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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: natz

Although it doesn't happen in between cops but I've decided that Kashish will slap Tushaar at least ONCE in an episode... like the idea??? 😆 😕

loved ur idea😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: natz

Although it doesn't happen in between cops but I've decided that Kashish will slap Tushaar at least ONCE in an episode... like the idea??? 😆 😕

WAH WAH JHAKAS IDEA go ahed why one slap go for 3 slaps per episode...and cont soon....don't keep us waiting for long as u always do!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
maira nice part par thoda chotta tha
sawera good work
natz nice idea do cont fast n regularly
rest all sab kahan hai juhi genious farah amby shruti manu sorry agar kisi ko bhool gayi par sab log yaar pls cont story aur sun aaj sunday ho gaya ab jurmana bharna padega
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey guys!....yes nikhat mein idhar hi kahin hon...thanx for remembering me!...natz i havent read you part.....but will surely search it out and read it! 😉

Well....EID mubarak to everyone her!..hope you guys have a great eid!...see you guys after a week 😃 😃

take care and be safe!..love
farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
haha natz n maira luved ur stories 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey guys..i am continuing kth duiiiitiiii!...(after a long time)

recap:..(i know app bhi meri tarah bhool hi gaye hogye...lolz)
mehak was talking to varun, varun ki gari ka accident hota hai and mehak hears his screams over the phone aur behosh ho jati hai...........

mehak:...VARUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNN (she drops on the floor)
kashish who was standing near the stairs runs into mehaks room:...mehak!...MEHAK!...kya huwa??.....(she gets tensed).........SUJAL.......SUJAL....( she calls him for help.....well eveyone comes up.....)

sujal:..kya baat hai kashish....
kashish:....(clings onto his shirt)....sujal mehak achanak behosh ho gayi aur varun....
vasu:...kya huwa varun ko?....
kashish:..woh.....
rishi:..(cuts in)....mehak ko hospital le kar chalna chahiye....
akshat:....haan....(he bends down to pick her but rishi stops him...he quickly picks her up and rushes down...everyone follows)


AT THE ACCIDENT SIGHT:

a man:....are dekho..yeh aadmi sasein le raha hai....chalo isse hospital le chalte hain......

itifaq se pure city mein sirf ek hi hospital hai...lolzzzz.....(aisa kyun hota hai 😆 )

BALAJI MEMORIAL HOSPITAL

kashish to doc:...mehak kaisi hai ab?
doc:...she is fine...lagta hai koi gehra sadma pohancha tha....par tension ki koi baat nahi...she is fine.....
veena:....mein ne kaha tha na kashish...sab theek ho jayega.....

nurse:..doc sahab....woh jo accident wala patient tha uski police mein report likh wa di hai....aur kuch?
The garewals move into mehaks room though shes still unconcious....doc and nurse contine talking....

doc: ...theek hai....jaldi se uske ghar walon ko bhi khabar kardo....
nurse:..jee....
doc:..ek min suno...
nurse: (turns back)...jee doctor?
doc:....patient ka naam pata chala?
nurse:...uske paas se ek id card mila hai.....naam likha hai....umm...v....(tires to remember)...haan....varun ra rahega!

ek dum se doctor keh shoulder par koi haath rakhta hai...the doc turns around to see sujal standing there....

sujal:..kya naam liye inhone?
doc:....varun rahega!...kyun?...ap jante hain unhe?
sujal doesnt answer back....bus gets shock attacks..lol.....
he remembers the moments when piyush had his accident aur sujal ko hamesha k liye chor keh chala gaya....(in flashbacks)...

doc:..(shakes sujal).....mr garewal?....aap jante hain unhe?
sujal:...meraa.....mera ....bhai..hai....
doc:...o...i am soo sorry.....unki halat bahut nazuk hai....humne police mein report likh wa di hai...aap log bhi une akhri baar milna.....

sujal raises his hand in the air:....kuch nahi hoga varun ko.....kuch bhi nahi ho sakta......
doc:...dekhiye...
sujal:...patient ko bachana apka farz hai.....logon ko hamdardi dena nahi....aur aap yahan muje samjha rahe hain keh mera bhai.......nahi......ek bar pehle bhi mein apne doost ko issi tarah kho chuka hon....ek bar phir se nahi......

doc:..khud ko sambhaliye....unka bachna ab na mumkin hai.....
just then they hear something drop.....its a cell phone....sujal peeche dekhta hai to kashish khari hoti hai with stunned face and tears rolling down her cheeks....

sujal:...kashish!!....(he holds her by her arms..but she pushes him back)...
kashish:...kya huwa varun ko?
sujal:..kuch nahi hoga!
kashish:...kya- huwa- varun - ko - sujal.....
sujal:..kashish....varaun ka accident huwa hai....par sab kuch theek ho jayega....

kashish:...(gets a frog in her throat)....varun ko kuch ho gaya to...mehak...mehak jeeee nahi payegi.....woh mar jayegi sujal.....mehak...(she puts her hand on her mouth...in a shock state)
sujal:...(holds her face closely)..kuch nahi hoga usse kashish....meri ankhon mein dekho......mujpe bharosa hai ....

kashish looks in his eyes......

sujal:...mein hoon na......(they both quietly stare at each other and suddenly kashish breaks the silence)

kashish:......piyush keh saath bhi to tum the sujal......(DHAMAKA....DHAMAKA....AND EK AUR DHAMAKA......and sujals's face....he gets absoluetely stunned at hearing this.....)

sujal:....mein ne koshish ki thi kashish....tum janti ho.....

kashish:...tumhari lakh koshishoyon ke bawajood hum ne usse kho diya......mein ne mere piyush ko kho diya......(she starts to weep.....holds sujal from his collar and puts her head on his chest)....jaise mehak varun ko kho de gi...................(continues crying)

sujal is in a state of shock:.(kashish ki awaaz uske kano mein gunjti hai)...." mein ne mere piyush ko kho diya.........MERE piyush ko khoo diyaa...........


ok....so here it ends...farahji telefilms will be back after eid...and i'll continue......kya varun marega?...agar marega to mehak ka kya hoga?....uska jo bhi ho....sujal aur kashish keh rishte ka kya hoga?......kya piysuh mar k waapis ayega?...lots more coming up.......love
farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
HI FARAH
After a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time u've posted the story & im the 1st who is giving comments what 2 say hamesha ki tarah fantastic & i think varum marega & agar mar gaya to:
Dono behno(Kashish & Mahek)ka pehla pyaar dono bhai(SUJAL & rishi)dono behno ki shadi hui dono bhaiyo se (piyush & varun)& dono bhaiyo ki death hui car accident main & agar aap ki maherbani rahi to SUJAL ki tarah rishi bhi apna pyaar pale SHAYAD.
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 ..thanx rajeev_gr8....up you are the first one....sorry yaar..kafi dino se yahan nahi ayi....may i know your name plzz...?? 😳

jee bilkul...hopefully the story will end before real kth ends 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
wah kia part tha farah 👏 aur rajeev_gr8 wonderful theory dear 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 👏 wow natz...just read your new story....excellent....hehehe...yeah brilliant idea of slapping tuuhsar pundit...waise nice name 😆 😆 ...

hope you cont. it regularly.....loved it throughly...great work 👏 👏 👏

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