Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 670

Thanks Harpy... you just gave me a great idea... 😛 😉 😃 suggest a name please... 😊

WOW.......gr8 story natz ACP Kashsih wat an idea.... 👏 hmmmm titlle of story sochna paray gaa

hmmm name for an action pact romantic saga....ermmmmmm"

"LOVE UNDER PRESSURE COOKER"😆just kidding......

le'mme think.....

"PASSION UNDERNEATH MISSION" how's that weird naa.....😕

Originally posted by: harpy

hmmm name for an action pact romantic saga....ermmmmmm"

"LOVE UNDER PRESSURE COOKER"😆just kidding......

le'mme think.....

"PASSION UNDERNEATH MISSION" how's that weird naa.....😕

Thanks Harpy... I like LOVE UNDER PRESSURE COOKER, but lets wait for more suggestions, till then... here's the first part:

ACTION ATTRACTION!!!

(This is what I have decided to call the fan-fic until you guys think of a name…)

Link to the prologue: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=88752&TP N=937

PART-1

48 hours ago:

A new mayor had been elected for Shimla; no one had ever thought a terrorist attack could rock the beautiful peaceful town of Shimla. But as the oath taking ceremony of the mayor was taking place, five bombs that exploded in the community centre killed everyone there.

500 people died in a matter of two minutes… this was the first terrorist activity in Shimla, and the whole of India was shocked. The government knew that they had to get to the bottom of this as some eminent politicians and some of Shimla's richest and India's most influential men had died there.

The chief minister gave 'Crime Branch Shimla' and it's chief of operations ACP Kashish Sinha the task to get to the bottom of the event within 48 hours or else, he threatened a specialist from Mumbai would be called.

ACP Kashish Sinha, although is a woman has a track record that is better then most of the men in anti- crime branches, she has one motto, 'eliminate crime', she considered it an insult to her department if an outsider came in and did everything in her power to get substantial investigation done. In these two days, they found a burned body from a garbage heap and Kashish was sure it had something to do with the community centre incident.

POLICE HEADQUARTERS- ANTI CRIME BRANCH--- SHIMLA

Before I continue the story, I'll give a brief professional introduction of those who matter here:

Special Agent Arjun Malik: (Hussain- I chose the name Arjun from Krishna-Arjun)-28

Trained in Calcutta, Mumbai, London and secret bases all over the world Arjun Malik is a specialist in crime detection and investigation, he's also a brilliant computer expert, trained to hack multi-protection soft wares and codes, plus he's a data expert. This on- field record is second to none, he's Kashish's assistant at the Shimla crime branch.

Special Agent Anjali Varma: (Natasha- Kavyanjali)-26

Trained in various secret bases, her excellence lies in the ability to get the truth out of some of the most hideous criminals. She has also served as an under-cover agent on various occasions.

Special Agent Tushaar Pundit: (Gurpreet-Tushaar in KTH)-28

Trained in Africa, he has been trained to fight, he is an exceptional shooter too, and knows how to fly helicopters and planes, is an on-field expert, with little or no knowledge about what happens in-doors, has one weakness--- sexy ladies…

There are others too… but I'll talk about them later…

Now back to the DIG's entry…

Kashish: yes… I know that… please follow me, I want to introduce you to my colleagues here…

Kashish: This is Arjun… agar computer se related koi bhi kaam ho, tou inki help lain… plus, ye field experience bhi rakhtay hain…

Sujal: Hi, DIG Sujal Garewal… aap mujhe meray naam se bulaen gey…

Arjun: nice to meet you Sujal…

They shake hands

Kashish: Anjali… kissi bhi criminal se koi bhi interrogation karni ho… Anjali is the one to refer to… koi under-cover assignment ho… she's the one to talk to

Sujal: Hi…

Anjali: Hi…

They shake hands

Kashish: Tushaar… kissi ki taang torni ho… kisssi ko jaan se maarna ho… he's your man, ye field man bhi hain… he can fly as well…

Tushaar grins: yeah… I'm the man here…

Sujal: Hi…

Tushaar: hey… by the way… you'll be glad to know… I'm Kash's fianc too…

Tries to hug her again but TSSSSSSSSSH!!! She slaps him…

Kashish: kitni baar kaha hai… nothing personal when we're working…

The whole department laughs…

Sujal: Kashish, aap shaayad jaanti nai… yahan aane valey sweeper tak kii janam kundli se waqif hoon main… main iin sab ko jaanta hoon… aapko bhi… I've done my homework… but it looks as if, you haven't… ATTENTION EVERYONE!!! (He shouts out) mera naam DIG Sujal Garewal hai… main yahan bombings ko investigate karne aaya hoon… ham sab saath… aik team key jaise kaam karnay waley hain… you're to call me Sujal… no sir… no chief… no boss… am I making myself clear???

'yes' says everyone in chorus…

Sujal: good… now Kashish, can we have a chat?

Kashish: yes, follow me…

Tushaar starts following them…

Kashish turns around: 'ab tum kahan chaley?'

Tushaar: er… voh… baat karni hai naa DIG se… tum akeley kaise?

Kashish grits her teeth: Tushaar, tum se senior hoon, kaam mujhe zyaada aata hai… I don't need your help!!!

Sujal & Kashish go to Kashish's cabin…

TO BE CONTINUED…

Please comment…

Looking 4werd 2 ur new story natz
"LOVE UNDER PRESSURE COOKER"
Good thought of name harpy 😆

Although it doesn't happen in between cops but I've decided that Kashish will slap Tushaar at least ONCE in an episode... like the idea??? 😆 😕

wow natz u made my day...awsome brilliant...do i need to say anymore...anyway...kaash tushaar ka plane crash ho jaaye aur woh.............understand...
humph sujal has an attitiude loved it...and kashsih thoda charming sujal par bhi ATTENTION do please....

maria grt part........ 😊 👏 👏
sawera good going ........ 😊 👏 👏 and get well soon.😊
natz nice intro 👏

maria rocking part 👏 👏 👏
sawera diiiiii fantaSTIC 👏
natz gr888888888888888888888 👏

Nida n Komal thanx 4 ur comments
Natz tat was fantactic nno wordz to praise u.... 👏