FF about RN- In a diff. style (ud P35) - Page 11

PART 6

Just to remind u all I am giving a small recap.

RECAP:

Raj and chobey talked on phone about some bicycle and mechanic. Naina talked with BC and he told her that she can come only as a resident and only if she agrees to stay with Raj as his wife. Naina is coming to KMA within a week.Raj's class. Ritu entered in the KMA.

NOW:

Raj's room:

Raj talking on a phone….

Raj: but sir, how is this possible….

Voice: this is true captain… you have to believe our intelligence's report….

Raj: but sir, I don't know about it…. And Navin never hide anything from me…

Voice: captain… we have spent our 3 years on this…. And this information came from a very trustful source… so believe it captain…

Raj: sir…. I am still not getting…. A girl was working with Navin when he was in jail…. And she helped him…

Voice: I know Raj it's very difficult to believe but its true…. jailer Raichand who was on duty that time has told me this…

Raj: but sir what exactly he told you…..

Voice: now Raj listen very carefully…. Jailer Raichand ne bataya…

Jailer: sir, ek baat batana tha….

Person: bolo raichand…. Waise bhi ab tum 1 week mei retire ho jaoge… tumhare saath kaam karte hue bahut accha waqt bita…

J: sir, Captain Navin ke bare mei batana tha….

P: KYA???? Navin??? Navin ke bare mei kya batana chahte ho…

J: sir, darasal jab Navin sir yahan pe the to ek din ek ladki unse milne aayi thi…

P: kya ek ladki…. Par aisa kaise ho sakta hai…. tumne dekha us ladki ko??? Kaun thi wo??? Naina to nahi thi????

J: nahi sir… Naina bitiya ko to mai janta hun… wo koi aur thi… bahut pyari aur masum si…. Kafi udas lag rahi thi… Navin se bas 5 min baat karke chali gayi…

P: tumhe pata hai usne Navin se kya baat ki thi….

J: nahi sir…. Par uske jaane ke baat Navin beta kafi shaant lag raha tha…. Ek ajeeb si khamoshi aur sukoon tha uske face pe… maine usse itna shaant aur restful kabhi nahi dekha tha….

P: tumne usse pucha ki wo kaun thi…

J: pucha sir… lekin Navin ne kaha ki koi purani dost thi… jo aaj usse sab kuch jaane aayi thi…

P: aur tum ye baat aaj bata rahe ho raichand… tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho???... ho sakta hai wo ladki hamari koi madad kar paati… ho sakta usse kuch maloom ho……

J: jaanta hun sir,… par Navin… usne mana kar diya tha… usne kaha tha agar maine kisi ko bhi us ladki ke bare mei bataya to wo baat us ladki ke liye khatarnaak ho sakti hai… jin logo pe Navin ko bharosa hai unhe wo khud is bare mei bata dega…. Aur phir pata nahi mai khud kuch nahi bol paaya… mujhe apni family ka khayal aa jaata tha.. agar kisi ko ye pata lag jaata ki main eek anjaan ladki ko ek declared traitor se milne diya to shayad mujhe bhi galat samjha jaata……… par sir…..

Mujhe pata hai aap Navin sir ke mentor the… aur aap aur Rajveer sir ko batana thik hoga… kyuki aap dono Navin sir ko aaj tak begunaah maante hai….

P: Raichand ye baat batane mei tumne mei kafi waqt laga diya…kaash us ladki ke bare mei kuch pata lag jaaye….

Raj: par sir… Navin ne mujhe kabhi koi aur ladki ke bare mei nahi bataya.. sivaye uski girlfriend ke…

Voice: haan Raj… pata hai… jab Navin KMA mei tha to usse kisi se pyar ho gaya tha….

Raj: haan sir… aur mujhe lagta hai kahin na kahin uski GF uski wo haalat ki jimmedar thi… aur ab ye ek aur ladki…ek min. sir mujhe kuch yaad aa raha hai….

V: kya hua capt…

Raj: sir jab mei Navin bhaag gaya tha aur hum usse dhund rahe the aur vo mujhe ek ped ke piche mila tha….. tab Navin……..

