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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi guys I m so sorry for the late update……… but I got busy somewhere…… not just studies but some other mamle were also there….and I don't 9 how I manage to write… coz I m in terrible state now….plus my exams are starting from Monday… so enjoy this update.. Coz next will be a week later………

Sorry I really think that all is happening in kanchanjunga…. From now on its not KMH its AMH… i.e. Ambala Military Hospital..

PART 5


And 1 person never forgave him…. And she was Naina….

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At this moment Raj wakes up and says: kash tumne mujhe kuch kehne ka mauka to diya hota Mann…. Par jab mai wapas aaya to tum ja chuki thi… bina kuch kahe… bina kuch sawal puche…. Bas ek letter chod ke…….

And saying this he takes out a paper from his pocket and starting reading it…

Captain Shekhawat,

Aaj aapne saabit kar dia ki dosti jaise lafaz sirf kitaabo mei hi acche lagte hai…

Mujhe tumse kuch nahi kehna sivaye iske…. Ki I hate YOU Captain Shekhawat…

Agar Naina is puri duniya mei kisi se sabse jyada nafrat karti hai to vo tum ho captain….

Aur mai ab tumhari shakl bhi nahi dekhna chahti…. Mai yahan se ja rahi hun…par hamesha ke liye nahi… mai aaj apne aap se vaada karti hun ki mai apne bhaiya ko begunaah saabit karke dikhaungi…..

Aur yaad rakhna captain jis din mai apne bhaiya ko begunaah saabit karne mei kaamyaab ho gayi vo din tumhara is duniya mei aakhri din hoga….

Gud bye captain

Raj: Mai us din ka intezaar karunga Mann….. Navin ko begunaah saabit karma mera sabse bada mission hai….. par mujhe is mission mei mere sabse acche dost ki jarurat hai….

Suddently his cell started ringing… he picks it up…and there was a person on the other... (say P)

P: Jai hind Captain..
Raj: Jai hind… batao kya haal hai..

P: thik hun Captain…. Aap sunaiye..
Raj: aur batao hamari us jung lagi hui bicycle ka kya hua…
P: sir, us bicycle ki haalat to abhi bhi waisi hi hai…..chalna aur awaaz nikalna to usne band kar rakha hai…… pichle 3 saalo se..

Raj: bas aur kuch mat bolna chobe….

Chobe: okk sir… sorry….. accha mujhe lagta hai ham eek acche mechanic ko bulana chahiye…. Yahan ke local mechanic uski thik tarah se dekhbhaal nahi kar pa rahe hai……mujhe darr hai ki kahin vo bicycle aur bhi kharab na ho jaye…

Raj: nahi chobe aisa nahi hoga…. Mai us bicycle ko bachpan se chalata aaya hun….. vo mere liye bahut khaas hai… vaise ek mechanic hai jo madad kar sakta hai…. lekin use mai pichle 3 saalo se dhund raha hun…. Aur vo mujhe aaj tak nahi mila….

Chobe: sir, maine suna hai aapke fav. Teacher ko pata hai us mechanic ke bare mei… vo bhi apne saare instruments unhi se thik karvate hai…

Raj: pata hai chobe… lekin mujhe bas ek baar us mechanic se milna hai… taaki mai use apni bicycle ke bare mei bata sakun…. Tab tak us cycle ko local mechanic ko hi dikhate raho… aur uska dhyan rakho…

Chobe: thik hai sir… jai hind sir…. Alvida…
Raj: jai hind chobe…

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Next day in mess:-

We see yudi and Huda are sitting on a table….

And pooja and Simi enters….
Huda: oye yudiye kya janani hai yaar… kasam se… itni sakht aur pyari janani apne pure jivan me nahi dekhi Huda ne…

Yudi: Bach ke bro… kal ke bare mei bhul gaye kya… vo to tumhe bhaav bhi nahi deti….

Huda: oye Huda to is janani se kitni hi baar bi daant khane ko tyaar hai…
Oye punjaban…………..aaja yahan aaja…..

Simi: Goddd… ye Bandar bhi yahan pe hai…. mujhe yahan se jaana hoga…..

Pooja: oye Simi kidhar ja rahi hai…. chal apne dost wahan pe baithe hai…. chal chalke kuch kha lete hai… fir hame drill mei bhi to jaana hai…..

Simi: dost… mere dost tohhh…. Okkk chal….

Huda: oye kudiyo kya haal chaal hai tumhare…. Aaj ka pehla drill kaisa gaya…. Paanch rounds ground ke….. thake nahi tum log…

Simi: tum apni baat karo huda….. mai to usse bhi jyada bhaag sakti thi…

Huda: oye hoye Kudi… teri isi ada pe to ye Huda fida hai….

Simi: shut up Huda…. And then she goes… and at the same time Aalekh and Ali enters the mess and sees her…

Ali: kya hua guru…. Vo aise kyu chali gayi..

Yudi: kuch nahi bro… vo bas Huda Simi ke saath flirt kar raha tha.. to vo gusse mei yahan se chali gayi…..

Aalekh (mutters): locha hai… is ladki ke saath koi bahut bada locha hai…. kyuki kisi ne vo nahi dekha jo apun ne dekha ….. uski aankhen…. Aisa lagta tha use kuch yaad aa gaya tha use is Huda ki bakwaas se……

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BC office:

BC is on phone

BC: kya???..... matlab is academy ke phsyc. Ka naam final ho gaya hai…

P: haan sir….. ab is academy mei dr. Ritu Mishra hi aayegi…. Infact vo to academy ke liye Delhi se nikal bhi chuki hai…. bas kuch der mei pahuchti hongi……

BC: thik hai major….. hamne bhi Dr. mishra ka kafi naam suna hai….. chaliye jai hind major….

P: jai hind sir….

BC: Naina beta tumhare liye KMA mei koi intezaam nahi ho paya……

He again dials a number….

BC: hello Beta…

Naina: hello uncle….

BC: vo tumhe kuch batana tha…

Naina: kya hua uncle…

BC: v …. Vo….. beta…

Naina: KMA mei koi kaam nahi mila…. Yahi kehna hai na aapko….

BC: Beta vo dr. mishra KMA ke liye Delhi se nikal chuki hai….. par tum chinta mat karo… mai AMH mei baat karunga….. shayad wahan kaam hai….wahan k eek Dr. Ek hafte mei transfer ho jaayenge… tab tum shayad yahan aa sako….

Naina: thik hai uncle…. Par kya mai KMA mei…

BC: beta KMA mei tum as a teacher to nahi par kyuki tum yahan as a resident aa sakt ho…. Par vo sab tumhare upar depend karta hai…

Naina: vo kaise uncle……

BC: beta tum yahan k eek faculty member ki wife ho… to tum yahan reh sakti ho… par iske liye tumhe Captain Shekhawat ke saath rehna padega… tum tayar ho??

Naina:……………

BC: beta……….

Naina: mai tayar hun uncle…. Lekin plz mere aane se pehle ye baat aap kisi se na kahen ki mai wahan aa rahi hun…….

BC: thik hai beta…. Jai hind beta…. Apna khayal rakhna…….

Naina: jai hind uncle…….. and hungs the phone

Naina: bhaiya mai aapke liye kuch bhi karungi….chahe iske liye mujhe us insaan ke saath hi kyu na rehna pade jisse mujhe sakht nafrat hai….. Mujhe pata hai aapki begunahi ka sabut KMA mei hai……aur fir mujhe us jimmedari ko bhi to nibhana hai jo aapne mujhe aakhri din saupi thi….. aur mujhe uske bare mei sabse chupana bhi hai… kyuki jis kisi ko bhi uske bare mei pata laga vo use chain se jine nahi dega… iske liye mujhe academy mei hi rehna padega…………………………

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Everyone enters the class and sees that their teacher is already present in the class……..

Teacher: Good morning class…………

Cadets: Good morning sir……………

Teacher: chaliye aaj pehle sabke intro se shuruvat karte hai….. chaliye sabse pehla mera…. Well class…. I m Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat…..aur aaj se aapko Comm. And strategy padaunga……..

Pooja: hayeee…. Iski shakl to bilkul mere K3G ke shahrukh se milti hai….. kitna cute hai……..

Huda: oye Punjaban…. Kahe ka cute… iska charm is Huda ke Charm kea age kuch bhi nahi hai….. dekh Huda ki Body…. Ye kahan tik payega mere aage……..

Raj: to chliye class apna apna intro dijiye…………to cadet aapka kya naam hai……. cadet…………. Cadet…………….
He snaps his fingers in front of Pooja who was actually lost in the dreams of her cute and charming teacher……..

Pooja: s sir………..

Raj: maine pucha cadet…. Aapka naam kya hai….

Pooja: aji aap naam kya kuch bhi puch lijiye……

Raj: ji cadet……..

Pooja: vo sir…..mera naam Cadet Pooja ghai hai…… aur mujhe lagta hai aapki ringtone mere handset ke sath perfectly match karegi… aur fir aapke jaisa handset ho to is training mei aur bhi maza hai….

Raj: ok ok cadet…….. lagta hai mobiles ka kafi shauk rakhti hai aap….next…
Ali: hamara naam cadet Ali beig hai…….. aur ham yahan pe ek accha sipahi banne aaye hai.. apne pita ka sapne pura karne…..

Raj: aap hamesha aise hi rehte hai…….. saavdhan position mei..……..acchi baat hai cadet……. Next…….
Yudi: mera naam cadet yaduvansh sahni hai sir…. Par sab log mujhe yudi bulate hai… u see sir.. yudi is cool name……

Raj: lagta hai aapko sipahi banne se jyada cool banne ka man hai cadet….
Chaliye siphai to hum aapko bana hi denge……..next

Huda: mera naam to cadet Amardeep Huda hai….. par vo kya hai na..mera charm hi kuch aisa hai ki mujhe apna naam batane ki jarurat hi nahi padti……

Raj: ok ok cadet… itna hava mei udna bhi acchi baat nahi……. Chaliye aaj to aapka pehla din hai…….next..

Aalekh: apun aalekh…..
Raj: apna pura naam batao cadet……..
Aalekh: kyu batau apna vo naam jisse apun pechana nahi jaana cchahta… apun bas apne naam se hi yaad rakha jana chahta hai….

Raj: baat tumhari sahi hai cadet sharma… par tumhe fir bhi apna naam pura naam batana chahiye aur yaad rakhna chahiye…. Kyuki isse tumhe vo baat yaad rehti hai jisse tum apna vo naam bhulakar apne khud ka naam hi yaad rakhna chahte ho… aur ye tumhari madad hi karta hai…

Aalekh (mutters): lagta hai iske saath apun ko koi panga nahi hoga… ye dikhne mei chikna teacher dimag se shana hai………

Raj: Next…… cadet apna naam bataiye………….
Raj again snaps his fingers in front of a sad looking girl… who was actually lost in the thoughts but of someone else……

Raj: cadet………
Simi: yes sir… sir I m cadet Simran Gupta…
Raj: aise class mei hokar kahin aur ki baate sochna acchi baat nahi cadet…
Aapka dhyan puri tarah se apne mission mei hi hona chahiye…. Warna dushman ko mauka mil sakta hai……

Simi (under her breath) dhyan to mera mere mission pe hi hai sir…. Aur dushman ko mauka mai kabhi bhi nahi lene dungi…… pata nah imam kab yahan pe aayegi………..

In this way whole class gives the intro… and class continues……..
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We see a lady elegantly dressed in a sari entering the KMA……..

BC office:

Lady: may I come in sir………….

BC: come in….kahiye ……….

Lady shows him a letter….

BC: oh to aap hai Dr. Ritu mishra is academy ki phsyc.

R: yes sir….

BC: dekhiye KMA ka naya batch abhi kal hi aaya hai… aur abhi unki class chal rahi hai… I guess kal se aap un sab ke sath kaam shuru kar sakti hai…

R: sir… cadets se pehle mai yahan ke teachers ka test lena chahti hun..isse mujhe pata lag jayega sabki strengths and weaknesses aur isse cadets ki training mei bhi help ho sakti hai…

BC: agar aisa hai to fir mai bhi chahunga ki saare teachers aapko ye test de… mai sabko inform karva dunga… aap chahe to evening mei test le sakti hai… okk…..

R: ok sir

BC: jai hind Dr.

R: good bye sir………….

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End of part 5……….

Okkkk now in the next update…. I promise entry of Naina pakka pakka…….

Till now u all must have guessed that simi is working with Naina……and what her relation with Naina is and also with navin… I will definitely tell later on……..
Now as my exams will start on Monday…. I think next update will be on next sat…coz next sat is my last exam… and I m not promising coz I may stretch it to Sunday…….
And again sorry for late update……

Till then….
Take care,
B bye…
Keep smiling…
Luv ya…….
Sheenu……
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
it was a excellent part.i love it.tooooooooooooo good.thankuu soo much for this marvelous update.and all the very best for ur exam.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its awesome too good very nice i think the code is one cycle is navin mechanic is naina war next part asap.iting fo
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very nice!!!But I hope Shalini is there and paired opposite Yudi!!!

And when Naina comes I want her to dress up in dresses or jeans and tight tops,stylish.arre ritu ko mart deni hai!!!!

And yes if Simran is opposite Huda then Shweta Gulati is fine but if she is opposite someone else then I would suggest someone else!!!

By the way for Nandini I would suggest Narayani Shastri!!!!!

And yes Saturday is a long wait.You fic is so interesting!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing update
waiting 4 next part
best of luck 4 ur xams
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 amazing yaar...i feel bad for raj i hope naina understands him...and both work together and prove navin innocent...before that i would love 2 read some nok jhok scenes and some lovely dovely romantic scenes b/w RN.... 😳😉

I think naina would get jealous seeing ritu flirting with raj...that would be a treat to read .😊

Sorry for getting confused....abt the story..u have no idea how eagerly i will be waiting to read ur story..please post longer part asap
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part loved it....... i really can't wait for naina to come in the academy, so dr ritu mishra has entered hmmmm what is she planning...... anyways i loved huda and simrans scene loved the way she answered him back 😆 .... she really reminds me of naina, but how is she related to naina or navin
i can't wait to read some nok jok scened between raj and naina, and ofcourse some romantic scenes aswell 😳 and her being jealous will be icing on the cake 😃
once agin amazing part 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part indeed................all d best for ur exams.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap now only with long part asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

it was a excellent part.i love it.tooooooooooooo good.thankuu soo much for this marvelous update.and all the very best for ur exam.

thanku soo verryy much......
thankuu for the beautiful comment....😳😳
thankss my exams r going gr88...
and i vl update either on saturday or on sunday....

till then... take care and keep smiling....
sheenu...😊😊

Edited by rogerfan - 17 years ago

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