Do Jism,Ek Jaan!- Very Imp Note on pg22!

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Super.woman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

hey tht was gr8 .................i mean really GRRRREEAAATTTTTTTTTTTT......wonderful 👏 👏 👏 continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa

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Iram

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

ur ff is gr8. plz continue soon. will be waiting 4 the next part😳

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mubina

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

SOO CUTE AWW PLZZZ DO CARRY ON UR DOIN GREAT JOB 😎 👏

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Riddhima gupta

@*riddhima*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

sorry,this is a short part...but i will post the next part(date 😳 😳 ) today evening or may be tomorrow..!njoy..! 😉

SCENE-11

Riddhima's house...!!!

Riddhima hunting through her cupboard...'
Riddhima "di...main pehnu kya?"
Anjali "kuch bhi pehen lo"
Riddhima "par di..."
Anjali "arre haan...aaj to tumhari pehli date hai"
Riddhima "di..."
Anjali "kuch Armaan ki pasand ka pehen lo"
Riddhima "par kya?"
Anjali "uska favourite colour kya hai??"
Riddhima "RED"
Anjali "hmmm...Red-colour of love"
Riddhima "di...aap dress chuno"
Anjali "ok...(she picks up a nice red suit)ye lo"
Riddhima "nice choice di...thanks"
Anjali "ab jao...loverboy intezaar mein kahin mar naa jaye"
Riddhima "di aap bhi na"
She goes and changes...She was looking owesome...
Anjali "ohho...loverboy kahin tumhe dekh kar behosh(faint) na ho jaye"
Riddhima blushes and wears her earings and a pretty red locket...
She was looking Simple and Sweet...Her phone rings,but Anjali picks it up...
Armaan "hi jaan...jaldi aao...i'm waiting...tumhe 1 ghante se dekha nahi hai,tumhe pata hai na I LOVE U so much ki tumhe dekhe bina jee nahi sakta"
(he said this without realising who was on the line)
Anjali laughing "ohho,to tum meri behen se itna pyaar karte ho"
Armaan was shocked!!!
Riddhima was doing her make-up...listening this she turns and takes the phone from Anjali's hand...
Riddhima "hello,Armaan??"
Armaan "haan,jo maine kaha vo Anjali ne sun liya?"
Riddhima "i'll ask...u hold on"
Riddhima "di,Armaan ne jo bhi kaha vo aapne sun liya?"
Anjali "haan,aur ye bhi pata chal gaya ki vo tumse kitna pyaar karta hai"
Riddhima blushes and asks "kya kaha tha usne"
Anjali tells her that what he said and Riddhima blushes...
Riddhima on the phone "hello,di ne sun liya tha"
Armaan "oh!!!...accha ab tum niche aa jao"
Riddhima "ok...bas aayi"(cuts the phone)
Anjali "jao jao...loverboy mar jayega"
Riddhima "di...aap bhi naa"...(she leaves)

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Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago

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tvshowfan14

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

it was really cute but really small .. plz cont soon ..

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Jia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

hey that was really cute and armaan saying all this to anjali was simply hilarous. 😆 😆 😆 u know now i cant wait to read abt their first date. 😳 😳
pls cont sooooooooon

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Super.woman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

hey tht was short but very cute ...now v can wait cuz u gave us a sweet part
luv ur ff
ishiqa

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Kiara

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

aww...dat was chooo chweet!!
np abt da part...upd8 wen ur free...bt next tyme make it looong 😉 ...jk 😆
lv ur ff

Marisha

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Mia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

very cute part ya....really liked it!!! 😉 😉

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Riddhima gupta

@*riddhima*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#30

sorry,sorry..i know u r waiting for the date..but i'll post half of the date just now and the other half later...!...

SCENE-12

Near Armaan's car..........

Armaan "kab aaogi Riddhima?"
Riddhima comes "tumne bulaya aur main aa gayi"
Armaan was just staring Riddhima...She was looking so pretty...Armaan was staring Riddhima continuously...Riddhima was feeling shy bcoz of Armaan's
intense gaze...Riddhima broked the silence and said "Armaan...Armaan"(waves her hand in front of his face)
Armaan came into the real world and said "Riddhima,u r looking very very beautiful"
Riddhima blushes...!..."thanks,ab chale"
Armaan "haan..."...he opens the gate of his car for Riddhima...
Riddhima sits in...Armaan also sits...
Armaan was concentrating more on Riddhima than on driving and Riddhima was blushing by the way Armaan was staring her...
Riddhima "Armaan...samne dekho"
Armaan "agar tum har roj itni khubsurat lagogi to mera to accident ho jayega"
Riddhima "don't worry...tum sanjivani ke patient ban jaana"
Armaan "main patient to ban jaunga agar tum meri doctor banogi"
Riddhima laughs and says "by the way,hum kahan jaa rahe hai?"
Armaan "dekhti jao"
.................they reach a place far from the noise and pollution of cities......
Riddhima"Armaan,hum kahan hai?"
Armaan "hum jahan bhi hai sath hai"
Armaan gets down from his car...opens the car gate for Riddhima..
Armaan offers a hand and says "chale?"...Riddhima nodds...They walk down to a building and enter the place...
Now they were standing in a room beautifully decorated with candles all over...There was a table for two in the center of the room...There was a soft romantic music going on in the background...She was really happy with the beautiful setup done by Armaan just for her...
Riddhima "Armaan,tum ne ye sab mere liye liya?"
Armaan "koi shak?...sirf apni Riddhima ke liye kiya"
Riddhima "Armaan,I LOVE U" She hugs him...
Armaan "I LOVE U 2"...he holds her...
After a minute...
Armaan "gate pe hi rehenge ya andar chalne ka bhi iraada hai"
Riddhima laughs and they walk in...
They both go near the table...
Armaan "sit..."(takes out the chair for her)
Riddhima sits...
They both started to talk...
Riddhima "Armaan,can i ask u something if u don't mind?"
Armaan "ya sure"
Riddhima "pakka...bura to nahi manoge?"
Armaan "nahi"(keeps his hand on Riddhima's hand which is on the table)
Riddhima "Armaan,aaj tak tumne apni fanily ke baare mein nahi bataya,main jaana chahti thi ki tumhari family mein kaun-kaun hai...i'm sorry if i'm getting personal"
Armaan "Riddhima....don't worry..ab kabhi na kabhi tum meri family ka hissa to banogi naa..to it's no harm in asking"
Riddhima smiles...
Armaan "meri family mein meri MOM , SWAPNIL BHAIYA , unki wife TANVI yani meri BHABHI jinke main bahut close hun,mom se bhi jyaada close...aur bhaiya-bhabhi ka beta ADITYA.,meri behen SHIFALI aur mere DAD aur ....."
Riddhima "aur kaun?"
Armaan "aur TUM meri hone wali wife...MRS.RIDDHIMA ARMAAN MALLIK..."
Riddhima blushes!!!
Armaan "to MRS.RIDDHIMA ARMAAN MALLIK mere saath dance karengi"(offers his hand)
Riddhima puts his hand over his hand ...
They move over to the dance floor...They danced on the slow romantic music going on in the background..
Riddhima's one hand was in Armaan's hand and the other on Armaan's shoulder...
Armaan's one hand was in Riddhima's hand and the other was on Riddhima's waist...
Armaan made her go round and after that Armaan placed his both hands on Riddhima's waist and Riddhima's both hands were around Armaan' neck!!

Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago