. She was on cloud 9 but her bubble burst and Ranbir had some explaining to do. All the way through the journey Kanya was silent. Not one word was said to one another. Ranbir tried to explain but Kanya wanted to go home and then sort it out. They finally arrived and Kanya had her hand round her stomach protectivly almost trying to sheild her baby away from Ranbir.

K-Who was she?

R-Kanya U won't like it.

K-So tell me. I want to know.

R-U know how i told U i used to go out and date alot of women never settling with anyone. Well she's one of the girls along with others i've had one night stands with.

K-(Starts crying) Ranbir Thats very hard for me to hear. I can't believe of all days my first day. I didn't know this truth i'd have to face it. I knew before but reality has only just sunk in. Seeing her in person. Why did U take me there?

R-I guess habit. Being with U completely made me forget.

K-That U took all them cheap one nighters there.

R-Kanya i know it hurts but please.

K-Please what? I hate this. Just give me a little time.

R-I love U.

K-Do U?

R-Of course i do.

K-So seeing her doesn't make U want to be with her. Be back to.................

R-Kanya nothing can make me want any other woman. U R the only one.

K-So if i ever left U wouldn't

R-Kanya if U left that would be the last straw.

K-I need to be on my own. Its too much.

Ranbir was just angry at himself and the situation he put them in. He was euphoric that he just instinctively took her there but he needed to to zone in that there were alot of women and he had to get Kanya to realize that he was a changed man.

Kanya was now feeling a little insecure about herself. She really thought things could never be any better but seeing Sasha had just got all her insecurities out. She just felt so alone in this country and 1 day hadn't even gone yet. She dreaded to think what the rest would be like.Ranbir. Why did she have to fall for him? She decided she's better off sleeping in the room next door. She needed some peace but doubted if she'd get a wink of sleep. She just locked herself in the room.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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ooo awesoem dear !!
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