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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
Wow San! 👏
What a shocker!! 😊
Almost had my heart out!!! 😊 😛
I can imagine Ruhaan's anger when he slapped Simran! 😡
Yaar,u're too good,fabulous.. 😉
can't wait for the next part... 😉
If this turn out to be a serial,i think the audience will stick to their seats... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
omg tahnx 4 the weonderful comments
yeah i didnt want to add the slap thign but.. u knwo i thought if its ashocker for u all then slap shoudl also be a part..

next part is gonna be up won saturday if not tehn sunday
and if i can complete the part night then tonight
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
kya baath hain wow yaara i am telling you i like you fan fic so much well done can't wait for the next part i like reading ur fanfic u doing great hats of to u. plzz post the next part soon tumhara fanfic bahaut hi acha hai 😛 😛 😛 i can also imagine of Ru's Anger. Thnx for part 11.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tahnx annie.. the next part will be up tonight if nto then.. in the weekend 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 12 will be up within 2 hours
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part will be up withign 45 mints..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87

Recap
Simran and Suhana met again.. chachi want to know why Simran Pretending to having na memoery lose.
Ruhaan Hears it and slaps Simran

Part 12

Aab agey

Simran is shocked.. after Ruhaan Slapped her.. she looks at Ruhaan:. Who is in all his anger.. looking at her..

He point s his finger on her..

Ruhaan: Tum .. .. tum.. tum aisa kar sakti ho main coch bhi nahin sakta tha..

Simran: Rrr…Ruhaan.. main..

Ruhaan: no Simran please…main..

Chachi: Ruhaan putar..

Ruhaan: No chachi.. plzz main kuch nahin sunoon gha.. im sorry…

Ruhaan is about to leave.. Simran tries to stop him..
But he leaves.. Sirman is just standing there and crying…

Chachi: Simi.. its better u go back to your house

Bua: haan Simi.. u have to go.. iis se pehle.. dheer ho jaye.. go back..

Simran listen to them.. and leaved..

Chachi: oh God plzz don't let anything unexpected happen now..

Simran is on her way.. Thinking of what she did was not right…

At Oberoi house..

Ruhaan just entered the house.. his mother calls him..

Ru's mother: where were u .. chalo khanaa kha lo..


Ruhaan: no Maa I m not feeling hungry…

Ru's mother: kyon .. aur tumhari aankhen lal kyon hain..

Ruhaan: kuch nahin ma aim just little tied..

Ru's mother: well take some rest then.. waisay bhi u have been very worred about Simran these days.. tum jaao

Ruhaan leaves.. and Abhishek comes.. he asks what happen and ru's mother tells him Ruhaan is not feeling well.. and he should go and find out why and what happened..

Ruhaan steps into his room.. He threw his jacket on the bed…
he sits on the bed.. and thinking of the word which got out of Simran's mouth just a little back..

Abhishek enters the room..

Abhishek: Ruhaan.. Kya hua.. Maa told me u were not feeling well..

Ruhaan: bhaiya don't mind.. par please mujhe akela chor dein..

Down in the hall Simran enters the house.. She looks around.. sees Dadi.. she greets her .. and tells her she is back in the house.. Dadi is happy for her.. Simran Ask where Ruhaan is.. she tells her he is in the their room..

Simran goes up..

Abhishek is still with Ruhaan .. asking what really happened since he is so sad..

Abhishek looks at the door.. and sees Simran there…

Abhishek: lo.. Simran is here

Ruhaan looks up.. and looks at Simran.. and looks to the other place away from simran..

Abhishek: (while walking toward Simran ) aab tumhi hi pocho iisay Simran why he is acting like this.. main chalta hoon..

Simran nods..

and looks at Ruhaan ..and walking slowly toward him.. and places her right hand on his left shoulder.. he turned back and catches her from both her arms..

Ruhaan: tell me Simran what did I do wrong since u tried to punish me.. Wasn't that enough being away from u..

Simran: Ruhaan u r hurting me plzz..

He slowly removes his hands from her arms..

Ruhaan: lekin mujhe janena hai.. kyon yeh saab kiya tumne

Simran: woh.. iss liye main ne sun liya tha.. that I never can conceive.. and I know u love kids.. and I cannot give u any kid.. That's why I tried to stay away.. but I can't, I love u Ruhaan.. I even tried today but its not possible.. everything reminds me of u.. I love u ..

She start Crying..

Ruhaan: Ssss..sss Simran Don't cry.. and how . I mean So what if we don't have a child.. hum dono kapyaar kaffi hai eik tujhe ke liye.. I promise u Simran.. hum dono aakele bhi bohat skhi hoon ghe.. (he comes closer to her and puts his arms on her shoulder)

Simran: par Ruhaan..

Ruhaan: sssssshhhhhh.. (while while placing his finger on her lips) kuch nahin Simran.. plzz I don't want to loose u know… I … I love Simran..

Both hug.. and the lights go off..

Next morning..

Chachi happily comes out of her room.. coz she knows Simran has gone.. but whiel coming down the stairs.. she sees someone doing aarti..


Chachi:
(thinking) yeh kaun ho sakta hai..

Everyone stands behind the person who is no other then.. Simran..

The aarti is finished.. and she truns to them.. everyone si happy to see her doing the aarti..

Chachi gets the shock of her life..

Chachi: (thinking) yeh wapaas aa gayi.. leikin kaissay aur kaab

Simran comes to Chachi..

Simran: chachi jee.. aarti..

She takes the aarti .. and tells her she is happy to she her.. like this.. Simran replies even she is happy to be back in the house.. infact into her house.. everyone is surprised.. and Ruhaan tells them .. that Simran start recovering ..

The didn't tell them the real truth.. coz they would be hurt..

Chachi didn't like it.. and she tried her best.. to destroy their happiness..

Chachi: (thinking) uff.. now how can I give Simran the CD.. now.. when she already recovered.. Oh God why did u do that.. u should have waited.. few.. days more..

Later in RuhSimi's room..

Ruhaan is getting ready for the office.. Simran Comes in .. and sees his collar is not done..

Simran: Ruhaan.. Aapka collar.. thek nahin hai..

Ruhaan: I know.. woh iss liye ke.. main Apni Simran Ka Intezaar kar reha tha.. he woh.. aye aur mera collar theek kare. So u r here.. ko kar do.

Simran: u r to much..

Ruhaan: I know.. that's why u love me..

She smiles so does he..

Simran: Ruhaan (while working on his collar) woh jow hua hai.. plzz forgive me..

Ruhaan: Simran I already did it.. listen .. aab iss barrey mein aab koi baat nahin ho ghi.. OK

Simran: ok..

Ruhaan: to main chalta hoon..

Simran nods..

While leaving Ruhaan kisses Simran on her cheek.. he smiles and leaves..

To Be Continued😉


Precap:

Simran tells Ruhaan she met Suhana.. who met her as Sneha ..

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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
Thnx san for part 12 it was too cool keep it up and well done can't wait for the next part. 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
Uff... 😳
It was mindblowing... 👏
Kash yeh sab sach hai... 😭
I feel so happy... 😊
U made my day,San! 😉
Actually i just can't wait any longer for the next part...So,make it FAST!!!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
waw thalia 👏 👏

really San ur story is mindblowing yaar, and hadah is right after each part of ur story i can't wait for the next part. kaash yehi MDTA mein hota to kitna achha hota. love ur kahaani yaar, i'm already a fan of yours so when u become A famous scriptwriter or director someday don't forget one of your first fans me... 😉

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