Do Jism,Ek Jaan!- Very Imp Note on pg22!

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Riddhima gupta

@*riddhima*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

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THAT DAY ANJALI ALSO RETURNED...
all in locker room
Sapna "guys,tum log kal mere sangeet mein aa rahe ho naa"
Atul "agar Anjali aayigi to main bhi aaunga"
Anjali stares him like she is going to kill him...Everybody laughs...Armaan stares Riddhima...
Sapna "guys...i'm going...abhi dr.kirti se kal ke liye leave bhi mang ni hai...phir aake baat karungi"
Riddhima "bye...best of luck!"
Sapna "bye...thanks!"
Annoucement---Dr.Rahul,Dr.Muskaan,D.Anjali,Dr.Atul report to Dr.Kirti...!!
All of them leave leaving Riddhima & Armaan alone in the locker room...!
Armaan lovingly looks at Riddhima and she blushes...
Riddhima "aise kya dekh rahe ho"
Armaan "apni Riddhima ko dekh raha hun"
Riddhima blushes...
Armaan comes near her...(she is facing her locker) and holds her from behind...!
Riddhima "Armaan chodo.."
Armaan "kyun?"
Riddhima "kyunki maine kaha"
Armaan "nahi chodoga..."
Riddhima "Armaan...plz"
Armaan "ok...par ek shart hai"
Riddhima "shart???..."(she turns such that she is facing Armaan and he is still holding her from her waist)
Armaan "haan...tum mujhe I LOVE U bolo...yahan aur abhi"
Riddhima "...I LOVE U..."(blushing)
Armaan "I LOVE U 2"
Armaan hugs her titely...She was blushing in his arms...Armaan was going to kiss on her cheek,suddenly...
Voice "Ahem...Ahem...Ahem"
Armaan & Riddhima turn and see all the other interns(Atul,Anjali,Rahul,Muskaan,Sapna) standing at the gate of the locker room...
Armaan leaves her waist and they both were standing there embarresed...Anjali moves foward and stands besides Riddhima...
Anjali "ye sab..."(to Riddhima)
Riddhima "wo...actually..."
Armaan "Anji...tum sab ne jo dekha wo sach tha"
Sapna "ohho...so u both r in LOVE with each other"
Armaan "h...haan"(Riddhima blushes)
Muskaan "oye hero,ye sab kab hua"
Rahul(i'm making Rahul a better person) "pyar permission leke thodi na aata hai...samjhi"
Muskaan "Tu to chup rah..."
Atul "yaar,abhi mat lado...we r discussing about Armaan & Riddhima"
Anjali "Right!!!...so tell me the whole thing"
Riddhima "di...wo..."(all the pagers started ringing)
Anjali "we'll talk about this later"
Armaan "yeah..."
Anjali moves foward with Riddhima and all were following...
Anjali "Ridz...u both love each other?"
Riddhima "ya..."
Anjali "r u sure?...matlab...after that bet?"
Riddhima "di...don't worry...i trust him"
Anjali "then its fine...i am very happy for u both"
Riddhima "thanks di..."(she smiles,turns and looks at Armaan...Armaan smiles back)
While talking they all reached the nurse station...Dr.Kirti was waiting there...
Dr.Kirti "interns...maine aap ko sirf ye batane ke liye bulaya hai Dr.Shashank aap logon ko kal ke liye chutti dene ke liye taiyar(ready) hai"
All "thank u Dr.Kirti"
Dr.Kirti "now u all can go...Dr.Armaan aap rukiye...i have to talk about something important"(remember he is the monitor)
Dr.Kirti talks with Armaan and then he leaves...

