FF - Meri Doli Tere Angana LAST PART P 28 - Page 11

Thnx san for part 13 i really liked it so much thnx once again well done can't wait for the next part. it was too good. i like ur Fanfic so much. 😛 😛 😛

this part was so great and funny 🤣 !!!!
i cant wait for the next part 😉 i just love you're fanfic 👏 👏

this part was so great and very funny 🤣 !!! cant wait for the next one 😉 i just love you're fanfic 👏 😡

lo... i really very happy u guys acrually liked this aprt very much,... 😉

thanx

😆 Very nice san, getting more and more creative with every 'episode'!! 👍🏼

Wow,San! 😉
Fantastic... 👏
It was so funny the part where Ruhaan sings..Hahaha 😆
I can't stop laughing 😆
And glad to know that Akash is still alive!! 😊
What a dhamaka!! 😛

thanx hadah.. thanx 4 liking it.. i rlaly lvoe ur alls comments thanx

thanx.. advanture-gurl
anyways friends..

next aprt will be up tonight (hopefully)

Recap.

Rusim together.. Suhana makes plans.. while talking To akash – her partner.

Its holi time..

Abhsihek making fun of Ruhaan..

Aap agey

Part 14

Abhishek is going out. And Ruhaan right after him.. Abhishek takes some gullal..

Ruhaan: Bhaiya.. woh..

Abhishek: Happy holi Ruhaan.. (he threw some gullal on him) Buraah na manoo holi hai..

Abhishek.. Leaves.. and Ruhaan is alone there.. he sees Simran.. and went over there.. who is standing with Ria ..

Ruhaan stands behind Simran .. and gives Ria sign about leaving from here.. she leaves.. and Ruhaan .. Lifts Simran up from behind.. and snowing around with her..

And puts Gullah on her..

Simran: Ruhaan what is this

Ruhaan: kya hua.. apki biwi ko Gullah lagaya hai na kissi aur ko..

Simran: ok.. so that's the way u want to go( she takes some Gullah from behind as she was standing infront of a table, she threw the color on Ruhaan) Happy holi to u to..

She ran .. Ruhaan after her..

Simran runs after applying gullah on ruhaan.. he runs after her.. no oen is noticing them.. as everyone is busy with holi them self..

At the hospital..

Akaash.. is concious.. but is afraid as He knows.. Suhana. Once has have shot him.. and can kill him this time.. he calls for help..

A nurse comes.. and he tries to talk..

The nurse is shocked to see him conscious.. and was going to get the doc..when Akaash stops her

Akaash: mm.. mujghe RRRRR..RUHAAN se milna hai..

Nurse: sir sorry u need rest.. I will get the doc..

Akaash tries to stop the nurse but she leaves..

The doc.. comes.. and Akaash asked for the same.. HE WANT TO MEET Ruhaan Oberoi..

Doc: U mean Oberoi Industruies..Thier Younger Son Ruhaan Oberoi..

Akaash: hh..hh haan.. that's true

Doc: u take rest 1^st.. I will contact him

The doc.. leaves.. and tries to call Ruhaan.. after searching for their number in the dictionary

But Ruhaan and whole family is playing holi.. so no one listen to the phone..

Doc calls on Ruhaan's cell phone..

Ruhaan had his phone in his pocket.. so he received it.

Doc: hello.. Ruhaan Oberoi

Ruhaan: yes that's Me..

Doc: I'm Doc. Abhimanyu.. actually I called u.. coz we have a patient .. who want to meet. U..

Ruhaan: meet me .. but who.. I mean..

Doc: the patients name is Akaash

Ruhaan is shocked to hear the name..

Ruhaan: Akaash.. (now thinking) yeh to.. woh .. jow Suhana ka doc. Ban kar aya tha

Doc: u there Mr. Oberoi

Ruhaan: uhh yeah .. I m coming.

Ruhaan put down the phone..

Simran: who was it ..

Ruhaan: Some doc. Abhimanyu From the hospital.. Akaash want to meet me.. par kyon

Simran: u mean .. woh.. doc.. jow kabhi doc. Akaash ban akr aaya tha.. with Suhana..

Ruhaan: I doubt… Main kissi aur Akaash se nahin milaa hoon.. main ja kar aata hoon

Simran: Ruhaan I will come along with u..

Ruhaan: no Simran tum yehi reho..

Simran: Ruhaan I insist

Ruhaan: ok Chalo..

The both leaves.. chachi sees them .. leaving in car and wonders where they are going..

after sometime they reach the hospital.. and asked for the doc. Abhimanyu

The receptionist called the doc. Up.

After few mints.

Doc. Hello .. im Doc. Abhimanyu..

Ruhaan: im Ruhaan.. and she is my wife.. u said ur patient

Doc. Yeah.. come with me..

when they enters Akaash room.. doc is shocked.. to see that the transition is turned off.. and Akaash has passed away..

Doc is shocked.. so is RuSim

Doc: omg .. he is dead..

Ruhaan: what..

Doc inquires about who came to this room.. nurses don't have any answer..

Doc sees some paper under the bed.. and take it up..

Akaash before dying.. left a letter for Ruhaan.. Doc.. gives it to Ruhaan.. he leaves the room.. Simran do also leave..

While reading the letter Ruhaan is about to fall .. Simran hold him..

Ruhaan: yeh .. how yeh saach hai..

Simran takes the paper form Ruhaan's hand.. and reads it.

Akaash's letter

Ruhaan aaj main jow kehna ja reha hoon tum Dhaka lage gha. Par zarrori hai, Suhana was my partner.. we both planned to enter ur house.. and steal the wealth and also the khandani ornaments of ur family, our planned started in GOA when we saw u there, and Suhana and I came up with the plan to trap u .. so u fall for Suhana, and the day she was clueless in the sea that was also our plan so u chould leave us alone that time, Ruhaan... Suhana never loved u.. she was only after ur money. When she shot me, I had the khazana but she refused to go with me as she was obsessed by u.. she wanted u and ur money at any cost. Be careful.. She is really dangerous..

Akaash's letter ends..

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Simran looks at ruhaan, and puts her hand on his should

Ruhaan: kitna pagal tha main.. eik aaisi ladki ke becha.. hamari shaadi ke bard gaya jow mujhse pyar hi nahin karti thi..

Simran: Ruhaan Its ok.. dekho .. aab to saab theek hogeya hai..

Ruhaan: nahin Simran maine tumhein .. uis waqt bohat dukh diye the.. im sorry..

Simran: Ruhaan plzz chalo yahaan se.. hum ghar ja ke baat akrein ghe.. chalo..

Later at home... in their room..

Ruhaan can't get over that Suhana really were like this..

But Simran made him understand.. let the bygone be bygone..

Ruhaan: U r right.. Simran… I should be thinking of it.. aab to sirf hum dono ke bare mein sochoon gha.. he hugs. Her..

Someone knocks the door..

Ruhaan: arey God.. phirse kissi ki bhej diya..

To Be Continued..

o waw..San..very good writing..can't wait for the next part..its so mysterious..can't wait to know who killed akaash..yaar ur really good..really loved it..ur fanfic is so real and so good its like i'm actually watching a serial..ur excellently magnificent..ur really good in all departments yaar..i mean the love parts, the mysterie, the sad parts..everything..keep it up 👏 👏 👏