FF about RN- In a diff. style (ud P35) - Page 12

Originally posted by: feedback

Hey awesome update. umm i think for the role of Simi, Pia from Kasamh Se would do good. i dont know her real name.. sorry.
anyways update soon... can't wait.

thankuuuuuu sooooo muchhh dear....🤗

hmmm i will consider her....lets see.....

thanks once again.... your comment really encourages.......

keep reading and keep commenting....
take care and keep smiling....
sheenu...😊

Originally posted by: aarsow

hey 2 gud dear.


Aarthi

thankuuuu soooo muchhhh dearrrrr......🤗

keep reading and keep commenting.....
take care and keep smiling...
sheenu...😊

Originally posted by: friend forever

amazing update
cool..
update soon

Thankuuuuuuuu sooooo muchhhh dearrrr.....🤗

i am updating right now....
keep reading and keep commenting...
take care and keep smiling....
sheenu...😊

Originally posted by: yyyy

👏 👏 👏 awesome...so finally naina is back...it's not fair yaar how can u stop at this point huh?? 😳

Interesting naina still refers herself as naina singh shekhavat ...not bad...please continue soon

thankuuuuuu sooooooo muchhhhh dearrrr....🤗
ummm... okk now i m continuing... happy now...

😆 haan yaar... Naina still refers herself as Naina singh shekhawat...after all she is his wife and she is very well aware of that... akhir pyare Navin bhaiya ne karayi thi shadi....😆😆

chalo now keep reading and keep commenting...........
take care and keep smiling....
sheenu....😊

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good....yaar mindblowing!!!
thankuuuuu soooo muchhh dearrrrr🤗
Waise you know where Raj feels something......yu should have put the song Kyon Hawa(the first song of Veer-Zaara)...it would have suited it!!!
oopss sorry from next time i will definitely put the songs for the situations...
And when he sees Naina again....how about Ajab si(OSO) or Tere liye(Veer-Zaara). hmmm... i have used that idea.... see the update..
Waise I hope to see Naina in saries as well as in her uniform sometimes!!!
Naina will also wear saari and uniform (ofcourse of hospital) but occasionally...
And for Simran....she is either gonna be opposite Navin or Huda....so

Janvi(Sameera of Choona Hai Aasman)hmm.... i will consider about her....
Deeya Chopra (Vidhya of LRL) never seen her.. .😕sorry....
...they will do for both




If she is opposite Navin then....

Anita Hasnandani(Anjali of Kavyangali ) ...ammm... i don't think she will suit for the role of cadet... i mean do you think she will look like a cadet... simi should actually looks like a girl cadet...
Kavita Kaushik(Chandramukhi of FIR) haye... she is cute.... but same case as with anjali....
Arunima(Rano of Kasamh Se) yups... she will look gudd....cute and simple...




If she is opposite Huda then....

Akriti of LRL .... sorry never seen........😕
Sanaya(Sameera of LRL) she will actually going to enter as sameera only so can't play the role of simi.... u see double role...mele mei bichdi hui behne...😆
Tanu of Kahani Ghar Ghar Kii ....sorry... never seen....😕




These are Random suggestions not considering pairs.....

Kritika (P2 of Kasautii Zindagi Kii) ....sorry... never seen....😕

Gunjan (Archita of Kyunki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi) ....sorry... never seen....😕

Priya Wal(Ashi of Remix) yups she will rock... but will she look like a sweet , cute and innocent girl??? i don't 9... i might make her simi... lets see...

take care and keep smiling.....
and plzz do comment... i learn new things.... thanks for commenting....
keep reading...
sheenu...😊

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

awesome work....loved it.................

thankuuuuuuu soooooo muchhhhh dearrr.........🤗

take care and keep smiling.....
sheenu...😊

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

yipeeeeeeee!!!! finally naina's here now i can't wait for some cute fights between the two..even i am waiting for the sweet cute nok jhonks....... and freshers ball is coming as well battaa nahin kya hoga but i trust you, you'll do something good,....thanks for trusting me dear.... i will definitely do something (good for sure)...and u will going to like that... but wait for some time... btw i'm not feeling good about that ritu mishra kya voh yahan par bhi ek spy hogi....hmmmm let's see what will she do....spy ka to pata nahi....abhi raj ne usse dhunda nahi na.... to mujhe kaise pata hoga....... anyways that's up for you to decide i just still have one question which you have to reveal soon varna mere sar par baal nahin rahenge 😆 😆 😆 how is simi related to navin, ... oye plzz don't do anything with your hairs.. i love my hairs the most in this world... so plzz take care of hairs... secret to bas abhi out hone hi waala hai...it's obvious that she is the girl who met him in the jail and she is helping naina right now...hmmmm yess she is the girl..... i will reveal everything soon....

