Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 669

Gr8 part sawera
Komal & marium 2 good fantastic 👏 👏 👏

Oh Nice part Sawera... 👏
But wat yaar next part mei hi break-up not fair 😭 Ek part pahele Pyaar ka Izhaar Karvaya Pyaar parwan bhi nai chadha aur Tum break up karva dogi... plz don't...

great going 👏 👏 👏 continue sooon

this was kaam chalao for u...but it's a brilliant prt sawera.... 😛

Originally posted by: KulBin

Oh Nice part Sawera... 👏
But wat yaar next part mei hi break-up not fair 😭 Ek part pahele Pyaar ka Izhaar Karvaya Pyaar parwan bhi nai chadha aur Tum break up karva dogi... plz don't...

Thanx 4 ur comments Kulbin....ok teq hai next part mein break up nahi karwati but ussay next mein karwna paraygaa😉 story bhi tu agaya baranyii hai i am planing a very big twist but can't say how u guyz will take tat up anywayz...thanx 4 reading my story😊

Originally posted by: harpy

this was kaam chalao for u...but it's a brilliant prt sawera.... 😛

Harpy...thanx alot...bus i didn't liked this part too much as i thought i thought i was kinda of dragiing da story but i am glad u liked😃

juhi_hussain_lo n Aswa thanx 4 ur comments😊

hey komal, sawera, maira
u all r fantastic, marvellous, superb, fantastic, mind-blowing---------------or words nahin mill rahay

komal:tumhari story kay baghair hamara hafta kaisay katay ga or abhi tum nay promise kia tha kay tum rooz story post karoo gii.....not fair 😭 😭 😭

sawera......i m also saying the same....kuch to becharoon ko saath rehnay do........milwatay saath ki unh ko alag kar rahi hoo.....tusshar hamesha wrong time per entry kyoun marta hai?......

maira:shukar hai app nay bhi likha........jaldi say abh janat ki bhi shadi karwa do kyoun kay abh us ki shadi ki uma ho chuki hai.....waisay imran ka character kaun play kar raha hai....i forget yaar...sowwiee

ATTENTION!!! (😆😳)

A new fan-fic... I will be ending ARMAAN soon, as there is no point in continuing the story further and dragging it like the Kekta soaps... our jodi is together, there are no misunderstandings between them, and as the clich goes, 'all is well, that ends well!'

This one is different... we saw Rajeev in Time Bomb, and in CID, Aamna's still stuck to Kashish, but we got to see them in Sun Leyna... that's the love story... but we have plenty of that stuff... we've got a bit of family saga's too... what we don't have is ACTION... maar dhaar... dishoom dishoom... and the likes... lol... so I've decided to start a new fan-fic, it's gonna have action, but some romance too... but the focus is action... this is an experiment... let me know if you like it or not, can't think up a name for it, I'll leave that to you... here's the Prologue:

A high-tec office with computers all round... and a lady shouting orders: 'I want the information fast... you have 10 mintues, that guy will be here any time... chalo... fast... jaldi...'

8 MINUTES...

KNOCK... KNOCK...

'come in' says the same lady

'hello princess... what's up?'

'Tushaar... for heaven's sake... go to your desk and get me the info on the terrorists who were behind the bomb blasts at the community centre, here's a copy of the forensic report from one the dead bodies, this is all the info you'll need, get going...'

'aey princess...' tries to get close to her, 'come on yaar... kaam tou hota rahe ga... kabhi apne is gareeb honay walay pati ko bhi lift kara diya karo...' tries to hug her... TISSSSSSSSH!!! she slaps him, 'stay away from me when I'm working, in this office main tumhari group cheif hoon aur kuch nahii... I can get you suspended for what you're trying to do... now out!!!'

The guy leaves... with the report of course...

5 MINUTES...

'Arjun... hua kya???' the lady asks a man sitting on a computer

Arjun: 'no ma'am, merey paas jo data hai usmain ye match nai ho raha...'

'How is that possible??? Check it again...'

Arjun: 'yes ma'am'

4 MINUTES

The lady spends the next four minutes going to each and very individual in that hall, there are 25 people working diligently on their computers, personal, macro... iis office main har size ka computer hai...

10 minutes pass, Tushaar comes to the lady, 'guzar gaey aapk 10 minutes... kahan hai voh maha shay???'

A lady on a computer replies: 'he's very punctual, he won't be late... 5-4-3-2-1...'

Just as she says '1' a man comes to the lady in charge: 'ACP Kashish Sinha?'

'Yes' says Kashish...

'Hi, DIG Sujal Garewal, crime branch Mumbai... I have been sent here to investigate the community centre bombings...'

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I forgot to say... PLEASE COMMENT... 😆

wow what maar dhaar please encounter this idiot tushaaaar and finish him...what a fast track combo NATZ I JUST LOVE IT!!! 😆