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SCENE-9

All again locker room...after duty-8:00pm
Atul "thank god...aaj ki duty khatam to hui"
Sapna "sach...! aaj ka din bohut tireing tha"
All were chatting about the day,duty,patients....etc...
Armaan asked Riddhima "Riddhima,aaj bahar chalogi"
Riddhima "kyun?"(acting innocent,but she knows Armaan is asking for a date)
Armaan "offo...i am asking u for a date"
Riddhima "pata hai...par kahan jana hai?"
Armaan "pata nahi...kahin bhi chal chalenge"
Riddhima "hmm..fine"
Armaan "great...so i will pick u at 9"
Riddhima "ok..."
Muskaan notices that Armaan & Riddhima r not there...She turns and sees them holding hands and standing near the lockers...
Muskaan "ye dekho...hum yahan important baatein kar rahe hai aur ye loverboy apni lovergirl ke sath pyari-pyari baatein kar rahe hai"
Armaan leaves Riddhima's hand...They both stand quitely...All start laughing at seeing them soooo nervous...
Atul "don't worry yaaron...hum tum dono ko marenge nahi"
Anjali "ok...ok...ab bicharon ko pat chirao...dekho to kitne nervous hai"
Rahul "Absoutely right"
Anjali "Ridzz...agar baatein khatam ho gayi hai to chale..."
Riddhima "h...haan chaliye"
Anjali "bye guys"
All "bye"
Riddhima "bye"

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SCENE-10

Riddhima & Anjali in car...

Riddhima's phone rings...
Armaan "hi,jaan"
Riddhima "haan bolo Armaan"
Anjali "ohho...to loverboy ka phone hai"
Riddhima "di.....Armaan bolo"
Armaan "tum Anji ko bata do ki aaj tum mere sath jaa rahi ho"
Riddhima "hmmmmm...ok...main di se baat kar lungi"
Armaan "bye...love u"
Riddhima "bye"
Anjali "to batao mujhse kya baat karni hai"
Riddhima "di...main aur Armaan aaj bahar..."
Anjali "tumhe yahin kehna hai na ki tum dono date par jaa rahe ho"
Riddhima "h...haan"
Anjali "to isme problem kya hai"
Riddhima "di...papa"
Anjali "Hmmmmm...main unse keh dungi ki tum hospital mein ho"
Riddhima "par...jhoot?"
Anjali "ab pyaar kiya hai to jhoot bolna to sikhna parega"
Riddhima laughs+blushes...

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Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago

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amandeep

@jyoti1408

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

hey its grt.....plz cont soon 👏

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tvshowfan14

@tvshowfan14

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

it was really cool .. rockin' .. rahul and sweet ?? dats new .. lol .. neways , it was superb ..

keep rockin'
--Tia--

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Riddhima gupta

@*riddhima*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: lrl_fan14
it was really cool .. rockin' .. rahul and sweet ?? dats new .. lol .. neways , it was superb ..

keep rockin'
--Tia--

thanks tia...i know its quite unpredictable of rahul...but i want him to create any misunderstandings between ARMAAN😳😳 & RIDDHIMA😳😳

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

@riddhima...Good going.Liked it.Abb twist ke liye wait kar rahee huun.Coz alll the interns know,and they seem very positive.
So villan kaun hai???? 😉 😉 😆

ASh.

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Riddhima gupta

@*riddhima*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ashvez
@riddhima...Good going.Liked it.Abb twist ke liye wait kar rahee huun.Coz alll the interns know,and they seem very positive.
So villan kaun hai???? 😉 😉 😆

ASh.

i'll surely bring a twist and a villian too...just keep reading to know!!!😉

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Pari

@pari0706

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

hmm a villan too i'll wait for that twist now 😛

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Jia

@jia..

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

hey riddhima,
that was the cutest ff i ever read. 👏 how i wish i cud see all this in DMG 😍
hmmmmmmm.... so rahool too is positive huh.so u r bringing a villan to. well just dont seperate AR like for really long and continue soon.

Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago

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Riddhima gupta

@*riddhima*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: jia..
hey riddhima,
that was the cutest ff i ever read. 👏 how i wish i cud see all this in DMG 😍
hmmmmmmm.... so rahool too is positive huh.so u r bringing a villan to. well just dont seperate AR like for really long and continue soon.

i will never separate AR ...this would be a ff with a happy ending...but it ill surely have twists and turns!!😉