Do Jism,Ek Jaan!- Very Imp Note on pg22! - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
awesome i waiting for next scene do continue 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
awesome part *riddhima* .. do continue soon ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
ooo...nyc scene...u stoppd in da middle!!! 😭 😭
plz cont. soon...i luv ur ff!! 👏 👏

Luv,
Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
pls dont stop in middle like this 😭 .
waitin for the next scene 😳 😳
continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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mind blowing! really ggd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so sweet n romantic! contd soon! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
tht was 2 gud.......plz conitnue soon......
luv ur ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i'm posting the new part in 10 minutes...!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part-6

Riddhima now layed her head on Armaan's chest...Armaan kissed her hair...
They danced slowly till Armaan realised that he is feeling hungry..
Armaan "Riddhima..."(slowly)
Armaan "Riddhima..."(little louder)
Riddhima straightens her head "kya hua?"
Armaan "wo....bhook lagi hai"(he made a cute face)
Riddhima laughs seeing his face.."to chalo"
Armaan & Riddhima walk to the table and sit down...
Armaan feeds Riddhima and She feeds him...
After the dinner...
Armaan "mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hai"
Riddhima "kya?"
Armaan "chalo to sahi"
Armaan took her to the back of the place..There was a bench ...and if u look down the balcony u could see a beautiful lake...
Riddhima "wow! kitna khubsurat hai"(looking at the lake which was looking very beautiful in the bright moonlight)
Armaan "par tumse zyada nahi"(looks at her face and she blushes)
They both sit down on the bench...Riddhima layed her head on Armaan's shoulder..
Armaan "mujhe tumhe kuch dena hai"
Riddhima "kya?"
Armaan takes out a box...Riddhima opens it...It had a beautiful heart shaped locket with AR carved on it...
Armaan "sirf tumhare liye"
Riddhima "tum hi pehna do"
Armaan makes Riddhima wear it...
Now they facing each other...Riddhima's eyes were closed as she was soooo happy that she thought that she will cry any moment and she didn't wanted to cry as this would ruin the moment...
She never knew that Armaan loved her soo much...
Armaan kissed her on her forehead then on her eyes then her cheeks and on the place were was her locket was hanging and before he could kiss on her lips her phone started ringing...Armaan was damn angry while Riddhima was smiling after seeing Armaan's angry face..!
Riddhima picked her phone...
Riddhima "hello..di"
Anjali "Riddhima...1 bajne wale hai,papa aane wale hai...tum unke aane se pehle aa jao"
Riddhima "oh shut!..main bas aayi"
Anjali "ok...come soon..bye"
Riddhima "bye"(cuts the phone)
Riddhima "Armaan,chalo..papa aane wale hai"
Armaan "hmmmm....chalo"(this time,Armaan didn't stopped her bcoz he knows that if Riddhima doesn't reaches home on time ..everybody will get tensed)
Riddhima & Armaan walk to the car and sit inside..!
They did not talk much on their return...they reach Riddhima's house..
Riddhima "bye"
Armaan "bye"(sadly)
Riddhima suddenly gives a kiss on his cheek and left leaving Armaan confused on her sudden reaction...
While going Riddhima turns and gives a flying kiss and Armaan also kisses her back!
Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
hey.....it's grt plz cont soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
that was quite romantic 😳 😳 😳 .anjali called up at the wrong time 😆 😆 😆 hope AR are never seperated 😳 😳
pls continue soon

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