Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 668

im rittin ma prt

SIRF APP SE KARTE HEIN PYAR

recap:da flashback......

janat:wat....ur infertile...
manat got tear in her eyes...
janat:im sowwie
manat:dun worry....
janat:wat do u fink who changed da reports???
manat:im not sure but i fink it waz vasu aunty....
janat:im sure bout it....i wont leave dat....
manat:janat....i dun care now coz mama hav realized....
janat:yeah...ur rite...acha leave all dis....tell me howz life goin???
manat:its goin gr8...n its all coz ov azan 😳 😳 😳....i often finks iz dare a life wivout him...
janat:ohhhhhh...u wazn't dat romantic b4...dun say its all coz ov azan 😆 😆 😆
manat:stop teasin me....itz ma tym to tease u... 😳
janat:wat do u mean...
manat:u r in luv!!!
janat:excuse me...i dun ave tym 4 all dis rubbish
manat:dats wat i used to say b4 i met azan...im sure u fancy imran...
janat:hes a nice guy...but i dun fink i luv him...i lik him but not luv him
manat:see u dun get shocked wen i said u fancy imran...awrite let it b...but u will realize...
janat:ok say i luv him but how can i believe dat luvz me n will neve betray me...
manat:u avn't even expressed...n ur talkin bout betrayin n all dat stuff...u no wat i fink he also likes u...he waz lookin at u all da tym...
janat:waz he...i fink dats wat da boyz do wen dey first met wiv gals n afte marriage dey dun even cares for us(hey boyz i dun ave nefin againt u but its janats character....so plz...)
manat:oh comon yaar...ur finkin bout ur marriage...
janat:evy1 should fink bout their future 😉
manat:so dats mean u will marry i mean u used to say dat u will neve marry... 😉 😉
janat:oh....wo..woh...oh im sleepy im goin to bed...
manat:dun fink bout imran all da nite...ok
janat:ahhhhhhhh...will stop it now yaar...
manat:hmmmmm...u also teased me a lot....so its ma tym...
janat:no use in arguingwiv u...acha i fink i lu...luv him but im not sure n cant believe him....
manat:meet him 2moro n try to read his eyes...u no wat i mean is??? lets see wat happens???
janat:hmmm let see wat happens 2moro....

comin up:let see wat happens 2moro 😆 😆 😆

sowwie for small prt...i will try to cont 2moro n n if not den afte ma exams....kk??? n plz dun shout coz ov da small prt as u did once...gimme as much cmpliments as u can coz da more da comments u will da bigger da prt it will b nex tym.... 😉 😆 😆

lots ov compliments...k

komal ur story totally ROCKS........... 👏 😊 😃

maira too good............. 👏 👏 👏

farah , juhi , kiran tum kahaan ho........ 😭
😭 😭 😭
plz jaldi aakar apni story post karo.....missing them very very very very very very very very badly
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Komal dear thanks a ton for writing the story... 😊
It was just superb I loved it... 👏 👏
& mein aur fan-fic likhun noways... yaar tum sab gr8 writers k saamne obiviously darr to jaaungi na... 😃
Anyways cont.. soon... I know u said that u'll not write till one week now but I know for ur fan-fic fans sake u'll have to write ur fan-fic soon.. 😉

i think komal is right we have to give shruti sometime to continue with her story..... 😃

Komal very nice part...its rocking............................

Marium gr88888 part............................

sun sunleyna 😉 ... it's sunday..now ur turn to post story....

KAISAY KAHOON

Reacp:Rajeev & Kashish spent sum lovely time 2gether....Tusshar tells Cg tat Kashish was wid Rajeev...n Cg is very angry at this......

Kashish enters her house n whole family is standing....

Cg:Kahan thi tum
Kashish:woh mein....
Cg:kitni baar kaha hai Rajeev say mat mila karooo phir yeh baat tumhari samjh mein nahi ati..
Kashish:mein appko bata chuki hoon k app meri zindagi mein dhakal naa diya karay......
Cg:mein nay keha diya hai k tum Rajeev say nahi milogiii...
Kashish(shocked):app hotay kon hai meri zindagi ka faisla lenay walay.....
Cg:baap hoon tumhara haq mera tumhari zindagi par....
Kashish(laughs):haq.......aaj aap ko meray baap honay ka ehaas howa aur app haq lenay aagay tab kahan thay jab bachpan mein mujay kami mehsoos hoti thi.....aur apnay meri ma ko mujsay cheen liya....koi haq nahi hai appko....khabhi mainay apna baap mana hiii nahiii
Cg(shouts):Kashishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....
Kashish:chalnay ka elwa app kar hii kya saktay hooo....koi jawab nahi hai naa mera sawaaloo kaa
Cg:Kashish..bus karoooo
Kashish:nahi Mr.Cg aaj apnay haq kii baat kii hii hai tu mein bhi apni ma k haq k baaray mein kuch poachna chayooogiiii...joo apnay is aurat(poiting towards Vasu) ko day diye
Cg(breaksdown):Kashish...mein tumhari maa say bahut pyar karta tha..jab tak woh meri zindagi mein thi mein kisi aur k baray mein soch bhi nahi sakta tha.......
Vasu was getting hyper k agr Cg nay Kashish ko sab kuch bata diya tu uska bana banaya khel khrab hoajyegaa
Vasu(interups):rehnay doo Cg..yeh nahi samjhi gii
Cg:nahi Vasu aaj mujay bolnay dooo
Kashish:aap k pass ab bhi kuch bolnay ko hai....
Cg:haan aaj mein tumhein saari sachi bataya hoon.....mein nay tumhara ma k sath khabhi koi dhoka nahi diya dhoka tu usnay diya mujay woh gayi mujay chor kar aur jab woh jaa rahi thi tab uski car ka accident hogaya......Vasu meri zindagi mein sirf tumhari waja say hai...tumhari maa k marnay k baad meri halat yeh nahi thi k tumhein sambhal sakta.....
Kashish(confusd):nahi ap jhooth bol rahay hain
Cg:beta yehi sach hai......
Kashish:nahi asa nahi hosakta.....meri maa asa nahi kar sakti saying this she leaves 4 her..room
Vasu(to herself):Cg aur Kashish mein ab galat fhemi dorr hogayii mujay kuch karna paraygaa agr yeh baap beti eek dosray k kareeb agaaay tu prob mujay hoogi.....aur sachi....hahahahahaa woh tu Cg ko khud nahi pata....
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Kashish has been very upset 4rm last 5 days abt da incident tat happened...she 1st thought of telling Rajeev abt this but..then thought tat he will get worried....she has been trying to talk to him normally but Rajeev cud sense sumthing is rong.......she didn't even talked to her sisters just Rajeev was one whom she talked....to..Tusshar has been worrying abt her...but was helpless....All others r busy in prepations of Piyush marriage n engagements.....here is Rajeev is very excited to b bac as he planed to surpirse her as he is cuming earlier.......
Rajeev calls Kashish.....
Rajeev:Hiii
Kashish:Hiiii
Rajeev:h r u...
Kashish:i am ok u tell
Rajeev:ok lag tu rahi nahi.....tumhara ok pata hai mujay
Kashish:nahi bus waise hiii...i am missing u
Rajeev:ohh....waise ghar par kon kon hai
Kashish:sab hai kyun....
Rajeev:nahii..woh....i mean poachna mana hai
Kashish:u r impossible....tumhara baatein tu mujay samjh nahi atiiii
Rajeev:mein baad mein samjha doongaa...bye 4 u now
Kashish(sadly):haan...bye
As Rajeev puts his phone down...he says to Piyush
Rajeev: yaar bachalor nite karna zaroori hai kya grlz ko bhi bula letay hai it wud b soo much fun.......
