FF - Meri Doli Tere Angana LAST PART P 28 - Page 8

ya yaar how romatic...the pallu sticking in the bracelet...all so romatic and ruhaan getting shy and all..wow just loved it...bilkhul ek romantic movie ki tarha...ur a genius... 👏 👏 👏 getting more impatient for the next part...

Feel like saying, oh my my... 😆

Very romantic, san, well done!! 👏 👏

And your narration makes me think it's happening live... 😳 👍🏼

omg tahnx for these lovely comment..
this make me write more .. and more

next part will be only by tomorrow.. 😉

Wow, I loved reading and catching up on the parts I had missed earlier. Keep going 👏 👏

a small dhamaka in the next part..

Recap

Romantic moments between RuhSimi.. both having dinner.. when whole family is out, simran is going to her maayka

Ab agey

Part 11

Simran went to her room and get ready and packing her bags. .Ruhaan knocks the door..simran sees him

Simran: Ruhaan .. Aap..

Ruhaan: haan.. (he comes in) tum ja rehi ho..

Simran: yep.. I want to spend sometime with Chachi..
Ruhaan: when are u coming back..

Simran: Ruhaan abhi to main ja rehi hoon

Ruhaan: woh.. actually.. tumhari addat si ho ayi hai.. when I don't see u I get restless.. tum sooch bhi nahin sakti how I spend those days .. when u got kidnapped.. I .. was like half dead..

Simran: Ruhaan.. (chachi interrupt)

Ruhaan: I will leave.. see u down stairs..

Ruhaan leaves..

Chachi: dekha Simran.. he cannot even speak in front of me.. tum acha kare rehi ho.. Abhi thori dheer Apni chachi ke pas rehna.. aacha ap main chalti hoon..

Simran: (thinking) chachi U will never change..

She packed her bag.. and left.. the room.. takes everyones greets and leaves.. Simran looks back and sees Ruhaan Standing… at the terrace.. she takes her hand up and .. say good-bye.. to him.. he also lifts his hand up ..

Ruhaan gets ready for the office.. and by mistake he knocks the room where Simran were staying..

He opens it.. and sees Simran no where.. and he remembered she is at her Chachi's house.. he sees her medicine which she forgot.. and took them with him.. and leaves..

Simran is with bua .. in the shopping mal.. her Bua went to see some jewellery .. Simran goes further to see something else.. she meets Suhana/Sneha

Simran: arey aap..

Suhana: hi.. Ssss… sorry I forgot ur name..

Simran: its Simran..

Suhana: ohh.. ok

Simran: but I remember ur name.. its Sneha..

Suhana: errrrrrrr I guess..

Both laugh.. and start talking..

Suhana: Simran u didn't told about. If u gto recovered.. or remembered some more..

Simran looks at her..

Simran: No Sneha.. I try hard to remember but can't

Suhana: don't push so hard Simran.. u don't worry.. (thinking) mere liye to acha hai.. she should never remember anything.. and thats the way .. I can get back to Ruhaan in my Life..

She sees Bua.. looking for Simran..

Suhana: acha main chalti hoon..

Simran: wait na.. u have to meet my Bua..

Suhana: sorry haan some other time..

Suhana: walk as fast she can.. so that Bua don't see her..

Suhana.. is gone and Bua comes to her..

Bua: tum yahaan Ho.. aur main .. tumhein kahan kahan nahin dhonda.. waisay.. oh kurri kaun si..

Simran: kaun..

Bua: Arey woh.. jow abhi yahan se gayi..

Simran: acha.. Sneha.. Bua woh mujhe pehle.. parking mein mili thi.. aaj yahan.. waisay she is a nice girl..

Bua: oye Simi.. zaara bachke rehin.. pehle bhi raste par chalti ladki ko tuni aapna saat raakha. Aur woh .. tumhare Ruhaan ko chin lena chaheti thi..

Simran: buaji..

Bua: acha mitti pau.. chalo ghar.. Parjayi akehli hain..

Simran: chaley Bua ji..

At office..

Ruhaan is remembering the very cute and romantic moments spend with Simran.. he pictures Simran in his office.. Simran is looking at him with smilling face.. she opens her arms.. and tells him to come closer.. to her..

Ruhaan stands up.. And goes near her.. and she disappears, just the moment Abhishek knocks the door..

Ruhaan: (thinking) uf yeh logg bhi na (now talking) come in..

Abhishek: Ruhaan.. here are some file.. why r u standing here…

Ruhaan: hun.. what.. ohh yeah.. just feel like standing..got tied of sitting on the chair… so

Abhishek: ohh.. ok .. anyways.. here are some files.. Papa sent them.. (about to leave) waisay.. Simran ki yaad a reh hai.. just go and meet her.. she is not gone over 7 seas.. jaao mil ke aao..

Ruhaan: I know.. but.. she dotn even know me the way.. I mean Iam her husband.. but .. we don't have the same relationship now.. she dont remember.. and I don't wanto persuade her

Abhishek: right now that's not the question.. I mean u miss her go and meet her.. waisay bhi u have to go and give her the medicines right.. to abhi jao..

Simran's Chachi's house..

Chachi, Simran.. and Bua are talking … when chachi notice something.. and she had enough of it..

Chachi: Simi.. yeh saab kaab tak chaley gha

Simran looks at her chachi.. and stand up.. and walks a bit away from them..

Simran: kya chachi..

Chachi: yeh jow tum kar rehi ho.. issi liye main tumhein aapne saath layi hoon aaj.. but tell me.. whats was the reason u did this..

Simran Laughs a little

Simran: Chachi.. plzz mujhe betayi .. kya hua..

Chachi: baas Simran.. Maine janti hoon tumhari memory nahin gayi

Simran Is Shocked..

Simran: chachi.. yeh .. aap..

Chachi: Simran .. tujhe tumhare chachu ki kasamh hai.. tu .. tu mere saar ki kasamh khao..

Chachi puts her hand on her head.. and Simran removes it..

Simran: nahin chachi main yeh saab nahin kar sakti.. haan yeh saach hai.. main bikul theek thi..

Mujhe aisa kuch nahin hua.. main baas ..

Chachi looking at crying Simran, she looks up and is shocked.. Bua is also shocked..

Simran: chachi main (while looking up)

She sees Chachi's shocked face.. and slowly turned back to see whom her chachi is looking at…

And its no other then RUHAAN..

Simran gets another shock.. Ruhaan Has tears in his eyes.. and walk toward Simran.. And looks at her..

Simran is crying…

Ruhaan Slaps Simran.. and she is just stunned.. about what just happened..

Chachi and Bua are shock..

To Be Continued..

Precap

Simran Back in Oberoi House.. RuhSimi Together in one room

Thnx San for part 11 ya it was a dhamaka it was too good well done can't wait for the next part.

o ya totally..waw what a twist yaar agian u got me on the edge of my seat...so simran did not lose her memory? ur a genius writer...waw cant wait to read why she pretended...please San send it quick..cant wait for the next part..i love ur fanfic...and bua is so funny just like in the serial..ur too good gal...and in the end Ruhaan slaps Simran..ouch did not like that part...but i understand that it was for that moment..so aap chaldi se next part send kijiye...intezaar karna bahut mushkil hain yaar..aap ki story mein to sab elements hai...romance, anger, passion, comedy, yealousy, hate and pain...way the go 👏 👏 👏

Very good dhamaka, san!! 👏 👏 👏

You are keeping up with RB's style! Way to go!! 😉 👍🏼

Yeah, didn't quite like Ru slapping Sim part though! ouch, that hurt!! 😆

Part 11 explains why Sim kinda got close to Ru in part 9, cause she was in her full hosh-awaz...cause I was thinking it's not like Sim to do that when she doesn't remember Ru as her husband... but now it makes sense! 😊