FF - Meri Doli Tere Angana LAST PART P 28 - Page 2

omg .. kasamh se copied my idea..
i also amde the similair scenes.. where simran tell ruhaan she is leaving him.. for ever.. and now i was shocked seeing the same scene in Kasamh se
watch kasamh se today.. and then read my story u will fidn out.. i wil soon post the part..

remmber the story.. Ruhaan Simran are back in the hosue.. doc tells the Oberoi family that .. simran can never concieve again

aab aage !!!

Part 3.

Ruhaan and everyone is shocked hearing that Simran never will conceive

Ruhaan goes near the doc. And catchs him with his collar..

Ruhaan: its not true.. say it doc.. that its not true..

Abhishek: control ur self ruhaan plzz.. (while hold ruhaan )

Ruhaan: bhaiya look what eh said about Simran .. he is lying..

Ru's father: Abhishek take him to the room..

In abhisheks room

Abhishek: ruhaan u shouldn't have reacted like this..

Ruhaan: the doc shouldn't have said that:

Abhishek: why would he.. infact he is the one who saved u both.

Ruhaan: no bhaiya… all I know is my Simran is all fine.. nothing has happened to her..
but all what has happened till now is due to suhana.. I wont leave her.. she will have to pay for what ever she did to me and Simran.

Abhishek: ruhaan tum aisa kuch nahin akro ghe understand.. police is there .. and they are even searching for her..

Ruhaan: bhaiya police.. no she will get punished by these hands bhaiya.. jinoon ne kabhi uisay payal di thi .. aaj wohi uisay bhairiyan pehnayen ghe

Ruhaan in his room

Ruhaan sits near Simran.
Ruhaan: I love u Simran, humko koi judaah nahin kar sakta.. god forbidden .. agar tumhein kuch ho jatta ho main bhi wohin dum tor deta..

At night.. Simran comes and sits beside the coach where Ruhaan is sleeping on..
Simran: Ruhaan.. (simran tries to wake the sleeping Ruhaan)Ruhaan..

He wakes up
Ruhaan: Simran (he gets up and hug her) tum nahin janti i missed u alot.. plzz don't leave me again.. i cant live without u..

Simran: i know but u have to.. mujhe jaana hoga.. its time --
Ruhaan: what do u mean by that.. kahan ja rehi ho tum
Simran smiles and gets up.. and start walking away from Ruhaan

Ruhaan: Simran plzz do not leave me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...SIMRANNNNNNNNNNN

Ruhaan gets up.. and sees Simran is still unconscious on the bed.. he is greatful that it only was a dream.. Nothing else... he is all restless.. and goes out fo the room to et water.. when SC comes there
Chachi: Ruhaan kya hua.. tum iis waqt yahan ..
Ruhaan: woh water..

Chachi: ohh ok.. waisay if u need help plzz let me know..

Ruhaan nods with his head.. and leaves..

Chachi standing there and start smiling

Some where fare away from the city.. a car stops near lonely place..
The doc. Comes out of the car..

And goes near a person..
Doc: look I dint what u told me to do.. plzz now let go my children..
no one answers him..
Doc: plzz I beg u (doc. falls on his knees)

The person turned around.. and its no other then Suhana ..

Suhana: relax doc.. ur children are very much save with me.. don't worry I wont do anything to them.. I promise u that.. jab tak mera maqsad kamyaab nahin hota.. u will not be able to see ur kids..

Doc: plzz no .. I will leave this city but don't harm by kids.. I beg u

Suhana: thek hai thek hai.. I will call u..

The doc leaves.
Suhana: (thinking) I should have shot Simran in her head not just in her stomach.. waisay bhi.. yeh game is not bad at all..
abb I will play such a game that Ruhaan will have to come to me leaving Simran in this state..

She laughs loud..

Oberoi house in RuhSimi's room next morning

The nurse is .. There in the room … giving Simran.. Injection.. Ruhaan comes in the room.. and the nurse leave.. by asking if she can leave a little early today as her child is unwell..

Ruhaan give her the permission.. he goes near the bed.. and holds simran's hand

Ruhaan: Simran .. I miss u a lot.. phir jaldi wapas aao..

He kisses her hand. And tries to leave for the office. But wasn't able to as.. he wanted to spend some time with Simran.. but leaved when his mother came…and told him he shouldnt worry more.. God will surely help them..

He leaves.. the time he steps out fo the room, Simran start moving her hand..

END!!!