and now for my fav part of this update was when ritu was telling raj to play the mouth organ and he said nahin aaj MANN nahin hai na....... i love how it had a double meaning and that little flash back of raj playing the mouth organ and naina dancing around was soooooooo cute,that was my fav part also... cute Naina playing around naughty Veer.... i really liked the update, you done a great job 👏
thankuuuuuu sooooo muchhhh dearrr....🤗.. thanks for the lovely comment....😊
take care 😃
yasmin

u also take good care of urself and ofcourse of ur hairs😆
keep smiling and keep commenting...
sheenu....😊

Hello friends…. So I thought I will decide simi's casting later on… and when I will decide I will tell you all…. Till then enjoy today's update….

Keep reading…and keep commenting…………

PART 7

Recap:

Raj talked with his senior and Navin's mentor on phone. He mentioned a girl that had come to meet Navin in the jail. Raj remembered Navin mentioning a girl on the day of his death. Ritu took Raj's test. Naina entered KMA…

NOW:

Voice: Captain Dr. Naina singh Shekhawat reporting sir…..

Raj turned around and gets a shock of lifetime… there standing in front of him…. His best friend… his wife…. His love…… there he said it to himself…. He now can't deny the fact that he loved her all those years…..

Navin: tu pyar karta hai na usse….

Raj: Nahi yaar mai Mann se pyar nahi karta…

Navin:maine naina ka naam to nahi liya….

Raj: nahi yaar mai usse pyar nahi karta……

Navin: to meri taraf dekh ke bol kit u Naina se pyar nahi karta…

Raj: yaar mai usse pyar kaise kar sakta hun….. how can i?? She is Ur sister Navin…

Navin: she is ur best friend also Raj…

Raj: Nahi yaar mai mann se pyar nahi karta… and plz dn't bring this topic again…

Navin (mutters) aaj to tune mana kar diya par ek din tu khud kahega that u love her Raj… bass yahi dua hai tab tak der na ho jaye….

(I am taking Shaina's suggestion for putting up a song for the situation)

Tere liye hum hai jiye…

Hotton ko siye….. ( He wanted to go there….)

Tere liye hum hai jiye .. (He wanted to hug her….)

Har aansoon piye… (Wanted to cry)

Dil mei magar jalte rahe chahat ke diye…

Tere liye… tere liye….

Jindagi leke aayi hai bite dinon ki kitab… (he remembered all the moments they

Jindagi leke aayi hai bite dino ki kitab…. have spent together)

Ghere hai ab hame yaadein behisaab,……..

Bin pooche mile mujhe kitne saare jawab…….

Chaha tha kya… paya hai kya…. (He remembered the last day when he met her)

Hamne dekhiye…

Dil mei magar jalte rahe chahat ke diyeee…

Tere liye………

Kya kahun duniya ne kiya mujhse kaisa bair…. (He remembered the moment when

Kya kahun duniya ne kiya mujhse kaisa bair… he shot Navin and Naina saw him…)

Hukum tha mai jiyun lekin tere bagair….

Nadan hai wo kehte hai jo…

Mere liye tum ho gair…

Kitne sitam hampe sanam logo ne kiye…. (He remembered that BC refused to give

Dil mei magar jalte rahe chahat ke diye…. Naina's address after her disappearance)

Tere liye….

Tere liye tere liye…….

He wanted to hold her… wanted to let all his pain and sorrows come out of his heart….. He wanted to….. Butt…… he can't ……how can he after what had happened that day……he can't even go like her friend………he just see her and tried to tell himself that yes she is Naina…. She is here…….

BC: at ease captain….. So captain rajveer I wanted you to meet Naina…. She is now an army captain….. She has completed her training a year ago… now she is appointed as a dr. in Ambala military hospital….. As she is here in ambala she will be staying in KMA…….. (Pause for a second) … as your wife... With you…..

Here he gets another shock…….. Naina will be staying with him……… but how can this be possible… she hates him…. She herself told him this that she doesn't want to see his face anymore….. Than how is this happening……….

BC: ok captain you can take her to your room to settle down later…..I am going to make an announcement regarding this….and you both come down in the hall now… is that okay…

Raj just keeps staring at his wife and doesn't utter a single word…. And Naina well she was obviously aware of his stare was feeling uncomfortable and mutters to herself…. Agar majboori na hoti to mai kabhi yahan nahi aati captain shekhawat…. Mai tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi aur tumse apne bhai ki maut ka badla lekar rahungi………….

BC (in loud voice): is that okay captain…

Raj:u…uhh….. yes sir….

BC:ok…. Now you both come in the hall….

Naina: yes sir…. Chaliye

And she goes with BC…

Raj: ye kaise ho sakta hai??? Mann yahan….. kya usse sach pata lag gaya… nahi aisa nahi ho sakta… to kya usne mujhe maaf kar diya… nahi…. Jahan tak mai usse janta hun wo apne bhai ke kaatil ko kabhi maaf nahi karegi… to fir wo yahan KMA mei…. Aur vo bhi mere sath…. Kuch to gadbad hai…. pata karna padega akhir ye yahan pe kyu hai…. par jo bhi hai aaj mai khush hun….mann mere itne paas hai….

Meanwhile BC announces to gather in the hall as he is going to make an announcement….

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In the hall:

Yudi: bro hame yahan kyu bulaya hai???

Huda: oye tune suna nahi yudiye kuch kehna chahta hai apna tau… shayad wo iss huda se maafi maangna chahta hai…

Aalekh: nautanki… tujhse maafi kyu maangega wo…

Huda: oye kaidi… kal usne mujhe saza di thi to kaafi chot aayi thi is jatt ko to usi ki maafi maangne waala hoga…

Ali: guru.. kal galti aapki hi thi… aap hi simi ko daudte hue dekh kar apni lane se dusri lane mei chale gaye the aur us lane mei sab seniors cycle utha ke daud rahe the…… to ab agar ek senior aap se takra gaya aur uski cycle aap pe gir gayi to usme aapko to saza milni hi thi…

Huda: oye usool tu jyada mat bol… ab meri simi daudte hue itni pyari lag rahi thi ki mai sab kuch bhul gaya haye…

At this moment Simi and Pooja turn up…

Pooja: oye ki hoya… ye tau ne hamko kyu bulaya hai…

Ali: pooja jara intezaar kijiye… unhe kuch announce karna hai… dekhiye saari faculty bhi yahi par hai…

\Pooja: oye apna shahrukh nahi dikh raha is faculty mei…

Ali: bas aate hi honge ho ye lo aa gaye…BC bhi unke sath hi hai…. lekin inke sath ye kaun hai…. inhe to pehle nahi dekha…..

And simi after seeing Naina with BC was shocked

Simi (mutters): Naina yahan pe… lekin usne to kuch nahi bataya….

Meanwhile BC comes and says

BC: attention cadets…. Now cadets I want to make an important announcement today… I want you all to meet my niece Captain dr. Naina singh Shkhawat…

At this moment everybody gets shocked…. Naina singh shekhawat…. Is she related to captain Rajveer….

BC: silence…. I know what u all must be thinking… is Naina in anyway related to your captain Rajveer…. Then the answer is yes… yes she is related to captain… she is captain rajveer's wife…….

Everbody: WHAT????

BC: silence (well everybody was actually silent obviously because shock was very big)….She will be staying in KMA from now onwards….. she is a doctor at ambala military hospital…. Therefore she will also help dr shalini in infirmary… now dismiss….

Everybody moves from there after getting a big shock……

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BC: now captain you can take her to your room to settle down…..

Raj: ok sir…

And BC goes from there…..

Raj and Naina bothe are feeling awkward in each others presence and there was a silence between both… suddenly Raj says

Raj: chalein Mann….

Naina: don't…… don't say that captain shekhawat…. Mann kehne ka haq to sirf veer ka tha… par ab na to veer hai aur na hi mann…. Mann ko tumne khud apne hathon se 3 saal pehle maar diya tha…. You can call me only dr. Naina… and nothing else captain shekhawat……

And walks from there….

Raj (mutters): nahi mann… tum aaj meri mann hi ho aur hamesha rahogi…. Bas ye veer ab intezaar karega ki kab uski mann use uska haq waapas degi….. par mujhe pura yakeen hai kit um sach jaanne ke baad mujhe maaf kar dogi…. Aur mei tumhe sach aaj bata ke rahunga…..

and then he shouts…. Ruko m…. rukiye dr. Naina chaliye apna samaan mere room mei rakh dijiye…..

and both start walking towards his room… when suddenly Raj gets a call…..

Raj: oh god…. Ye to bahut imp call hai….and picks up the phone…

Person: captain come at the meeting point now… its urgent…. Leave everything that you are doing….

Raj: ok sir I am coming……..and hungs … aaaa… m…. sorry dr. Naina mujhe abhi koi jaruri kaam hai mujhe jaana hoga… and then he spots shalini who was on he way to infirmary…..

Raj: (shouts) dr. shalini…..

Shalini: yes captain…. Mujhe laga aap busy honge… akhir aapki wife aayi hai…

Raj: stop it dr…. wo mujhe ek favour chahiye…

Shalini: yes yes captain… anytime…

Raj: wo dr. mujhe abhi kisi jaruri kaam se immediately jaan pad raha hai… aur M… naina ne abhi tak mera room bhi nahi dekha hai…. kya aap use mera room dikha dengi aur uski help kar dengi settle hone…

Shalini: sure captain… mujhe khushi hogi….waise bhi aapki wife ek dr. hai to meri unke saath bahut jamegi… aap befikr hoke jaaiye….

Raj: thanks dr… take care… b bye…. Pauses and then again says bye Naina…

Naina: bye (thinking its not the the right time)….

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Meanwhile in the one of the room a person was on phone……..

P (shouting): ye kaise ho sakta hai….. Captain's wife…..

Voice: wo darasal captain is married…

P: aur ye baat tum abhi bata rahe ho….. ye mujhe pehle kyu nahi bataya gaya……

V: wo darasal hame laga ki jarurat nahi padegi….. captain ki wife kabhi nahi aayegi….

P: aur tumhe aisa kyu laga….

V: darasal Naina is Navin's sister…. Aur 3 saal pehle uske aur Captain ke bich mei kuch diff. aa gaye the… aur wo chali gayi thi…. Hame laga wo kabhi nahi aayegi…. Par use bhi abhi hamare mission ke bich mei hi aana tha… now you have to be careful…..

P: hmmm….. aur mujhe ye bhi koshish karni hogi ki Naina aur Raj ke bich ke diff. kam hone ke bajaye bade…..

V: haan… chalo ab tum apne mission pe dhyan do…….

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Meanwhile let's see what Naina is doing…..

Shalini: to Naina tumne abhi ek saal pehle hi apni training complete ki hai…

Naina: haan dr. Shalini…

Shalini: oh come on Naina….. sirf shalini bolo…. Dr. sounds too formal…. Aur fir ham dono hi army dr. hai…

Naina smiles and says okkk shalini….

Shalini: ye hui na baat…. Chalo ek nayi dosti ki shuruat karte hai… tum aur mei…. Mai aur tum….

Naina (smiles) and says: hum aur KMA……. KMA aur hum….

Shalini laughs and says: tumhare saath bahut jamegi…….ye lo captain ka room bhi aa gaya……..

Shalini enters and says aao tum bhi andar aao… tumhara bhi to room hai ye (naughtily)….

Naina: hmmmm……

Shalini: chalo tum apna samaan set kar lo… mai tab tak yahan dekhti hun… koi kaam ho to jarur bata dena……

Naina: hmmmm…. Nahi uski jarurat nahi padegi…. Accha mai baaki samaan bedroom mei rakh ke aati hun….. wahan pe (stops after seeing shalini's expressions) what??? Kya hua tumhe???

Shalini: (naughtily) maloom hai tum captain ko bahut miss kar rahi ho… par bedroom mei mere aage…..

Naina: oh stop that shalini…. Tum bhi na… mai bas apna samaan rakhne ja rahi hun…..

Shalini: okok…. No need for explanation,…. Tum jao.. mai tab tak yahan dekhti hun….. hey ye kya hai???

Naina: what????

Shalini: photograph hai…. captain rajveer, tumhari aur…. *Pauses*…. Captain Naveen ki………….

Naina comes and sees a photo that they have taken on the graduation day of Naveen and Rajveer…. And says nothing… and goes from there….

Shalini (under her breath): kahin Captain aur Naina mei koi problem to nahi… agar aisa hai to mai use thik karke rahungi…. Kyuki captain aur Naina saath mei bahut acche dikhte hai…. is photo mei bhi dono kitne khush hai…. chalo Shalini lag jao apni duty pe… operation milaap……

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Meanwhile we see Raj entering a room after using his access card…….

Raj: sir…….(we see a person standing there with his back towards gate…)

Person: tum aa gaye captain…and turns (we can't see his face)

Raj: kya jaruri kaam the sir….

P: maine suna Naina KMA mei hai…

R pauses and says: yes sir…

P: kab aayi…

R: abhi ghante pehle sir…

P: tumhari usse baat hui captain….

R: abhi tak nahi sir…. Mai usse apne room mei le jaake batane hi waala tha… par tabhi aapki call aa gayi…

P: gudd….. matlab maine der nahi ki…

R: mai kuch samjha nahi sir…

P: tum abhi Naina ko kuch nahi bataoge Rajveer………………

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END OF PART….

That was a very long part (I feel so)…. I am sorry for delaying…

Next part will be pakka pakka on Sunday……..

Till then

B bye……..

Take care…..

Keep smiling……..

Sheenu….😊😊

awesome too good very nice do update soon asap with long part and reduce the differences b/w raj-naina