(he is in india at home...preparing 4 a boyz party..b4 Piyush marriage....)
Akshat:yaar tu Kashish k bina raha sakta kya..
Rajeev:woh baat nahi hai...par
Piyush:par kya.....it a 4 bachaloers.tat it
Rajeev(sad):ok.....acha mein Kashish say mil kar ayooon
Akshat:NAHI!!!!!!! help kar meri.....
Rajeev:achaa.....Varun tu hii kuch bol
Varun:bhaiya mein kya bolon..Mehak aatiii tu acha hota...
Piyush:ab tu nahi.....oye Akshat tumnay Tusshar koo invite kiya hai
Akshat:haan...kar diya hai....
Rajeev:nahi..mein aaraha.....ab Tusshar koo chelna paraygaa.....
Piyush:bus...sab chup aur kaam karooo sab....
NIGHT
Akshat:Ahhhhhh....bachalor party ka apna hii maza hai no grlz around.....
Piyush:haan....par....
Rajeev:apr kya...Archie ko miss kar rahay hoo
Varun:bhaiya app bahut khush lag rahay hooo....thodi dayer phelay tu...apkoo yahan nahi ana tha...
Rajeev:haan...bus...
Akshat:finally a boyz nite out......
Rajeev:hmmmmmm....
Just da enters...Archie,Kashish,Charu,Mehak....n cums to there table...
Grlz:Hiii everyone....
Akshat(mouth opened):i thought it was boyz party....
Charu:yeah u r rite but Rajeev bhaiya is invited us
Piyush:ohh......Rajeev i will talk to u after wardz...
Rajeev:welcum welcum.....
Mehak:thanx alot...
Rajeev:well guyz mein appki party ditrub nahi karoonga..app apni party enjoy karoo...i am taking ladies out 4 dinner hope no one mindz.....
They r abt to leave....
Piyush:nahi....Rajeev ab yeh yahan aagayi hai tu...they r welcum
Archie:nahi itz ok
Piyush:ab Archie rukh jayoo naa....
They all sit 2gether in couples like Mehak&Vaurn n Piyush& Archie n Akshat&Charu n Rajeev n Kashish...n odd man out Tusshar is sitting wid Kashish as she is btw Rajeev & Tusshar.....all were chatting n fighting...teasing eachother...but Rajeev cud sense Kashish isn't there...he gets up n say tat he will b rite bac....he calls Kashish n tells her to cum out...she also leaves..all r busy..but Tusshar is eager to find tat where Kashish went.......
Rajeev:Kashish..jab say mein aya hoon i can feel tum kuch mujsay chuppa rahi hoo
Kashish:nahi..kuch nahi...bus asie hiii
Rajeev:soo tum mujay nahi bataooogiii
Kashish:woh us din..jab mein ghar dad...nay..tells her da whole incident.....
Rajeev:ohhh..Kashish is baat pareshan hooo...mein samjha pata nahi kya hogaya.....ab mein agaya hoon naa we will find out wat da truth..don't worry.....
Kashish:hmmmmmm
They both hug n Tusshar who overheard all this just cums then....
Tusshar:ahem..ahem..
RK seprates n Rajeev say.....
Rajeev:yaar..tum yahan...peecha kar rahay thay Kashish kaa
Kashish:kya Rajeev tum bhi....
Tusshar:nahi i was finding u...ppl
Rajeev:oooo...k we r cuming..n he leaves
Kashish:chalein.....
Rajeev:phelay giv me smile...
Kashish(smiles):ab chalein
Rajeev:yeah tat more like Kashish...
They return bac.......n Piyush asks...
Piyush(mischeivously):kahan thay
Rajeev:woh..yehi bus bahr gay thay....
Akshat:haan.....acha we hav deicided to play a game....sab apnay beloved k liye eek gana gaye gaay......
Rajeev:gana ok....chaloo lets 1st start 4rm grlz....
Kashish:nahi yeh kya baat hoi...guyz 1st....
Rajeev:no...itz a universal rule ladies 1st.....
Piyush:ohh tum larna band karoooo...1 guy 1 grl...so mein start karta hoon.....
Akshat:ok....Archie b ready......
PIYUSH
Humein tumsay pyar kitna yeh hum nahi jantay
Magar jii saktay tumharay bina hoooo
Humein tumsay pyar kitna yeh hum nahi jantay
Magar jii saktay tumharay bina hoooo