To be continued…

it was really good san u should be a scrip writer i love your fan fic so much thnx yaara can't wait fot the next part. 😛

yeah nausheenfan gr8 job..like ur fanfic very much..so when is the next part coming...can't wait... and when i have a fanfic can i also post it here..? u don't mind right..

well not in my fan fic.. topic..
😛

but yeah u can make a new topic.. coz it will mix up.. and it will be difficult to see whom has written what

yeah i meant as a new topic... 😃

Good Job San.... 👏
Really G8 Fanfic... 😉
When is the next part coming??Can't wait to read it...

sure u can go on.. well u can also start from where rusimi got shot

Originally posted by: RuhaanSimifan

yeah i meant as a new topic... 😃

wow thanx 4 liking.. the next part will be up by tonight or early 2morrow

Recap.
Suhana convinced the doc. To make false report of Simran never can conceive. At home Simran start showing good signs of improving.

Aab agey

part 4

in ruhsimi room..

Simran start showing.. some signs of improving.. she is getting flashes from the time they got shot.. she sees ruhaan getting shot. And even herself.. but tis not really clear..

Simran is kinda shacking,, when the nurse enters… she rushes out..and tells the family that Simran is regaining conscious…ru's mother rushes up.. and .. into RuhSimi's room.. simra is still shacking.. ru's mother ask them to call the doc.

Simran open her eyes and looks around ..

Ru's mother: Simran kaissi ho..

She looks surpised at her.. and ask main theek hoon aap.???

Ru's mother is shocked..
Simran: aap saab kaun ho.. aur main yahan.. Kaissay?? Aur chachi chachu .. bua sab kahan hain..?

Ru's mother: woh ate hoon ghe..

Ru's mother had called their own family doc.. as they couldn't Get the doc. Who attended RuhSimi

The doc.. is confused.. but he tells them.. getting shock and hitting the ground .. must have made her go to her past.. as she were talking about her chachu who is no more..

Ru's father: doc.. but she dotn even remembers us..
doc: yes it could be. Maybe she went to the tiem when she early were .. maybe she have hurt her head before..

Arpita had called Simi's chachi and Bua..

Simran's chachi tells them that before she got married to Ruhaan she had an car accident where she then had hurt her head…

Ru's mother: does it mean she has gone back to that time..as she also were asking for her chachu..
Bua: parjayi ji.. ab hum kya karein ghe.. bhaiya ji to.. ab humare saath nahin..

Ruhaan comes running .. as Abhishek called him.

Ruhaan: maa Simran .. woh.. theek..

Ru's mother: ruhaan she is fine.. but she lost her memory.. She has got amnesia

Ruhaan is shocked..

Later on.. Simran is with her chachi.. crying and saying sorry to her.. when Ruhaan comes in..

Simran sees him.

Simran: chachi.. who is this..

Ruhaan just stares at her.. chachi dont know what she should tells her..

Simran's chachi: Simran he .. he is..
Ru's mother: he is the one who saved u…

both chachi and Ruhaan looks at her..

Ru's mother: yes Simran.. She bought u in our house.. Coz otherwise it would have been a police case.. if u were taken to the hospital..

Simran: that's ok.. but chachi chachu kahan hai.. woh nzaar nahin a rehey.. main apke saath ghar chalti hoon.. I will talk to him

she gets up.. but is a little weak and couldn't do it..

Chachi told her to be lying on the bed, as she is not able to walk yet. but Simran insist to go .. but chachi made her be here.. and she ven told her that her chach is out fo town.. right now.
Ru's mother told Simi's chachi to be her right now..

Later the day.. Ru's mother goes through the stairs. Where she sees Ruhaan crying..

Ru's mother: Ruhaan ..(she put her right hand on his shoulder)

Ruhaan turn around.. and hug his mother..

Ruhaan: maa.. I thought saab kuch thek ho geya hai.. but Simran.. meri Simran mujhe pehchanti nahin hai..

Ru's mother: ruhaan.. plzz don't cry.. God listen to our prayer and Simran in conscious.. soon she will also regain her memory….

After two days.. Simran has start walking.. a little bit with help of her chachi.. Abhishek come there and says if u need anything just called out for ur Abhishek bhiya.. ok..

She said yes she will..

Later then day.. she was coming down her self.. she was wearing a light yellow color salwar kameez ..and looking so beautiful .. she suddenly slips from there.. and were about to fall… in the middle of the stairs .. when Ruhaan Catches her.. Simran closes her eyes.. where Ruhaan keep staring/looking at her .. with a small smile on his face.. Simran slowly open her eyes.. and sees Ruhaan .. and both had eyes lock… both are lost in few mint. Till Abhishek comes..

Abhishek: hkkkkkmm..

Both comes back from the lost world..

Simran: I m I .. I .. i m sorry.. I mean thanx..
Ruhaan: no its ok

Simran leaves..
Ruhaan: Simran …(she looks back) careful.

Abhishek comes up.. where Ruhaan is standing. he looks at Ruhaan.. And smiles..
Ruhaan: bhaiya.. what happened..
Abhishek: kuch nahin.. juts smiling.. for u.. Simran even though she has lost her memory.. but she is might be the same.. try ur luck..

He leaves.. and Ruhaan is wondering.. what his brother just said.. but then realized.. what eh meant..

To be continued….