Do Jism,Ek Jaan!- Very Imp Note on pg22!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😳!~~Do Jism Ek Jaan~~!😳

guys..i have read many fanfics on this forum and i have liked all of them....now i am going to start a new fanfic which will have some twists and turns but it will have a happy ending for sure....it will be basically a Armaan-Riddhima fanfic...but it will have others also....i'm posting the 1st part today itself and u all plzz tell me whether i should continue or not...!!!

MY FANFIC:::---

I will start my fanfic from the scene where Riddhima said"I love u" to armaan and they hugged...!!

SCENE-1

Armaan hugging Riddhima...--

Armaan & Riddhima separate from the passionate hug and Armaan sees Riddhima who was blushing.!.Armaan was staring Riddhima..!
Riddhima"Armaan,aise mat dekho"
Armaan"Kyun?"
Riddhima"a....vo mujhe sh..."
Armaan"sharam aati"
Riddhima nods..
Armaan"Mujhse kya sharmana,main to ab tumhara apna hun"
Riddhima blushes even more...
Armaan"Tumhe pata hai..tum sharmate hue aur khubsurat lagti ho"
Riddhima"accha?..."
Armaan"haan..vishvas nahi hota to sheesha dekh lo"
Armaan takes Riddhima to the corner of that room where a mirror was fixed..
Armaan was standing at the back of Riddhima and Riddhima was looking in the mirror.....Armaan's both arms were around Riddhima's waist...
She looked into the mirror and she saw Armaan looking at Riddhima and smiling...He was gazing so intensly that it made Riddhima blush...!
Armaan"Dekha?"
Riddhima"hmm..."
Armaan"I LOVE U SOOOOOOOOOO... MUCH...!!!"
Riddhima blushes ...
Armaan comes in front of Riddhima..and lifts her face and kisses her on her cheek..!Riddhima smiles and looks down..
Just then Atul comes into the room....
Atul"Hi!!!"
Riddhima"h..h...hi!"
Armaan(slowly to riddhima)"Isko bhi abhi hi aana tha...."
Riddhima(fake anger)"Armaan.."
Atul"so...what were u doing?"
Riddhima"..a....a..."
Armaan"meri dressing"
Atul"to ho gayi?"
Armaan"NAHI!!"
Atul"theek hai..main jaa raha hun..chilata kyun hai"
Riddhima smiling..!..Atul goes...
Armaan"Thank god! ye gaya...ab..."(holds her waist)
Riddhima(removes his hands from her waist)"..tumhari dressing pehle ..phir kuch aur"
Armaan"as u say"
Riddhima"chalo"...
She does all the dressing and then closes his shirt buttons(blushing)...Armaan was just smiling...She turns to go but Armaan holds her hand...She closes her
eyes...Armaan turns her round such that she is facing Armaan and his hands are around her waist...Armaan kisses her on her forehead and then on her
cheek......Riddhima's pager started ringing...
Armaan"offo...i hate this pager."
Riddhima"bye...."
Armaan(sadly)"bye".......

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At Riddhima's house,in the night!!---

Riddhima was thinking about Armaan...She was missing him....
Just then she got a message from Armaan which said "hi!...missing me?.."
Riddhima replied "i will tell u after u will tell me how much u r missing me?"
Armaan replied "main to tumhe itna miss kar raha hun ki tumhare ghar aa gaya hun"
After reading the message Riddhima was shocked...
Riddhima goes out,in her balcony and sees Armaan climbing the pipe..!
Riddhima "tum..tum..yahan kya kar rahe ho?"
Armaan "Sanjivani mein to mujhe time nahi deti to phir yahin sahi"
Riddhima "Armaan...par...ghar par di,papa,nani sab hai"
Armaan "to...i don't care"(he holds her by her waist)
Riddhima "Armaan...(she hears anjali's voice)...di aa rahi hai"
Armaan "so...i don't care"
Riddhima "but i do...plz...meri khatir"
Armaan "tumhare khatir...accha main abhi cchup(hide) jata hun...par..."
Riddhima "par kya?...jaldi bolo"
Armaan "par anji ke sone ke baad.....u know(being mischeivious)..."
Riddhima "Armaan ...u r just...leave it..ab jao cchupo(hide)"
Armaan hides behind the balcony door...and just then anjali comes in...
Anjali "Riddhima,bahar kya kar rahi ho..."
Riddhima "k...k...kuch nahi"
Anjali "Riddhima,main kal lonavala jaa rahi hun,do din ke liye..."
Riddhima "o...ok...di"
Anjali "aao so jao"
Riddhima "di aap so jao...main thodi der mein soti hun"
Anjali "fine...gud night"
Riddhima "gud night"
Anjali sleeps...and Riddhima goes in the balcony...
Riddhima sees Armaan sitting down on the floor...
She sits besides him...He holds her hand and looks into her eyes...!
He gives her a red rose !...She accepts it...!
He kisses her on her cheek...She blushes...!
Then they talk for a while...And then Armaan lies on Riddhima's lap and she plays with his hair...
Then they slept like this(i thought of a new style of sleeping)...Riddhima suddenly wakes at 2am...
Riddhima sees Armaan sleeping like a baby...!She kisses him on his cheek...Armaan smiles(he was awake)...
Riddhima "Armaan...get up..tumhe ghar nahi jaana"
Armaan "nahi..."(like a baby...he is still in her lap)
Riddhima "Armaan...utho aur jao jaldi"
Armaan "ok...ok"...
They both stand up...
Riddhima "bye"
Armaan "bye"(comes close to her and kisses her on her cheek)..
Armaan climbs down the pipe and Riddhima sees him going...Before sitting into his car...He turned and gives a flying kiss to Riddhima...
Riddhima waves her hand(saying bye)...Armaan does the same...

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😉...do post comments whether it is gud or bad..!

Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago

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Asthuox thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwh sooooo coooote ... ii lyk it alot .. do continue 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi there 😊 beautifully written 👏 and described. pls do continue dear 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it ws very well written!!!
plz cont. soon...i liek ur ff so far 👏 👏 👏

Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the beautiful comments...i'm posting the next part just now 😉
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SCENE-3

In the morning at Riddhima's house....!

Riddhima gets up thinking about Armaan...Anjali had already left for Sanjivani as she has to go lanavala direct from Sanjivani...
She goes for a bath...She hears her phone ringing...She goes out wearing a towel...She picks the phone smiling(it was Armaan)...
Riddhima "hello"
Armaan "hi,jaan"
Riddhima "kyun phone kiya?"
Armaan "Aise hi"
Riddhima "kya??..pata hai main kitni jaldi-jaldi naha(bath) ke nikli"
Armaan "naha(bath) ke nikli...matlab tumne kya pehna hai"
Riddhima "Armaan...!...!..."
Armaan "kya??? batao to sahi"
Riddhima "t...t...t...t...towel !!!"
Armaan "towel!!!....ohho...to main tumhare ghar aao??(mischeiviously)"
Riddhima "SHUT UP!!!...and bye"
Armaan(laughing) "accha suno-suno...aaj jogging ke liye aa rahi ho"
Riddhima "haan!"
Armaan "ok"
Riddhima "bye"
Armaan "bye"

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SCENE-4

Riddhima reaches the basketball court jogging...She sees Armaan alone in the basketball court...She goes inside...
Riddhima "hi!!..."
Armaan "hi"
Riddhima "aaj akele ho"
Armaan "haan,aaj bacche nahi aaye"
Riddhima "nahi aaye ya...tumne nahi bulaya unko"
Armaan "tumko sab pata kaisa chal jata hai?"
Riddhima "yahin to mera style hai"
Armaan "ok...to ek game ho jaye..."
Riddhima "no...mujhe jaana hai"
Armaan "kahan ?"
Riddhima "ghar!!!..."
Armaan "par......."
Riddhima "par-var kuch nahi...main to chali...bye"
Armaan "bye-bye"

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SCENE-5

Riddhima gets ready and goes out of her house...She sees Armaan there in his car outside...
Riddhima "Armaan,tum yahan?"
Armaan "tumhe kya lagta hai,main apni Riddhima ko akele Auto mein jaana deta"
Riddhima "Thanks!!!"
Armaan "ab baitho main main itni der se intezaar kar raha hun"
Riddhima "ok...ok..."(she sits in the car)
Armaan "chale??"
Riddhima "haan!!!"
On the way they do their lovey-dovey talks and then they reach the hospital...

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SCENE-6

In the hospital...-locker room...

Atul "yaar,main to kal raat chain se so hi paya,apni landlady ki vajah se"
Armaan "main to kal bahut acche se soya(seeing Riddhima who is smiling)"
Rahul "jo dusro ki neend kharaab karta hai,use to chain ki neend aayegi hi"
Armaan "Rahul,tu..."(Riddhima holds his hand,therfore he stops)
Muskaan "chod Armaan,faltu logo se ladte nahi"
Sapna enters and says "hi!! guys"
Riddhima "Sapna,bahut khush lag rahi ho...kya baat hai??"
Sapna "suno gi to vishvas nahi karogi"
Atul "batao to sahi"
Sapna "meri shaadi tai ho gayi hai"
all "WHAT??"
Riddhima "really?"
Sapna "haan yaar"
Armaan "kiske sath"
Sapna "tumhare dost Amit se sath"
Armaan "kya?"
Sapna "haan..."
Muskaan "kab hai teri shaadi"
Sapna "agle hafte(next week)..."
Rahul "wow yaar"
Sapna "aur haan...kal meri sagai(engagement) bhi hai...aur tum sab invited bhi ho"
Atul "cool..."
Sapna "ok...guys...main chalti hun...bye"
all "bye"
Atul's pager rings so he also goes...
Riddhima "Sapna ki shaadi mein bahut mazza aayega"
Armaan(slowly to Riddhima) "par dekhna,hamari shaadi mein jyada mazza aayega"
Riddhima(slowly & blushing) "Armaan..."
Muskaan "yaar,mujhe to shaadi mein bada mazza aata hai"
Rahul "tujhe to kaam ke elava har chiz mein mazza aata hai"
Muskaan "tu...tu...faltu mein bad-bad mat kiya kar...samjhe"
Armaan "ab ladai mat shuru karo"
Muskaan "tu kehta ho to nahi ladti"
Riddhima "main jaa rahi hun...bye"
Armaan "main bhi chalta hun"
Muskaan "ruk Armaan...mujhe bhi le chal...mujhe nahi rehna is langoor ke sath"
Rahul "haan,haan...tere sath rehna hi kaun chahta hai?"

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SCENE-7

Riddhima was walking through the corridor...Armaan comes and pulls her into the stairs(lovers point)!...
He holds her from her waist and his other hand is on Riddhima's hand...
Riddhima is getting nervous whereas Armaan is quite lost in her beauty...

Riddhima "A...Ar...Armaan...ye tum kya kar rahe ho"
Armaan says nothing and just blows into her hair...
Riddhima "Armaan..."
Armaan's nose is now touching her cheek...Riddhima is now having butterflies in her stomach...
Armaan "I LOVE U"
Riddhima " i know that"
Armaan "ye kaisi reply hai...I love u ke badle i love u hi kehte hai"
Riddhima "ok...I LOVE U..."
Armaan "that's like my Riddhima,sorry BASKET"
Riddhima blushes...
Armaan comes very close to her...They could hear each other's heartbeat...
Armaan gently kisses her on her cheek...Riddhima blushes...Armaan was advancing towards her lips but then Riddhima's pager started ringing...
Riddhima "Armaan,hatho(move) mera pager baj raha hai"
Armaan "to..."
Riddhima "Armaan...jaane do...plz...plz"(she pushes him)
Armaan "accha baba...jao"
Riddhima "BYE"(blushing...and leaves)

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Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi wow that was quick. thanks 😊
very beautifully expressed the scenes and emotions 😳 😳 .
pls do continue dear 😊 and ya whats the title dear for ur fanfic. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was really nice and beautifully expressed 👏 please do continue 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey tht was 2 gud jus read d whole thing plz continue soon.
luv ur ff
ishiqa
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey jus catched up
wiv ur ff
its really gd
update soon 👏

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