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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: komalsirwani

komalsirwani wrote:

iloveamna wrote

ambrainaaltaf wrote

😆 😆 theek hai amby lekin suna hai ki tumne aur richa ne milkar komal ko bahut chimpoo BACHA kaha hai theek main tumse bada hoon naa ok u can call me anything i will call u AMBUUU BACHA 😈 😈

BACHAAAA nahiinnnnnnnnnnnnn

HA HA HA HA HA HA KYON KYA BAAT HAI AMBUUUU BACHA 😆 😆 ITNE PYAARE PYAARE SMILEYS KYON USE KAR RAHI HO 😆

very gud DAKSH gr88888888 u're too gud 👏ambuuuuuu bacha bahut mazaa aata tha na mujhe bacha bulane mein😆😆


kiimmmyyyy phele hee mere tabiyath karab hai mujhe aur gussee mein mat laaaaaa😡


Oh ambuuuuuu bacha gusse mein ho cool dwn bache zyada gussa nahi karte😆

nahiin im not angry bas tabiyath karab hai....

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Posted: 19 years ago
?Komal lamhe waz Rocking yaar......
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Posted: 19 years ago
aawwww chimppooo such a luvly part & wo bhi especially 4 me 😳 😳 well done 😆 newayzz this part was.....umm.... AC 👏 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
here's 12th part of LAMHE
Recap:Some masti in party n after party n the kashish-sujal 1st HUG.Sujal tells his love for kashish to kumkum n kumkum tells abt kashish's rishta wid vijay,

Sujal leaves da house n goes to kashish's house.He calls kashish,
Kashish's cell:ek main aur ek tu hain
aur hawa mein jaadoo hain
arzoo bekaboo
Kashish picks up her cell,
Kashish(in a sleepy tone):Hello
Sujal:hello kashish
Kashish(suddenly wakes up):Sujal tum is waqt kya hua koi problem
Sujal:haan kashish problem to hai par main tumhe phone pe nahiin bata sakta
Kashish:kyun aisi kya baat hai
Sujal:hai kuch baat kashish acha tum mujhe sirf itna batao tum mujhe abhi mil sakti ho
Kashish(surprised or rather shocked):abhiiiiii(kripa turns dis side )
Kripa(in a sleepy tone):kya hua kashish
Kashish:vo kuch nahi tum so jao
Kripa:acha theek hai
Kashish(to sujal):abhiiiii lekin kyun
Sujal:kyun mat poocho kashish bas itna batau kya hum abhi mil sakte hain]
Kashish(thinks a li'l):theek hain bolo kahaan milna hai
Sujal:tum neeche aa jao main neeche khada hoon
Kashish:ok main bas 10 min mein aayi
Sujal:theek hai
Kashish keeps da phone n gets ready n slowly leaves da house.
Kashish:sujal tum bhi na aisi kaunsi baat hai jo tum subah tak ka intezaar bhi nahi kar sakte
Sujal:sawaal mat poocho kashish bas tum gaadi mein betho tumhe khud ba khud sab kuch pata chal jayega
Kashish:theek hain chalo(she sits n they drive off )
Sujal brings Kashish to a lonely place n stops da car there.They both get down of da car n start walking
Kashish:Sujal ab tum mujhe bataoge bhi ya nahiin ki hum yahaan kyun aaye hain
