Do Jism,Ek Jaan!- Very Imp Note on pg22!

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Kiara

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

awww...dat was a really nyc scene...v.romantik n well written!
👏 👏 👏
do cont. asap!!

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Kanzy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

armaan cares for her sooo much! really nce prt! contd soon! 😃

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Heena

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

Very nice. 😊
I Love ur FF. Plz Cont.

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Robin

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

awww very sweet! i really like your ff, please continue sooon!

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swetha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

just caught up with all the part.
it was sweet. cant wait to read more.
please cont soon.

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Super.woman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

ht was gr8 plz continue soon.
luv ur ff
ishiqa

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Swancy Cherry xx

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

cotninue plz i just adore it
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mahru

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

heay
jus read ur ff its jus awesome yaar,2gud,2sweet,2cute cant wait 4 da next part plzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont super soooooooooon 😆
oh haan n plz if u could pm me on ur next update
luv ya n tak care
mahru 😃

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Zahra

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Posted: 17 years ago

#49

Very nice.
I Love ur FF. Plz Cont.

luv
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Riddhima gupta

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Posted: 17 years ago

#50

NOTE--in dmg...sapna has left sanjivni after her marriage but i'll not let her go in my fanfic...she'll work in sanjivani even after her marriage...

SCENE-13

In the morning...At Sanjivani...(the day of Sapna's sangeet & mehndi)
LOCKER ROOM--
Atul "aaj mere yaar ki shaadi hai..ho..aaj mere yaar ki shaadi hai"
Armaan "Champ! aaj hamare yaar ki shaadi nahi sangeet aur mehndi hai"
Atul "arre yaar,chalta hai"
Anjali & Riddhima enter ...
Riddhima "hi!"
Atul,Rahul,Muskaan"hi!!"
Riddhima walks till her locker...Armaan slowly "hi!! jaan"
Riddhima smiles "hi!"
Anjali "guys,tum log kya baat kar rahe the?"
Rahul "kuch nahi,we were discussing about sapna's sangeet"
Muskaan "haan yaar...kitna mazza aayega...main to kuch mahino se kisi shaadi mein gayi hi nahi ,aaj jee bhar kar maza karungi"
Rahul was going to say something but all their pagers started ringing...They all report to dr.kirti...
DR.Kirti "Interns,aaj aap sab apne ruitine cases handle karenge"
All "yes mam"
Dr.Kirti "Dr.Atul aap Dr.sapna ke patients handle karenge as she is on a leave"
Atul "yes maam"
Dr.Kirti "now back to work..."

SCENE-14

Rahul with Muskaan treating their patient(the girl who had some problem in her hair)..!
Muskaan "aap ab theek ho chuki hai..aap aaj shaam ko apne ghar jaa sakti hai"
Patient "thank u so much,doctor"
Rahul "ok...hum abhi aap ke discharge papers late hai"
Muskaan "arre tu na jaa nahi to discharge papers ke bajaye koi aur papers leta aayega"
Rahul "jo bhi launga kam se kam koi kaam to karunga ,tumhari tarah sirf gappe nahi marta main"
Muskaan "tu jaa yahan se,mera mood naa kharab kar"
Rahul "vaise bhi tujh mein hai kya kharab karne ko,sab kuch to pehle se kharab hai"
Muskaan "tu jaa yahan se"
Rahul "jata hun ,vaise bhi tere sath reh ke kaun apna time barbaad karega"
They both leave in opposite directions...!!