Navin: Raj tujhse ek baat karni hai……

Raj: Nahi abhi nahi Navin…… teri haalat bahut kharab hai………

Navin: nahi yaar jyada waqt nahi hai… tujhe kisi ke bare mei batana tha….

Raj: Navinnnnn… paagal mat ban tu abhi apni Gf ko yaad kar raha hai…

Navin: rajjjjjj… aajke baad uska naam bhi mat lena… mujhe tujhe kisi aur ke bare mei batana hai…

Raj: kuch mat bol shayad koi yahan aa raha hai…

Navin: nahin Raj… bahut jaruri baat hai…. ek ladkijo teri aur Naina ki madad kar sakti hai.. maine aaj subah hi Naina ko uske bare mei bataya tha…

Raj: Mann ko pata hai na usse puch loonga… tu bas abhi bol mat.. tujhe do do goliyan lagi hai… aur aas paas police bhi bahut hai..

Navin: tu mujhe kab tak aise bachata rahega yaar… ye log mujhe kabhi na kabhi pakad hi lenge… aur phir tujhe bhi….

Raj: jyada baat mat kar… tujhe mai tab tak bachaunga jab tak mei jinda hun…. Mei apne rehte tujhe kabhi kuch nahi hone dunga….. mere paas ek plan hai…… vo gaadi dikh rahi hai……..

V: iska matlab Navin tumhe kisi ke bare mei batana chahta tha… kaun tha wo..

R: pata nahi sir… tab maine uski baat sunne se mana kar diya… aur kaha Naina se puch loonga.. lekin Naina se us din ke baad…………..

V: Raj its ok… ek min…. tumne kaha Navin ne Naina ko bataya tha… Iska matlab……………..

R: sirrrr……..ye to maine socha hi nahi… iska matlab Naina ko pata hai us ladki ke bare mei……..

V: hmmmm Raj….. kaash us din Naina ne tumhe apni aankho se na dekha hota… to vo tumse baat kare bina nahi jaati…. Ab Naina ka mila bahut jaruri ho gaya hai………………

R: sirrr…. Vo pal shayad meri puri jindgi ka sabse mushkil lamha tha…. Par ab…. Sir Naina se milna hi hoga…. Kaash us din…….

V: its ok raj… ek min usne kahan ki uski gf ke bare mei baat na karo to kahin aisa to nahi…………….

R: sirr… isi baat ne mujhe pichle 3 saalo se pareshaan kiya hua hai….. mai bas ye sochta hun ki vo ladki mujhe kahin bhi mile to usse puchun ki aisa kya hua… usne aisa kya kiya….aur ab ek aur ladki aa gayi hai….

V: Raj uski GF ke bare mei mujhe to jyada nahi pata… pata nahi kaun thi.. kahan se aayi thi… par jab se ye pata chala hai.. ki ek aur ladki bhi thi tab se mujhe ek umeed jagi hai……

Raj: sir… mujhe us ladki ka pata lagana hoga… ho sakta hai wo ladki hamari koi help kar sake… ho sakta hai usse Navin ki GF ke bare mei kuch pata ho… sir plz aap jailor Raichand se pata karne ki koshish kijiye ki wo ladki kaun thi….

V: mai koshish karunga Capt… par tum bhi apne mission pe dhyan dena… ye mat bhulna ki bhale hi tum yahan mainly Navin ko begunaah saabit karne aaye ho.. par tumhara mission is desh ki suraksha ke liye imp. Hai… use kabhi mat bhulna…

Raj: nahi sir.. chahe jo ho jaye mai is desh ki suraksha pe aanch nahi aane dunga…

Good night sir… jai hind…..

V: jai hind captain……

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BC's room:

BC: dr. Mishra aap koi test lene waali thi….

Ritu: sir, maine sab teachers ka test le liye hai bas capt Rajveer hi bache hai…. unse mai abhi tak mili bhi nahi hun… aura b kafi raat ho gayi hai…. light out hone ka time hai… mai unka test kal mrng mei le lungi…

BC: ok dr.. good night….

Ritu: good night sir…

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Next day:

BC's room:

BC: beta tumhari job confirm ho gayi hai tum agle Wednesday se join kar sakti ho……

Naina: thik hai uncle… mai agle Wednesday aa jaungi…….