Varun:wah bhaiya bhabhi apki baari....

ARCHIE
Subah hogayi shaam hogayi
Subah hogayi shaam hogayi
Din guzartay jayegay jayengay
Hum tumharay pyar mein
Yun jeetay martay jayegay

Charu:Ab kiski baari Rajeev......
Rajeev:mein....acha..hmmmmmmmm

RAJEEV
Tere liye meri sansein mujsay tujsay pyar hai
Tuj pay hii aa zindagi jaan nasar hai
Meray do jahan tu hai
Meri khuswahion tu hai
Meri dharkanein tu hai
Tere liye meri sansein mujsay tujsay pyar hai
Tuj pay hii aa zindagi jaan nasar hai

Akshat:Kashish....ur turn.....
Kashish:hmmmmm
KASHISH
Humko humi say chura looo
Dil mein kahin tum chuplooo
Hum akelay hojana jaye
Door tumsay hona jaye
Pass ayoo galay say laga looo

VARUN
Khoya khoya tha duniya ki rahaion mein
Tusjay milkar hun mein khoya teri nighaion mein
Khud say anjan hoon mein khud say bighana
kya dekhti tumhari nazar mujko batana

MEHAK
Tujay dekha tu yeh jana sanam
Pyar hota hai dewaana sanam
Ab yahan say kahan jaye hum
Teri baahon mein mar jayein hum

Charu:ab Akshat da gr8
Akshat:gr8 woh tu mein hoon hiii..hmmm gana yeah
AKSHAT
Yeh jo mobbhat hai yeh unka hai kaam
Mehboob ka jooo bus letay howay naam
Maar jayen mit jayen hojayen badnaam
Rehnay do choro bhi janay doon yaar
Hum karay gay pyar

CHARU
Chrua liya hai tumnay joo dil ko nazar nahi churna saman
badal meri tum zindagani kahin badal na jana sanam
tum meray hooo haan tum hooo aaj tum itna vaada kar k jana
Chura liya hai tumay joo dil kooo nazar nahi churan saman

Kashish:now itz Tusshar turn....
Rajeev:haan Tusshar bhi yehi hai
Tusshar:mein par Kashish
Kashish:chaloo ab gayoo bhiii

TUSSHAR
Janay hai kitna bechain dil
Janay hai kaisa dewaanapan
Khabhi na sukoon aya khabhi naa qarar aya
Jab say hai tumppay mujko pyar ayaaa

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SHERGILLS HOUSE(tat nite)
Tusshar is totally drunk.....
Tusshar:bahi kuch bhi karoo blackmail him or watever i don't care mein us Rajeev k cheary par Kashish koo jeetnay kii khushi nahi dekh sakta.....Kashish sirf meri....us hasil karna hia mujay....
Swayam:came down......Kashish sirf tumhari hii hai...bus mujay thora aur waqt doo.....
Akshat overhears this.....n interups........
Akshat:bahi.....app Tusshar ko samjhooo k Kashish sirf Rajeev pyar karti hai.....
Tusshar:par mein bhi ussay pyar karta hoon.....
Aksaht:par tumhein samjhna hoga yeh pyar khabhi tumhara tha hii nahi...aur Kashish koo apnay dimagh say nikal doo.....
Tusshar:Kashish koo mujsay koi alag nahi kar sakta...no one
Swayam:kiddo tu jaa mein Tusshar koo samjha doongaa....
n Akshat..leaves.....
Tusshar(murmuting):Kashish sirf meri hai
Swayam:Tusshar mein tujsay wada karta hoon agalay eek haftay mein Kashish hamshea k liye teri hojaygiii......

Guyz this was a kaam chalooo part....harpy said me continue soo i did..i wasn't feeling well i will write an interesting part...soon
Coming up.... RK break up....Tusshar n Kashish engagement..etc
This part of my story is dedicated to harpy
plz do comment
SAWERA

Maira gr8 part.... 👏