Sujal:kya har cheez bataana zaroori hai kya bole bina hum apne dil ki baat nahi zahir kar sakte
Kashish:Kar sakte hain ofcourse kar sakte hain lekin tabhi jab jise hum apne dil ki baat kehna chahte hain vo hume samaj sake
Sujal:agar vo samaj sakta hain aur vo bhi keh nahi paa raha to
Kashish:to phir hume lafzon ka istimal karna hoga apni feelings zaahir karne ke liye agar humne is izhar mein zara si bhi der kii to phir hum zindagi bhar pachtate rahenge isliye hume kabhi kabhi izhaar karna bhi zaroori hota hai
Sujal:lekin kya izhaar kare bina kuch nahiin ho sakta.......bolo na kashish....kashish.....kashish(n he turns to see on his side but he was shocked not to see kashish der,he turns bak n sees kashish crying in pain due to bleeding of her leg)
Sujal runs to kashish n he carries her in his arms n takes her to da nearest hospital.He starts crying.The doctors take him to da OT
The doctor cums out after 30 mins
Sujal:doctor kashish kaisi hai
Doctor:dont worry mr. Sujal aapki frnd bilkul theek hain bas thodi si chot aayi thi jis par humne bandage laga diya hain ab vo bilkul theek hain
Sujal:thank god doctor kya main usse mil sakta hoon
Doctor:of course par itna dhyaan rahe injection ke influence ki wajah se vo so rahi hai to unhe disturb na ho
Sujal:haan doctor
Sujal goes inside.He sits beside Kashish n takes her hand in his n starts talking to her.
Sujal:agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota kashish tumhare bina main kaise jita tumne ek baar bhi nahiin socha ki mera kya hoga ab main tumhe kaise batau ki tum meri jaan,meri saansein,meri dhadkan,mere jeene ka maqsad ho tum hi mera sab kuch ho haan kashish u're my life I JUST CANT LIVE WITHOUT U ........I LOVE U KASHISH I LOVE U.....par meri badnaseebi yeh hai ki i cant tell u kaise batau tumhe darta hoon agar tumne naa kar diya to
Kashish:aur agar haan kaha to
Sujal(surprised):kashish tum........ tum so nahi rahi thi kya tumne sab kuch sun liya
Kashish:haan sujal haan sab kuch suna maine sab kuch jo bhi tumne abhi abhi kaha jo tum pata nahiin kab se kehne ki koshish kar rahe the
Sujal:kashish tum aaraam karo plzzz main bahar jaata hoon(n he gets up to go out)
Kashish(holds his hands):mera jawaab to sun lo haan Sujal mera jawaab haan hai mera jawaab vahi hai jo tum sunna chahte the aisa ho sakta hai tum propose karo aur ladki mana kare
Sujal:vo to hai(n he comes n gives her a biggggg hug)
Song in Background:
Jee yeh chahe yeh lamhe
Bas yahi pe ruk jaaye
Saamne tum raho aur
Hum tumhe dekhe jaaye
Dil mein hone lagi hain
Meethi meethi si hulchul
Tum raho saath jaise
Meri aankhon ka kajal
Saath din raat rahe
oooooooo ooooo
Pyar ki baat rahe
Aur rahe kuch na baaki
Maine izhaar kiya hai
Sun mere saathi
Thoda sa pyaar huwa hai
Thoda hai baaki