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Raj was alking towards the mess… when an orderly stops him…

O: sir, aapko BC nei apne cabin mei bulaya hai….

R: koi jaruri kaam…..

O: sir, vo ek nayi physc. Aayi hai academy mei… unhone sab faculty members ka test liya tha…. Bas aapka hi baaki hai aur aap unse abhi tak mile bhi nahi hai na… isliye BC ne aapko bulaya hai…

R: ok….

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BC's room:

Raj: captain Rajveer singh shekhawat reporting sir…..

BC: at ease captain… inse milo ye hai academy ki nayi physc. Dr. Ritu Mishra…

Raj: hello dr.

Ritu: hello captain… aapse milke khushi hui…

BC: capt. Ye aapki mental strength ka test lena chahti hai… inhone kal sabka le liya tha.. bas aap hi bache hai…

Raj: ok sir…. Chaliye dr. ….. after you…

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Ritu: chaliye capt. Grounds ki taraf chalte hai…

Raj: grounds???? Par aapko to test lena tha na…

Ritu: capt. Khuli taazi hawa mei sair karte hue test lene ka maza hi kuch aur hai….

Raj: hmmm ye to hai… aaj kafi acchi hawa chal rahi hai….

Ritu: aur fir aapki company to aur bhi acchi hai…. I mean ek capt. Ke saath sair ka mauka roz roz thode hi milta hai… aur wo bhi jab capt. Itne smart ho……

Raj: excuse me…..

Ritu: chaliye chodiye…. Aapki hobbies se shuru karte hai…… kya kya pasand hai aapko…..

Raj: bas apna kaam karna…. Purane gaane sunna kabhi kabhi akele mei…. Mouthorgan bazana mutters pehle tha……

Ritu: aapko MO bazana aata hai???

Raj: haan…. Chota tha tab sikha tha….

Ritu: to bazaiye na kabhi….

Raj: nahi ab chod diya……..

Ritu: kyu????

Raj: (under his breath jiske liye bazata tha ab vo nahi hai mere paas)………….. in loud voice bas ab time nahi milta….

A boy was playing MO….and a little girl was laughing and enjoying

G: Veer……. Tum itna accha bazate ho…. Mujhe bhi sikhao na….

B: nahi mann… agar tumhe sikha diya na to fir tum mera gaana nahi sunogi… aur na hi meri taarif karogi… bas khud hi bazati rahogi….. aur mujhe apne kaano se bahut pyaar hai…..

G: Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr……………………

Ritu: time nikalna padta hai capt… chaliye mujhe suna dijiye…….

Raj: nahi dr… mai kisi aur ko nahi suna sakta …. I mean ab MANN nahi hai na….

Ritu: arre mann to bann jayega… aap start to kijiye… plzzz mere liye……..

Raj: fir kabhi dr…. aur kuch puchiye…..

And in this way they continue………..

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After 1 week:

Raj was walking towards grounds when he suddenly feels something……

Raj: ye kya hua….. mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai jaise koi bahut apna mere aas paas hai……….. ye hawa mei ek ajeeb si khushbu kyu hai….. aur ye hawa jab mujhe chu rahi hai to aisa kyu lag raha hai jaisa koi bahut apna mujhe thapki de raha hai…

And we see a girl in blue colored simple jeans and in white tight shirt entering KMA……

Girl: aaj teen saalo baad isi jagah kadam rakh rahi hun.. jahan kabhi na aane ka faisla kiya tha maine…..

We move towards grounds where Raj was standing….

Suddenly an orderly comes there…

O: sir, aapko BC ne apne room mei bulaya hai………..

R: koi jaruri kaam……..

O: pata nahi sir….

R: ok tum chalo mei aata hun….

Pata nahi aaj dil ko bahut accha accha lag raha hai… ek ajeeb sa sukun mehsoos ho raha hai……….

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BC's room:

Voice: may I come in sir….

BC: come in capt. Shekawat….

Raj: sir aap ne bulaya…

BC: haan wo koi aane waala hai…. usse tumhe milwana hai… shayad bas 1-2 min mei aata hi hoga…

Voice: may I come in sir……(Raj get shocked hearing the voice…..)

BC: come in……….

Raj(in his mind): nahi aisa kaise ho sakta hai… mujhe galatfehmi hui hai….. vo yahan kaise……… and his thoughts were interrupted by a very sweet voice….

Voice: Captain Dr. Naina Singh Shekhawat reporting sir…………

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Finally entry of Naina …… I know its pretty late…. But now she has entered lets see what will happen…..

And plz frnds I want a favour…. Can u suggest some names for the role of Simi…….

Ok for now I vl take ur leave…….. leave comments…..

Take care and keep smiling………..

C ya…..

Lots of love….

sheenu

o my god it was a excellent part.situation was described very well with wonderful flashbacks.it was amazing.just love the whole part.thanku soo much dear for this marvelous update and like u i also don't watch tv but sometime when i surf the channel i see a serial add named Jiya Jale.in this serial,main lead gal named Sunaina fits best for the role of Simmi.she is a cute girl.

awesome too good very nice lovely part waiting eagerly for next asap with long part.

Hey awesome update. umm i think for the role of Simi, Pia from Kasamh Se would do good. i dont know her real name.. sorry.
anyways update soon... can't wait.

👏 👏 👏 awesome...so finally naina is back...it's not fair yaar how can u stop at this point huh?? 😳

Interesting naina still refers herself as naina singh shekhavat ...not bad...please continue soon

Too good....yaar mindblowing!!!

Waise you know where Raj feels something......yu should have put the song Kyon Hawa(the first song of Veer-Zaara)...it would have suited it!!!

And when he sees Naina again....how about Ajab si(OSO) or Tere liye(Veer-Zaara).
Waise I hope to see Naina in saries as well as in her uniform sometimes!!!


And for Simran....she is either gonna be opposite Navin or Huda....so

Janvi(Sameera of Choona Hai Aasman)
Deeya Chopra (Vidhya of LRL)
...they will do for both




If she is opposite Navin then....

Anita Hasnandani(Anjali of Kavyangali )
Kavita Kaushik(Chandramukhi of FIR)
Arunima(Rano of Kasamh Se)




If she is opposite Huda then....

Akriti of LRL
Sanaya(Sameera of LRL)
Tanu of Kahani Ghar Ghar Kii




These are Random suggestions not considering pairs.....

Kritika (P2 of Kasautii Zindagi Kii)
Gunjan (Archita of Kyunki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi)
Priya Wal(Ashi of Remix)

yipeeeeeeee!!!! finally naina's here now i can't wait for some cute fights between the two..... and freshers ball is coming as well battaa nahin kya hoga but i trust you, you'll do something good, btw i'm not feeling good about that ritu mishra kya voh yahan par bhi ek spy hogi..... anyways that's up for you to decide i just still have one question which you have to reveal soon varna mere sar par baal nahin rahenge 😆 😆 😆 how is simi related to navin, it's obvious that she is the girl who met him in the jail and she is helping naina right now...

and now for my fav part of this update was when ritu was telling raj to play the mouth organ and he said nahin aaj MANN nahin hai na....... i love how it had a double meaning and that little flash back of raj playing the mouth organ and naina dancing around was soooooooo cute, i really liked the update, you done a great job 👏

take care 😃
yasmin

update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with long part.

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

o my god it was a excellent part.situation was described very well with wonderful flashbacks.it was amazing.just love the whole part.thanku soo much dear for this marvelous update and like u i also don't watch tv but sometime when i surf the channel i see a serial add named Jiya Jale.in this serial,main lead gal named Sunaina fits best for the role of Simmi.she is a cute girl.

thankuuuuuuuuu soooooooo muchh.......🤗
ur comment really encourages me a lot..... .....
i saw that serial.... yups sunaina is a cute girl....
i will think about her....but i am actually very confused about simi.... but lets see when i will decide i will let you all know....

till the. keep reading and keep commenting......
take care and keep smiling....
sheenu....😊😊

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesome too good very nice lovely part waiting eagerly for next asap with long part.

thankuuuuu sooooo muchhhhh dearrr......🤗

I am continuing right now....
till then keep reading and keep commenting....
take care and keep smiling...........
sheenu...