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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Nausheenfan, your FF is mind-blowing. Just love it, u r too good 👏

Keep it coming, looking forward to the next episode 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: Ru's parents wedding anniversary.. RuhSimi danced.. Simran finds out about chachus dead… and also that she is married..

Aap agey

Part 6.

Simran's chachi.. keeps trying to make Simran open the door.. but she isn't listening.. bua called Ruhaan.. he comes rushing…

Ruhaan: (at the door) Simran.. plzz open the door.. chachi si very tensed.. plzz open..
Simran: plz let me be alone I don't want to talk with anyone..
Ruhaan: Simran listen.. plzz don't stress yourself.. its not good for
ur health plzz… just once plzz open the door..
Simran don't answer..

Ruhaan: Simran for chachi sake open..

Hearing Ruhaan saying she should open the door.,. for sake of chacha chachi.. she slowly opens the door.. Ruhaan looks very happy seeing her..

But Simran.. Just go through the way Ruhaan is standing.. on her way .. her dupatta stucked in his.. Bracelet.. Which he was wearing.. Simran tries to get it free, while Ruhaan just start looking at her.. While she was looking like he was a stranger to her. Ruhaan were smiling.. But Simran she was not able to believe that he really was her husband..

She finally got the dupatta free.. and went to her chachi..
Simran: chachi.. main wohh. Yeh ..

Ruhaan: Simran let me explain.. dekho
and he tells her everything.. from where they got married and onward.till they got shot.. by Suhana..
simran think a bit ..

Simran holds her head.. and get dizzy..and were going to fall when Ruhaan makes her sit..on the coach..

Simran: tum jow keh rehe ho agar yeh saach hai.. to mujhe kuch yaad kyon nahin ata..

Ruhaaan: simrna u shouldn't get stress plzz
Simran: I m trying to remember.. and gets some flashes of someone getting shot..but I cant see it clearly who is it.. uisay ziyada yaad much nahin ata..

Ruhaan: Simran .. wohi plzz don't think so much..

Simran: Ruhaan those day I lived in ur house.. u have been very kind..but right now I need time.. to see the truth..plzz leave me alone right now..
Ruhaan: I can wait whole life for u Simran..

Both have eyes contact again. And Ruhaan start walking toward the door.. he looks behind .. and sees Simran.. and leaves..

Simran run at the terrace. she sees Ruhaan getting into his car.. and when Ruhaan looked back, she hides herself..

Ruhaan turn back and gets into the car.. and drives away..

On the way home .. in background the Jag suna suna lagey (from film Om Shanti Om) is playing..

While Ruhaan is remembering every moment spend with Simran…from the shaadi moment .. where he 1sat saw her.. to the 1st aug. and later on all dances.. and hugging.. Showing in front of him.. and he gets tears in his eyes..

Ruhaan: (thinking) ek baar mujhe Suhana mil jaye.. I wont leave her.. aaj jow kuch bhi hua hai

Simran ke saath uis ki wajaah sirf aur sirf .. Suhana hai..

Ruhaan's car stops at signal light when he sees Suhana crossing the road.. he is shacked and shocked seeing her around like this.. he tries to follows her.. and he is even successful following her.. and parks his car nearby.. Suhana.. still walking when suddenly.. Ruhaan standing in front of her and she stop ..

Suhana: Ruhaan TUM.!!!!

Ruhaan: haan main.. kyon shocked.. to see me alive.. I wont leave u today..tum chalo mere saath police station u have to be punished for your deeds..(He crap her arm)

Suhana: main tumhare saath kahin nahin ja rehi.. leave me..


Ruhaan: no Suhana.. Not that easy.. u made our
(Simran and Ruhaan) life into hell.. and now its time ur punishment.

Suhana: I said leave me.. warna main chilaaon ghi aursaab lgoon ko akhattha kar loo ghi..

Ruhaan: u can do whatever u want… I don't care.. u just need to come with me..

She tried to get her free.. when Ruhaan catches her hand.. she bids his hand.. and runs from there. Ruhaan does not give up.. and he to runs after her.. but what he don't see is the car.. when crossing some other road.. which hits him.. and he falls down… but great fully.. he does not get hurt much.. the car driver comes out and ask if he is ok.. ruhaan says yes he is.. but he do bleed a little but doesn't care about it.. and tries to go back.. when he suddenly falls and faints there..

All people out there helps him out.. and even calls home.. Abhishek receives the phone.. without telling anyone he goes to get Ruhaan back ..

At the hospital.. Ruhaan is getting bandage on his wound.. When Abhishek enters the room.. the nurse leaves from there.

Abhishek: Ruhaan .. tell me what was the need to cross the road like a blind man.

Ruhaan: bhaiya woh.. I saw Suhana..

Abhishek: u saw Suhana.. how..

And Ruhaan tells Abhishek the whole thing..

Abhishek: it means she still is in this city.. I will just call the police..

Ruhaan: par its not going to help.. the police has done nothing till now.. plzz I don't want the police to be involved in this .. I will handle it by myself..
Abhishek: don't be so childish.. U know she is to dangerous.. she already have hurt both u and Simran..

Ruhaan: but bhaiya…
Abhishek: don't argue with me.. im
ur elder brother.. warna legao gha eik ulte haath ka..
Ruhaan smiles…

Abhishek: now yeh hui na baat.. this is the smile I wanted to see on my younger brother's face.. even since.. the incident I have never seen u or Simran happy.. GOD BLESS u both

On their way home.. in Abhishek's car..

Ruhaan: bhaiya.. the bandage on my hea.. Maa she will be really worried.. kya karein..??

Abhishek: u r right Ruhaan.. we have to do something.. Maa will get worried.. what if he take the bandage out .. no .. u can see the wound ..

Ruhaan: par kya karein..

Abhishek: well we have to take the chance..

At home..

Ru's mother sees Ruhaan & Abhishek coming..
Ru's mother: RUHAANNNNNNNNN. Yeh kya hua!?!?!

Ruhaan: kaha tha .. maine..

Abhishek: maa .. its just a small thing..

Ru's mother: just a small… u call this a small thing..tell em what happened.. and where did u go for the 1st..

Ruhaan tells his mother that he went to see Simran.. as she is with chachi right now..and then abut Suhana..etc..

His mother goes near the mandir and prays to unite her 2 children as the have gone through a lot.. now its time for their happiness..

To Be Continued

Precap:
Simran comes and lives in Oberoi House..

PS: i have sent my story to zeetv and Rahul Bhat.. hoep to get some response from them..

lets cross the fingers..

Edited by Nausheenfan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
wow san you are too good yaar i just really like ur fan fic kya baath hai yaara well doen can't wait till the next part i enjoyed reading it. 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
welldone San..ur fanfic is rocking..i was again on the edge of my seat...the twist with Suhana cmoing back is amazing..and welldone for sending ur story to zee and Rahul Bhatt..ur story rocks..they must notice it...maybe theyll make a new serial with our rocking jodi and ur story..that would be mindblowing..anyways cant wait for the next part..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
omg thanx u guys are to sweet..

luv u all u r rally good friends online 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
next part is gonna be up by tomorrow!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Fantastic & Fabulous Fanfic... 😉
It's great that u already send it to zee & Rahul Bhatt..
Hope that they like ur Fanfic & looking forward to make another serial with our wonderful JODI as the main leads... 😉 😳
last but not least,can't wait for the next part..
Keep it coming,San!Don't stop ur story halfway(that's a REQUEST)..Haha... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx hadah.. i will nto stop.. but some day at teh exmas tiem will ahve to take a break.. na.. iff i cna continue till that..
and yeha i also hope to see ruhsimi in new show..

btw did u chekc the new videomix
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap..

Simran knows the truth.. Ruhaan sees Suhana.. but she runs aways..ruhaan gets hrut and Abhishek helps him out..

Aab agey

Part 7

Ru's mother decided to have puja in their house for the peace..

And she invites Simran's chachi and bua.. and they take Simran along with them..

Ru's mother sees Simran.. And she takes blessing from her.. everyone comes.. and Sandhya chachi sees Simran..


Chachi: (thinking) uff yeh phir se a gayi.. I thought she would stay a ways.. but

The puja starts.. and everyone comes and sit .. Abhishek makes Ruhaan sit with Simran..

Simran and Ruhaan start looking at each other.. Ruhaan gives a sign to Simran to look forward as there is puja at home..

Abhishek sees it and laugh.. but stops as Ru's mother sees him..

Abhishek: (thinking) plzz god let them be happy.. Simran ko jaldi se theek kardo..

Everyone is praying

Ruhaan: plzz Simran ki memory wapas aa jaye..

Simran: plzz let me remember my life.. where were I before the accident what happened.. I want to know the truth..

Ru's both parents prays for RuhSimi's happiness..

Chachi: god plzz let Simran never get her memory.. warna she will be back in the house.. infact im happy she can't conceive but its not enough.. ab everyone will go to my daughters..

Later on when puja is finished.. chachi bua and Simran is about to leave.. Ru's mother stops Simran and request her to be with them. .Simran is confused.. as all are somehow stranger to her.. but her chachi made her understand.. that if she doesn't live here she will enver get her memory back.. coz she already know her chachi and bua..

Everyone tries to pacify Simran.. and dadi tells her.. she will be very save .. and she takes the grantee..

Simran agrees.. Ruhaan gets a smile on his face.. Simran request them to give her guestroom.. as she is not comfortable living with Ruhaan in the same room.. Ruhaan told her that he will shift to the guest room while she can live in their room..

At night.. chachi comes into RuhSimi's room..

Chachi: Simrannn.. main sandhya chachi..

Simran: jee .. aapne pehle betaya tha..

chachi: par maine yeh to nahin betaya than a.. ke tum aur main bohat achey dost ban gaye the..

Simran: jee ..woh

Chachi: don't worry Simran.. when ever u need help or ask about ur life just come to me.. OK

Simran: ok chachi..
chachi was about to leave..

Simran: Chachi.. I want to know how Ruhaan and I were as husband and wife

Chachi: (thinking) that's the question I was waiting for.. (Talking with Simran now) Simran actually U and Ruhaan, had a fight, I don't really remember the reason.. but your relationship were not doing well at the moment..

Simran: par chachi .. looking at ruhaan .. it doesn't look like this..

Chachi: Simran tum bholi hi reho ghi.. its coz .. he didn't want u to know… what's really happened between u two.. main chalti hoon .. its very late..

Simran is just standing.. and thinking about what ever chachi said is true ..or..

Next morning.. Simran were going to open the door, and Ruhaan was about to knock the door..he sees Simran and smiles..


Ruhaan: Good morning!

Simran: good morning..

Ruhaan: woh actually.. break fast is ready.. to chalen

Simran: ok..

While going down. Simran notices Ruhaan's collar was not proper made..

Simran: RRRR.. Ruhaan…


he trun back..


Ruhaan: yes..
Simran: woh.. woh..
ur collar… is not made ..


And Ruhaan start making it well.. Simran comes closer.. and takes her hands up to .. help.. while Ruhaan is looking at Simran.. with all love in his eyes..

Ruhaan is lost..

Simran: ho geya..

Simran looks at Ruhaan.. who is just looking at Simran..


Simran: ruhaannn! Its done..

Ruhaan: uhh .. What.. ohh ok..chalen..

Simran: I need to do the aarti 1st..


she went to the mandir.. and start doing aarti.. and everyone comes and stands behind her..

And later then she gives the aarti to everyone..

Everyone leave one by one.. but chachi is standing there..

Chachi: Simran.. just remember what I told u.. u have to be careful.. Ruhaan kabhi much hota hai to kabhi kuch..

Later then day.. ruhaan calls at home.. and had planned it with Abhishek .. that none of the hone will work at home when he calls up. Only the one in their (RuhSimi's) room phone will ring..

Simran receives the phone..


Ruhaan: hi Simran .. its me Ruhaan.. I was thinking of doing dinner out some where

Simran: woh.. chachi is coming.. today..

Ruhaan: koi baat nahin come laer.. waisay bhi dinner.. is at 7 pm.. I'll be waiting..

He puts down the phone..

Simran is thinking if she should go.. or not..

Ruhaan at the other hand. can't wait..a s he really want to spend sometimes with Simran ..

Simran's chachi comes and as about Simran.. Simran ask her if she should go..

Simi's chachi: ohh pagal ladki.. he is ur husband.. wh asking me..

Simran: par chachi..

Simi's chachi: dekh Simi.. Ruhaan loves u a lot.. and u will recover faster when u r with him.. so dotn waste time go..

At 6.55 pm.. ruhaan at the restaurant.. Simran steps out fo the car.. in white color saree.. just like in the 21st june episode..

Ruhaan sees her.. and cannot get his eyes off..

TO BE CONTINUED..

PRECAP:

happy moments of RuhSimi..
chachi is frustrated.. as she is not able to seperate RuhSimi even now..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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waw 👏 ur so good..really loved it..it was like reading an update of an episode that i missed..the dailogues of Sandya chahi is totally her..the way u wrote her parts with simran..i think even the writer of mdta could not come up with that...its decided ur not just a good fanfic writer but ur a talented scriptwriter and i hope zeetv or RB takes time to read ur story and realize that there is a talented scriptwriter named San with whom they need to make a Serial..... 👏 👏 mujhe to ab sharm aati hain apni fanfic forum mein post karnekeliye...tumhari fanfic ke aage to mera fanfic kuch bhi nahi hai yaar..i really mean that...ur story is really better then mine..im not exaggerating...really it is the truth.. 😊

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