They both seprate
Sujal:acha chalo kashish ab tum aaraam karo hum kal subah ghar jayenge
Kashish:theek hain par tum yahiin rehna kahiin nahiin jaana
Sujal:haan baba yahiin hoon bas doctor se baat karke aata hoon
Kashish:theek hain
That night somehow is over.Its early in da morning 6.30 wen Sujal comes to drop Kashish home.
Sujal:Kashish sambhal kar jaana kaho to tumhe andar takk chod doon
Kashish:nahiin nahiin ghar pe sab so rahe honge
Sujal:haan to phir kya problem hain main tumhe chaodne chaloonga
Kashish:par agar koi uth gaya to
Sujal:kuch nahiin hoga kashish main tumhe is halat mein akele nahiin aane doonga main tumhare saath chal raha hoon bas
Kashish:ok boss
Kashish gets dwn n sujal helps her to get in the house.They both get in wen suddenly a vase drops by sujal's hand.
Kashish:oh god ab kya kare ab koi na koi to aayega tum kahi chup jao Sujal plzzzzzz
Sujal:par kahaan
Kashish:kahiin bhi jao mere room mein chale jao par jaldi jaao
Sujal runs n here prerna comes.Kashish is seeing dis side of da hall wen sum1 touches her frm behind.She gets afraid n turns
Prerna:kya huwa kashish tum itni subah subah yahaan
Kashish:haan bhabhi vo........vo main paani peene aayi thi
Prerna:paani peene par kitchen to vahaan hai phir tum yahaan kahaan jaa rahi ho
Kashish:vo......vo.......yahaan.....yahaan main isliye jaa rahi thi kyunki maine paani pee liya aur ab main apne kamre mein jaa rahi thi
Prerna:par tumhara kamra to us taraf hain
Kashish:haan us taraf hain.......vo main bhul gayi thi
Prerna:kya kashish tum bhi na chalo ab jao so jao
Kashish:haan bhabhi bas jaati hoon
She goes frm there but as shes having hurt she cant walk properly so she was limping.
Prerna:kashish yeh kya huwa tum langda kyun rahi ho
Kashish:vo bhabhi pair mein moch aa gayi hai isliye
Prerna:acha theek hain chalo main baam laga deti hoon
Kashish:nahiin bhabhi bas theek ho jaye ga
Prerna:aise kaise theek ho jaye ga dikhao mujhe(n she goes nearer to kashish n she sees tat plaster)
Prerna:yeh kya hai kashish tumhare pair mein to plaster hain yeh kaise hua sach sach batao
Kashish:vo bhabhi actually(n she tells her da truth)
Prerna:kyaaaaa tumhara accident huwa aur humein pata bhi nahiin aur sujal vo kahaan hai
Kashish:vo bhabhi vo mere kamre mein chupa huwa hai
Prerna:chalo use to main wahiin dekh loongi
Now Prerna n Kashish go to her room.There they see Sujal
Prerna:Sujal yeh main kya sun rahi hoon
Sujal(too much afraid):bhabhi aap maine kuch nahiin kiya bhabhi i promise vo to kashish hi dekh kar nahiin chal rahi thi aur uska pair......
Prerna:to tumhe to sambhalna chahiye na aisa bhi koi propose karta hain bhala hospital mein soo boring
Kashish n Sujal both r stunned
Kashish:bhabhiiiiii aap aapko pata tha kii Sujal mujhe propose karne aane wala hain
Prerna:haan pata tha Kumkum ka phone aaya tha aur phir maine tumhe jaate huwe bhi dekha tha
Sujal:iska matlab yeh aap dono ka plan tha
Prerna:ofcourse
Kripa:aur ismein main bhi shaamil thi
All look at the bed
Sujal n Kashish:tum bhiiiii
Kripa(gets up n comes to them):aur nahiin to kya tum dono to ek dusre to kahoge nahiin isliye maine bhi Prerna bhabhi aur Kumkum bhabhi ka saath diya tumhe milwane mein
Prerna:acha acha theek hain bahut ho gayi baatein chalo ab Sujal tum niklo kisi ne tumhe dekh liya na to phir hamari shamat aa jayegi
Sujal:haan vo to hai chalo ab main nikalta hoon bye bhabhi bye kripa byeeeee(n he looks at kashish n den every1)
Kripa:acha baba bhabhi chalo hum neeche chalte hain
Prerna:ok
Kashish blushes
Sujal:thx kripa
Kripa:no problem jijs
Kripa n Prerna leave
Sujal hugs kashish
Sujal(in tat position only):acha kashish main chalta hoon apna khyaal rakhna zyada bhagdaud mat karna bahut sa aaraam karna theek hai
Kashish:(seprates herself frm him):ok boss as u say
Sujal:chalo ab byeeeee(n he kisses her on her forehead n goes away)
Kashish:byeeeeeeee
Kashish stands in da balcony n sees him go .
ok guys end of 12th part plzzzzzzz comment.


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Posted: 19 years ago
komal good going 😊
keep posting like this 😊 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow.i am first to comment..... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
komal nice part
thanks at least tm ne toh likha
pls sab likho yaar kal sunday hai holiday likho yaar
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: rmanu7382

Dimmy ...tum aab Sur ki supari le lo ...waise main beech main khadi hoon .... par yeh ladki SORRY bahut bolti hai 1!!!!!!!!!!!!1

dii main supari nahe icecream leti hoon😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
i luved this part as well komal!!please do post everyday
cant wait
Pooja 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Kimmy........... muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..lovely part .... aacha tareeka tha ..izhaar karane ka 😳 love u ...

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