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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
great Fanfaic San well done u should be a script writer. can't for the othe part. 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx again for liking this part to 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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waw really good fanfic...can't wait to read the next part..and u should think of becoming a scriptwriter..ur good at it u have the talent...hatts of 2 you..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap

Simran gets conscious but don't remember anything.. she don't remember she is married.. ruhaan and Simran bump into each other .. Abhishek tell Ruhaan keep trying to be with Simran she mgith get her memory back..(Its was indirectly)

Part 5

Aab agey

Ruhaan.. goes down.. from the stairs.. and into the kitchen.. where Simran's chachi is helping out Ru's mother


Ruhaan: mama, chachi.. S..sss.. Simran ko dekha hai..
Ru's mother: haan woh .. garden mein gayi hai..
he leaves..

Simran's chachi: madhvi ji.. yeh saab kya hogeya.. 1st the bad news about our kids..and then we saw a hope of them getting better.. but still there is

Ru's mother: kiran ji.. Don't worry everything will be alright.. We still have hope..

Outside the house in the garden.

Ruhaan sees Simran who is standing beside the swing.. Ruhaanwalk over to her..

Simran is standing there thinking of how she land up here and why.. why are they not going back home..

Ruhaan: kya soch rehi ho Simran.

She turns back.. and sees ruhaan there.. who is smiling..

Simran: you here..

Ruhaan: yes maine socha tum akeli khari ho.. so let give u some company.. anyways.. my name is Ruhaan Oberoi ..(he takes his hand forward)

Simran looks at his hand and then on him..

Ruhaan: friends..
Simran: btw im Simran Malhotra..

Both shake hands.. And Ruhaan,, gets a flashback where the both shakes hands in the rain..

Ruhaan is lost. While Simran is trying to get her hand free from Ruhaan's hand..

Simran: ruhaan .. ruhaan.. Ruhaan comes back from the past.. mera haath

Ruhaan look at their hands..
ruhaan: ohh sorry..

She leaves while Ruhaan is standing there alone..

few days later.. they were going to have a party in the house..

it was Ruhaan's Parents 30th anniversary..everythign were being decorated..

ru's mother thinks of the time where simran told her that .. she is gonna decorate everything herself..

but now she is sad as she dont even remember them.. right now.. she wipe her tears and goes otu her room.. and sees Simran helping out arpita..

she looks happy..

later.. the day.. all guest arrived.. and enjoying..Shanaya and abhsiehk.. receives her .. and start talking with her.. Ruhaan wearing a purple color suite.. looking dashing…

he suddenly saw Simran coming down earing a orange/red color sawlwar kameez.. he just keep staring at her.. she was really looking nice.. Simran sees Ruhaan looking at her.. she feel shy and went over to the chachi..and ask her.. when they will leave and live in their house.. and she is missing chachu..

she tells her its gonna be soon..

Ruhaan comes toward Simran and her chachi..

he takes his hand forward.. and ask for a dance.. Simran looks at him, he smiles.. to her.. and she slowly gives him her hand.. and both went to the dance floor..

all of them looks happy for RuhSimi.. the Vada Reha song is playing in the background.. Simran is looking down while Ruhaan is just looking at Simran.. Simran slowly looks up and on Ruhaan..

both had a eye lock..

SC is having problems again..

SC: yeh Simran amnesia ke bard bhi ruhaan ke saath .. kis tarha hai.. kuch karma parde gha.

The song gets over.. and both Simran ruhaan stopped dancing..

Next day

.. Simran follows her chachi as she heared her talking with bua about something..

Both of them goes to their house.. and Simran wonders why they gone there and why are they not letting her go..

She follows then in.. and the hallway she sees her chahcu's pic .. with garland .. she shouted.. out loud.. both gets shock seeing her here..

Simran: chachi .. how .. how could u hid this from me..
chachi tries to tell her ..

Simran is shattered.. Chachi tries to console her.. Simran ask chachi.. When did that happen…

Simran's chachi: yeh.. yeh.. tumhari shaadi ke bard hua hai..

Simran is shacked. And shocked..

Simran: meri shaadi..!! kab.. kisse ..
Chachi is num..

Simran: chachi tell me kaab hui meri shaadi aur kisse..

Chachi: tumara pati aur koi nahin … Ruhaan Hai..
simran gets a small shock..

Chachi tells her that she is suffering from amnesia.. And that's why u don't remember

Simran: I don't believe in this..

She runs into her room.. (which were hers before she got married)
her chachi called her but she didn't listen..

TO BE CONTINUED...

Precap = Simran has locked herself in the room.. she does not listen to anyone..
Ruhaan come there to..

Edited by Nausheenfan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
thnx san for the interresting fanfic i really like ur fanic can't wait for the next part well done yaara well done. 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
wah wah 👏

San ur fanfic rocks girl ur so good...u should contact Rahulji and give him this story....ur story is so much better and real then the bakwaas that is going on now in MDTA..i really love it girl..way the go...the way each part of ur fanfic ends..i'm always on the edge of my seat..u have that touch of magic in ur writing that makes the readers wait impatiently for the next part...keep writing girl coz ur good and i'm not joking... 😛 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
Lage Raho, very very nice 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow! Just catching up on your fanfic, san. Very nice!! 👏 👏 👏

Just what the doctor ordered for our aching hearts... 😛

At least little star productions is not gonna let us down, unlike a certain Mr. Bhat that we know about... 😡

Here's a song to suit your fanfic at this stage, from Ruhaan to Simran: ❤️

Hamein aur jeene ki chaahat na hoti
Agar tum na hote, agar tum na hote

Tumhen kyaa bataaoon ke tum mere kyaa ho
Meri zindagi ka tum hi aasra ho

Har ik gham tumhaara sahenge khushi se
Karenge na shikwaa kabhi bhi kisi se

Na jaane kyoon dil se ye aawaz aayi
Milan se hai badhke tumhaari judaai

In aankhon ke aansoo, na kehlaate moti.
Agar tum na hote, agar tum na hote

Looking forward to the next episode...😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
wow mysticbubbles kya bbath hai 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
omg rani u r tooo good.. i knwo its s song but its super

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