FF about RN- In a diff. style (ud P35) - Page 13

amazing update yaar.........................
specially raj and naina relation...........I am waiting 4 that day when they will b 2gether

update soon

awesum n mindblowin,waitn 4 the next part sweety 👏 👏 👏 ,

u hav given a gr8 ff,RN married n Shalini's help in bringin them 2gether simply super dear,



Aarthi

it was superb.........loved d way u added dos lines in btwn d song......also nice choice of song.....it was very appropriate...........

waiting for sundays updt...........

Very good!!!

Waise hope you find Simi soon and don't worry about who looks the part,....think about pairing!!!

As for the person if it is positive then I hope it is Col.Shakti Chandra and if not then make it whoever you like.

Waise right now he does not sound very positive as he is stopping Raj from telling Naina.

And what do you mean by hospital ka uniform....she is a captain woh toh captain ka uniform pehnegi....but please only on independence day and republic day...the rest of the time keep her in casuals like Raj ........ok.

Yes Shalini I am with you and even I hope Operation Milap is a success!!!

And yes in the song Tere Liye tune female words bhi Raj ke upar dal diya...khair whatever!!!

And yes Try to check out the names I have given which you have not seen!!!

And darlling if she calls him Capt.Shekhawat and he calls her Dr.Naina in front of everyone..it will be really odd...switch to Raj and Naina...if not Veer and Mann.

I know we have heriones calling their husbands Mr.Bajaj and Mr.Walia...but here it will be very odd!!!

Super yaar 👏 ... too good

i guess that lady ..... was ritu(spy)...i just love shalini yaar...she is too good...hope operation milaap is successful.

To be honest i really don't want rajveer 2 say the truth so soon....i want some khatti meethi moments..and i am sure after knowing the truth naina oops mann will make up for her absence....

So does naina love rajveer...??

Dr naina and capt shekhvat sounds soo odd....i guess naina and rajveer will be good...

update plzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with long part u promised it.

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesome too good very nice do update soon asap with long part and reduce the differences b/w raj-naina

thankuuuuuu soooooo muchhhhh dearrrr🤗
i will update today but after 1 hr or so coz i am still writing the update and please do check my other fic..... I will try to reduce diff b/w Raj and Naina... but this all depends on Naina... yaar why is she so stubborn??? ok lets see....

till then....
take care.... and keep smiling.....
sheenu....😊

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

hey Sheenu,itna jaldi,kitna maza aa raha tha.mujhe aur chahiye.anyways update was oouuuuuuutstanding.and that song,i love that song(Shaina u r too good).it was superb when u have given all situation and songs and related it perfectly.convo was too good.aweeeesum dear.thanks alot for this beautiful part.marvelous

Thankuuuuuuuu soooo muchhhh that u liked the update.........🤗

even i luv that song... shaina is too good and her suggestions always help me a lot..... thankuuuu u liked the situations in the song....
thanks for the beautiful comment...
take care and keep smiling.....
sheenu....😊

so sorry for the late comment forst of all, i'm a seriously a nut head i read your fic and then oi thought i have already commneted but today i checked your fic again and i was like eh wheres my comment, so i realised i didn't even write one 😆

anyways heres my comment on this part, it was really gooooooood!!!! i feel sorry for bechara raj though, he'll have to tolerate his mann's anger towards him awwwwww my dear jaanu, hope he gives some back though that will be fun to watch or in this case to read 😆

anyway's loooooooooooooooooooooove shalini in this i hope her operation milap works, i' am so in this with her woop! woop! you go shalini 😆 ok i'm seriously going out my mind, so i'll stop here once again lovely part !!!

and btw i am taking great care of my hair, i also love my hair alot, but if i don't get to know hows simi related to navin, i am surely going to rip your hair off 😆

take care 😃
yasmin

Originally posted by: friend forever

amazing update yaar.........................
specially raj and naina relation...........I am waiting 4 that day when they will b 2gether

update soon

thankuuuu soooooo muchhhhhh dearrrr......🤗
they will be together soon.... just wait for some time....
i will update today in 1 hr...
till then..
take care and keep smiling....
sheenu....😊