SCENE-15

Armaan & Riddhima treating Gappu...!
Armaan "Gappu,tu phikar mat kar...tu do-tin din mein ekdam thik ho jayega"
Gappu "Sach Armaan bhaiya?"
Armaan "ekdam sach"
Armaan stands beside Riddhima and holds her hand...She struggles to get her hand out of Armaan's grip as Gappu was watching them...
Riddhima "Armaan,chodo naa"'(slowly)
Armaan "nahi choduga "
Riddhima "Armaan...plz.."
Armaan "no way!!"
Suddenly Dr.Kirti comes from behind and sees them holding hands..She smiles and then goes to them...
Dr.Kirti "Dr.Armaan ..."(Armaan leaves Riddhima's hands and both become nervous)
Riddhima "Xcuse me ,mam"(she leaves)
Armaan "y...y....yes Dr.Kirti "
Dr.Kirti "aap aaj Dr.Shubhanker ko ek surgery mein assist karenge..."
Armaan "yes mam"
She goes...!
Armaan "thank god! ye gayi"
Gappu "ye kya ho raha tha?"
Armaan "kuch bhi to nahi"
Gappu "kuch to chal raha hai aapke aur Riddhima didi ke beech mein"
Armaan "chup,aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...tu soo(sleep) ja"
And he leaves.....

SCENE-16

All interns in the canteen.>>>>
Atul "Anjali,tum aaj kaun sa colou pehnogi?"
Anjali "kyun?..."
Atul "taki main bhi vohi colour pehnu"
Anjali "aur vo kyun?"
Atul "log kehte hai agar matching kapde pehente hai to pyar saccha hota hai"
Anjali "kya??????"(everybody giggles)
Atul "kuch nahi"
Armaan "tum kya colour pehnogi?"(slowly they r talking)
Riddhima "tum kya karoge jaan kar?"
Armaan "jo Atul ne kaha"
Riddhima "Armaan,lets test our love...if we wear same colour our love is true otherwise also its true...but i think we'll wear same colours"
Armaan "hmm....ok"
Muskaan "main to aaj khub nachungi"
Rahul "dhyaan rakhna kahin koi tera dance dekh ke behosh naa ho jaye"
Muskaan "pehli baat main itna bura nahi nachti aur dusri baat agar koi behosh ho bhi gaya to hum sab doctors hai naa"
Armaan "ekdam sahi Muskaan"
Rahul makes a face and sees the other side...!

SCENE-17

All the duties of the interns are over and now they are going to sapna's house for the sangeet & mehendi....
Armaan & Atul r waiting for Anjali & Riddhima while Rahul is busy dancing...
Armaan "Riddhima,tum kab aaogi??"
Riddhima from the back "tumne bulaya aur main aa gayi"
Armaan looks at Riddhima ...She was looking gorgeous in a Dark Red lehnga...Armaan was wearing the same kurta-pyajama that he wore on sapna's wedding in dmg...
Riddhima blushes at the way Armaan was looking....!
Riddhima "Armaan......aise mat dekho"
Armaan "ab tum itni sundar lagogi to main dekhunga nahi to aur kya karunga"
Riddhima smiles & blushes..
Armaan "dekho hamara pyar ekdam sachcha hai...we both r wearing the same colour"
Riddhima nodds....
Atul "ahem....ahem...agar aap ka romantic scene khatam ho gaya hai to Riddhima kya mujhe bataogi ki Anjali kahan hai?"
Riddhima "wo...di bas aati hongi"
Atul "hm...ok"
Anjali enters ....(Atul & Anjali are wearing peach coloured dress)
Atul stares at her and she turns to go so he followed her...
Armaan & Riddhima laugh and just then Muskaan enters in a gorgeous black lehnga...
Rahul stops dancing and stares at her...Muskaan feels uncomfortable that Rahul is staring at her...
Rahul "tu...tu to aaj achhi lag rahi hai"
Muskaan "tu bhi aaj kaafi accha lag raha hai"
They both smile and walk in while Armaan & Riddhima looked shocked that Rahul & Muskaan didn't had a fight..
Riddhima "ye inhe kya ho gaya?"
Armaan "vahi jo hame hua"
Riddhima "kya?...ye dono aur pyaar"
Armaan "mujhe to aisa hi lagta hai....accha chalo ander chale"
And they both also walk in...............................................

Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago